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Fan-Fic: Vaada - The Promise (Page 6)

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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
that was really
plz cont soon
i love the story Clap
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Posted: 13 August 2005 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Eshika...that was sooo sweet!! plz cont soon!! Clap
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:11pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by eshika

kyaaa huwa????? no body liked my 2nd part....??? Cry

awwwwwwww eshika, it was beautiful, i jus havent been reading fan fics lately ive been busy, it was really good i could totally view kripa, and lovely song too. now stop crying! and thats my order! LOLWink

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:13pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by eshika

Episode 3


Now the crowd is just goin crazy over Kripa!!!!!!!!!!!
    Angad is speechless … he is feeling guilty n repenting 4 wat he said 2 Kripa…..

Now Angad is stayin alone in a corner……… while kripa is surrounded all by crowds…….but kripa excuses herself 4rm da crowd n goes near Angad….

K( cryin): Angad… I'm sorry!!!! Maine stage pe jo kuch bhi kiya woh tumhe insult karne k liye ya tumhe galat sabit karne k liye nahi kiya……. tum plzzz mujhe galat mat samjna…. Mera yesa koi erada nahi tha….....

Hearing kripa's words teras roll down his eyes…..

A: nahi kripa I am sorry….. maine hi tumhe galat samjha….!!!!najane kitni baar tumhari insult ki….. aaur tum phir bhi mujhe sorry kehena aagayee….. ???? tum plzz sorry mat kaho....infact I'm really sorry kripa…. I misunderstood u…. plzz mujhe maaf kardo….. !!!!

Kripa was about 2 say something when both of them hear the announcement that the winner is Kripa Sharma 4rm Soul Music Academy!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both kripa n angad just can't control their happiness n ends up hugging each other out of excitement!!!!!!!!!!!

A: kripa u made it….. ...
Kripa is all smiling with tears in her eyes……
K: ooo Angad mujhe toh yakeen nahi ho raha…..k hum jeet gaye...

Then both of them realize that they r hugging each other n let go each other feling little uncomfortable……..

A( with tears in his eyes): congrats kripa….
K: Tks…..
Now angad was about 2 go when kripa holds his hand n pulls him back…..
K( lookin deep in his eyes): ek baat kahooo???
A: kyaa
K( tears in her eyes): mujhse dosti karoge?????
Now angad is all smiling but still has tears in his eyes…… ..
Now Angad goes closer 2 kripa… wipes off her tears n asks…
A: kyaaa kaha tumne???
K( all smiling): mujhse dosti karogee??????

Angad nods his head with tears in his eyes……
Now kripa wipes off his tears n says….
K: idioit!!!!! Mere aasu pooch k khud rorahe ho!!!!!

Now both of them just smiles n looks into each other's eyes……
A: aaba chale???? Varna tumhara prize woh kisi aaur ko dedega!!!!!

Okay gyuzz 2 B continued…
Sorry 4 the short part..
Love u all
eshika Tongue

lovely, loved the last last line idioit!!!!! Mere aasu pooch k khud rorahe ho!!!!!" too cute! Clap cont soon! Clap

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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
i liked your third part and 2nd and 1st part!!!! i read it before i just forgot to post a comment...sry Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
awwww just read the second and third part. I loved it.
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
gr8 part eshika cont soon
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
thired part was really good

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