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aare jaldi. meri baal safed(white) ho rahe hain LOL

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Episode2


Days… weeks n months passes by………….every 1 is damn Bg preparing 4 the inter college dance competition………..every 1 rushing here n there 4 their costumes… dresses.. rehearsals etc……. Finally the Dance competition day arrives…………
All the students of the Soul music Academy r nervous……

Angad ..prithvi…. N other students including kripa r cheering 4 Soul Music Academy…….when suddenly they come 2 know that the groups which were gona perform has not shown up yet…………..
Bammmmmmmmmmmm

Every 1 is shocked n worried…

P: aab kyaa hoga???
A: pata nahi…… lekin woh log perform kyaaa karne wale teh??????
K: haaan sayed koi classical music pe perform karne wale teh…
A( irritated): prithvi … ish ladki se kehdo ki yeh aapna mu band rakhe ….maine isshe nahi poocha

Kripa feels really sad but tries hard 2 smile….

P: Angad yese waqt pe bhi u r being rude…..???? aaba sorry kaho kripa se…

K: koi baat nahi prithvi… mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga….. sayed galti meri hi thi…..
Now angad feels a bit guilty 4 he had just said…….

P: aacha yeh sab chodo aaur jaldi batao ki aab kyaa karna hai………… ?????
A: aab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga……

Every 1 at the same time….
Kyaa???????????

Angad just smiles n says……..perform aaur kyaaa???? Aab mujhe hi waha jaake perform karna hoga…..

P( worriedly): lekin angad yeh classical music hai…. Tumhara rock n roll nahi…..
A: aarey janta hoon baba….. tumhe kyaa lagta hai.. main classical music nahi gaapoonga kyaa….???
P: nahi … I mean haan!!!!…( totally confused)

A:Aaery u don worry yaar…..i'll handle every thing……

Then he was about 2 go when prithvi stops him…

P: Angad…. Tum kripa ko bhi saath le jao…. Tumhe todhi support milegi…
Now kripa has a smile on her face…… But….

A( pointing at kripa): yeh gana gayeegi yeh??????????? Forget it Prithvi …. Jiska maan saaf naho.. jisko sirf doosro pe ilzaam lagana aata ho .. usse kyaaa sangeet ki kadar hogiee?????
Tears roll down Kripa's eyes while an angry angad walks away………

On the stage……..

Now Angad is there is on the stage with his guitar….. he tries 2 sing a classical raag in the tune of his guitar……. LOL

A guy 4rm the crowd: wat da hell is goin on….????
Guy 2: yeh pagal kaha se aagaya….???
Guy 3: marooo
Guy 4: marooo maroo….

Then they throw stones n tomatoes over Angad…………. But suddenly they hear the some 1 playin   violin ……. It was dark at the stage…. But as the light focuses on that person…..… we see a beautiful kripa with violin in her hands………….

Kabhi sham dhale toh mere dil main aajana……
Kabhi chaand khile toh mere dil main aajana……
   Magar aana ish tarah tum….
   K yaha se phir na jana……….
Kabhi sham dhale…….oooooo

Angad is totally speechless….. He is mesmerized by her voice….. n cannot take off his eyes 4rm Kripa……Kripa sings soo beautifully….

Tu nahi hai magar phir bhi tu saath hai…
Baat ho koi bhi teri hi baat hai…
Tu hi mere ander hai .. tu hi mere bahar hai…..
Jab se tujko jana hai
Main aapna mana hai…
    Magar aana ish tarah tum k yaha se phir ma jana………….

Prithvi smiles as he hears kripa's voice….

Raat din ki meri dil kashi tum se hai
Zindagi ki kasam … zindagi tumse hai
Tum hi mere aakhen ho suni tanha raaho main….
Chahe jitni doori hoo .. tum ho meri baho main…
Magar aana ish tarah tum k yaha se…….

Angad is really embarrassed n repenting 4 his own words…… he has tears in his eye…….

Kabhi sham dhale toh mere dil main aajana……
Kabhi chaand khile toh mere dil main aajana……
   Magar aana ish tarah tum….
   K yaha se phir na jana……….
   Kabhi sham dhale…….oooooo

Okay 2 B continued
Lots of lub
eshika

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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 12:10am | IP Logged
guyzzz nezt part is gona B updated tomorrow... Tongue

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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 12:14am | IP Logged
kyaaa huwa????? no body liked my 2nd part....??? Cry

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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 12:21am | IP Logged
i luved it poor kripa Cry Cry Cry angad was really rude but indirectly isnt he doing wat he blames kripa 4, not understanding others feeling n just blaming em for nothing. now hes gonna repent all he said n hopefully fall in love w/ kripu   Wink

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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Wow, that was really good...plz continue

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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 12:44pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by cheen2005

i luved it poor kripa Cry Cry Cry angad was really rude but indirectly isnt he doing wat he blames kripa 4, not understanding others feeling n just blaming em for nothing. now hes gonna repent all he said n hopefully fall in love w/ kripu   Wink

lolz....... i never thoght of that.... ehhe.. but it's just that he really cares 4 prithvi a lot n cannot stand if any 1 says something bad about him.... newaaz now he's gona fall 4 kripa ... aahista aahistaEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
plz cont soon eshika
that was a very good part

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