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ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

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hey nice intro dear....cont soon cant wait to read more Smile

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Posted: 10 July 2007 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
HEY THE INTRO WAS DAMN INTERESTING YAAR Clap . LOVED ALL THE CARACTERS IN THIS STORY Wink . CONTINUE SOON YAAR PLZ....... CAN'T WAIT NAY LONGER.BYE.TAKECARE. Smile Tongue Smile

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Posted: 10 July 2007 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
great into
cant wait 4 the first part

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Posted: 10 July 2007 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
hey nice cast......continue soon....can't wait for the first part !!!!!!!

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hey...nice...cont soon....

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Posted: 11 July 2007 at 9:12pm | IP Logged

HEY GUYS THANKS FOR COMMENTING Tongue Tongue ... Tongue I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKED MY CHARACTER SKETCH Tongue Tongue ....okay so here my story goes.. Tongue
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A brigting sun rose as everyday, showering its beautiful rays.

we see a beautiful house much like a mansion. (lets go inside) we see a lady infront of TULSI(holy plant) singing a melodious song(pooja) her head is covered with her palu of saree. we see a sindoor in her forehead and a mangulsutra in her neck(by this time you have gottom who she is) YES she is VEENA MUM..

she turns around after finishing her pooja nad she smiles. we see a person in front of her with plain white kurta and his lovely smile.(yes he is our carming piyush)

V(veena): BETA GOOD MORNING! prasad.

P(piyush): MORNING BADI MAA! he takes the prasad.

V: you are the only person who comes for puja. you should tell your brother and your gudiya to come too.

P: badi maa they are still sleeping...dont worry i will get them.
and he went from their leaving smiling veena. Tongue

V(to herself): abhi to uski aane ki dair hain

Now P comes to one room which is filled with photos of babes and bikes. we see a 2 legs LOL piyush comes near those 2 legs and starts tickling, the person moves a bit..piyush again tries but fails so he goes ahead and moves the sheet from his face...we see a young, charming man with a killing smile in his face.
piyush shakes him but he doesn't wake up so he comes near his ear and YEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH..... ..

The person jumped out of bed and starts yelling...(yes he is rishi) after a while he hears somebodys laugh he sees in that direction and saw piyush laughing..he was confused...

R: bhai yeh aap kyun has rahe ho..
P: tuna apne sakal dekhi hain..chuhe(mouse) just liek a scared mouse..
R: kya bhai..why are you jealous of me.
P: jealous of wat?
R: bhai whenever i come close to tina to kiss her you wake me up.
P: who is tina and where is she?
R: tina..tina..tina she was in my dream and we were alone in a cottage. we both were alone and...(piyush stopped him)
P:chup kar....kaise kaise sapna dekh reha taa...acha huya ki maine jaga diya..say thank you too me.

SAYING THIS HE LEFT THE ROOM...

NOE LETS SHIFT TO LONDON...

we see a girl in a nighty sleeping...she is covered in blanket.suddenly she heard her cell ringing she picked it up..

GIRL(in sleepy tone): helloo and yawned.
guy: chinki(he calls her that) tu so rahi hain.
girl: kyun kya huya..aj to sunday hain na..
guy: sunday..he started laughing LOL
girl: why r you laughing. Confused
guy: b/c today is monday mehek and we have to leave..remember!!
mehek: kya..

MEHEK jumped put of bed...and started brushing her teeth.

guy: ab jaldi kar aur muje mera appartement par milo..
mehek: sujal bhaiya...main abhi do minute mein aati hoon..
SUJAL: do minute..ya do gante(hours)
MEHEK: bhaiiiii and cuts the phone..with a cute smile on her face....

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back to india...

PIYUSH goes to another room which was pink and filled with cartoons. we see a girl in bed who is hugging micky mouse. seeing her piyush has a smile in his face. he come to her and puts her hand on her head and kisses her. the girl opens her eyes and smiles he too smiles.

P: good morning gudiya.
G:morning bro.
P: come on wake up badi maa is angry..
G: ohh my god he is coming today..she jerked out of bed..
P: pagal..come fast to break fast table...
Kripa nooded..and piyush left the room..

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lets see at SINHAS..

wee see a girl heading toward a room...she opens the room and sees a person who is sleeping with pillows all ever him..his room is a mess. she signs at looking at his room and says.

G: yeh ladka kabhi to apna kaam time pay nahin karta..room to dekho kachara kay diba jaisa.....(in angry tone)
she goes toward the bed and sees the face of that guy and her gussa is gone..she at guy who is sleeping peaccefully and smiling...seeing his smile she got a idea she goes up to bathroom and brings a bucket full of hot water and pours at him..

the guy jerked out of bed and started yelling..AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.......DEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEE

he sees a girl laughing loudly and looks at her with anger..
Guy: dee..this is not a way to wake youe swwet innocent bro...with a puppy face..
Girl: SWEET INNOCENT BRO... LOL she was going to say something but she head something..

somebody: KASHISH BETA ANGAD KO UTHAYA KYA....aur mera breakfast ready hain kya?

yes those 2 were kashish and angad..

K: papa abhi aati hoon...(facing to angad)angad jaldi uth jaa aur phir..
A: pata hain aap ki ladli is coming..
Kash smiles and goes down...
and angad goes to washroom...

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i think thats it for today...hopt you will like it...
keep commenting... Tongue

Bhumi Embarrassed




Edited by ami_princess - 11 July 2007 at 9:20pm

beauty_niki

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Posted: 12 July 2007 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
WOW COOL PART Clap . LOVED THE WAY U SHOWED EACH CHARACTER IN THE PART Wink . CONTINUE SOON PLZ....... CAN'T WIAT ANY LONGER. Smile Tongue Smile

mz.jess

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Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
heyy bhoomi! love it Smile
cont. soon. Wink

Edited by mz.jess - 12 July 2007 at 3:34pm

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