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charmedangel

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:17pm | IP Logged

Vaada –the promise

 

Okay guyzzzz here is a totally fresh n new fac fic….this 1 is gona B totally different 4rm da rest…… This story is not gona B that long like the rest of the fan fic…. I am planning 2 sum up the story within 10 espisodes….. I suggest every 1 of u to read this story….  It is a very emotional story of 3 people Angad … Kripa  N Prithvi…..it's about Frenship…. Love… caring…. Sharing…. Sacrifices N tragedy……

 

Episode 1

 

Kripa: young innocent gal…. who lives lifes 2 da fullest extent…..jokes n kids around all da times…… lovely.. bubbly… adorable gal…… A dream gal of every guy……

 

Angad: A very young dashing…… handsome guy who is the jaan of the soul music academy….Love 2 flirt with gals…. But still In search of his dream gal….

 

Prithvi: A very smart…. Goodie goodie kind of introvert guy……… who is very shy 2 talk with gals…… totally opposite 2 Angad … he is perfect in every aspect except 4 1 thing….. N that is he is Blind… he cannot see …………….

 

Angad n prithvi are best frens……… they have grown up together ….laughed together…. Cried together n has spent each n every moments of their life together….. Angad simply adores his friend prithvi…… he loves him very much n cannot see some 1 goin against Prithvi or takin advantage of his blindness……  he is ready 2 give his life 4 Prithvi……all the ppl of the college just simply adores angad n prithvi's freship……

 

   Prithvi also adores Angad n at the same time repects him a lot coz Angad is the only 1 who will alwaz be there 4 him no matter wat is the reason…….???? But destiny had something else stored 4 these two friends……… Angad n prithvi had never ever thought that one day a gal will change the meaning of their frenship…….

 

Well, the story takes place at the Soul Music Academy itself……….

 It's da very first day of the college …….. Angad n prithvi both r getting ready for the college…… Prithvi is all set 2 go with that chadi in his hand……when angad takes away the chadie 4rm him……

A: jab main tumhare saath hoon toh tumne kisi aaur sahare ki kyaaa zarooraht……..?????

 Prithvi smiles n walks towards the college holding Angad's hand……

 

As they enters inside the college angad n prithvi r separated by the crowd…… now prithvi is left all alone……he tries 2 go to the class room…… searchin here n there….. when suddenly he bashes with a beautiful gal…….. n that gal is none other then Kripa…..

 

Kripa ( mad n red in anger): aandhe ho kyaaa??????? Dekhayeee nahi deta….???? Idiot!!!!!!!!!!!!khoobsurat ladki dekhi nahi ki bas suru ho gayeee tum log!!!!!!!

Prithvi ( tryin 2 apologize) : mam .. dekhiye I'm really soory…

K( cutting him in between): ooooo sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kitna aacha natak karte ho…. pehele toh dhakka marooo uss k upar sorry?????? Battameez Andhe kahike!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dikhayee bhi nahi deta!!!!!!!!

 

Right then angad comes between them n gives one tight slap on kripa's face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

A: how dare u????????????? tumhari himmaat kaise huwee mere dost se yese baat karne ki…….yeh tumhare baap ka jogging ground nahi hai jo tum yaha waha nazar lagak chalo samjheee???????? 

        haan thik keheti hoo tum…. Yeh andha hi hai….. isse dikahyeee nahi deta….. lekin tumhe toh dikahyeee deta hai nah???????????????????? toh aapne aakhon ka sahi istamaal karo samjheeee??????

 

He gives that angry look at kripa n walks away with prithvi………

 

 Now kripa is left all embarrassed with tears in her eyes……… she is repenting 4 wat she just said…..she is all cryin….

K: ooo noo yeh maine kyaaa kar diya……. Mujhe usse mafi magni hogi……

 

Then kripa goes 2 da place where angad n prithvi were sitting…..

 

A: tum????????????? Tum yaha kyaa kar rahii ho….. ????? Prithvi ish ladki se kaho ki meri aakhose dur hojaye warna najane main kyaaa kar bethunga….

 

K( all in tears): woh main woh actually tumse maafi magne aayee thi…

 

A: oooo maafi??????? Aab yeh maafi ka kaun sa natak le k aaye hoo huh?????? Main tum jaise ladkiyo ko aachi tarah se janta hoon….. dusro k kamzoori ka faeeda uthanewali……….

K: nahi main sach main maafi magne aaiee hoo.. maine jo bahar kiya voh mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha….. I'm really sorry

A: jo kehena tha … tumne kehdiya…. Aaba isski koi zaroorat nahi samjhee tum,???????

 

P: dekhiye aap iske bato ka bura mat manna…. Yehh yesa hi hai…… it's okay.. ish main aapki koi galti nahi thi…… aagar mai aap ki jaga hota toh sayed mai bhi yehi karta…. Voh toh main hi bina sahare k aakela jane ki koshish kar raha tha issilye……

 

K( all cryin): nahi plzzzz mujhe aau sarminda mat karoo….. galti meri hi thi….. maine hi bina kuch jane tumhe kitna kuch suna diya…..

 

A( getting mad at kripa): okay fine tumhari hi galti thi……. Aab khush???? Aab plzzz jaao aau hame maaf karo plzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

P: angad don't B soo rude… dekhiye aagar mere maaf karne se aap k dil ka booj hallka ho ta hai toh… maine aap ko maaf kiya……aab plzz aap royeeyeh mat…..

 Angad with an irritated look:

 

Prithvi yaha se chalo let's gooo….then angad n Prithvi leaves 4rm there n kripa is left all in teras…..

 

Few days pass by……… kripa is still feeling guilty 4 what she has done…..she tries 2 make up with angad n prithvi…… prithvi is friendly with her but angad is still not convienced…….. however, angad seems 2 B impressed with kripa whenever she is helping out Prithvi……….

 

Okay guyzzz 2 B continued…

I  hope u all liked it…coz this one is gona B a really emotional story…..

Love ya

eshika

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Tansha

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:19pm | IP Logged

this was awesome..keep it upClap..please continue as soon as possible..cant wait for net part...

Tansha

Take Care

 

marvelous.malks

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:26pm | IP Logged

Eshika..that was gr8!! Clap I have lately started reading fan fictions.. and i must say that WOW!! u are wonderful at it..they are awesome... this story is gr8! u presented it beautifully... but prithvi... is blind...aww... my poor brother....But once again.. this story is very interesting!! Clap Plz cont soon... i will be waiting.. u have some talent!! Clap 

 

Mallika-

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
wow....very Awesome...i really like it....

~sweta~

stonex

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:45pm | IP Logged

awesome story

thanks alot

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charmedangel

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
thanks guyzz gona continue soon very soon......N once again this story is different....Wink

baby_princess

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
wow...awsum story!! its very different from all the other fan fic!! i loved it...plzz continue soon!!

**lil_playa**

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Posted: 08 August 2005 at 11:56pm | IP Logged

that was very good starting

interesting story

plz cont fast  

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