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'DON'T JUDGE...KYPH FF p33 (end)pg 31 (Page 9)

saragul Senior Member

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Posted: 09 July 2007 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Great part continue soon

sweetmagic4u Goldie

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Posted: 09 July 2007 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Very suprised, not that Angad sacrificed his love but that Kripa confessed hers so soon! What a girl, what a twist. Can't wait for the next part. Clap
angullgrl91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 July 2007 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
awwww. that was so sad. i hope ak get 2gether soon.
sweetmittal Senior Member

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Posted: 09 July 2007 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
nice part. its good that she confessed her love to him but please let angad also confessed his love to her. please look for another girl for prithvi.

continue soon

mittal Tongue Tongue Tongue
bheegi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 July 2007 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Kripa is a very straightforward and bold girl in this ff. That is why she went ahead and confessed her love to Angad before it is too late. Angad on the other hand does not express his feelings that easily and is good at concealing his emotions. Smile


Kripa went directly to her room after reaching home. She closed the door behind her and sobbed silently. She lay on her bed and buried her head in the pillow. She tried to remember all her moments with Angad…….was she mistaken, that Angad had also fallen for her, they way she had for him?…….her instincts were usually correct…..she had seen the love and passion for her in his eyes….the day they danced together……how protective he was about her in the dance club…….the mandir incident…..NO! HE WAS LYING……but why?……was it because of Prithvi or was there someone else in his life?

As she wiped her tears, she thought, 'mujhey Prithvi sey hi baat karni padhegi….."


Prithvi saw Angad walking towards his room, "Angad…aaj Kripa aayi thi!"

"Hmm…..Oh really?" Angad did not show much excitement.

"How was the game…did you lose?" Prithvi saw that Angad looked a little low today

"Haan….shayad haar gaya…" Angad said softly in a husky voice, his eyes still moist with tears, he was trying to hide.

"Bahut buri tarah haara hai lagta hai……yaar koyi Wimbledon khelney thode hi gaya tha…." Prithvi was concerned as he noticed the tears in Angad's eyes.

"Achcha….chhod meri baat…yeh bataa…tuney Kripa ko propose kiya ya nahin?"

Prithvi lowered his head, 'Nahin….darr lagta hai….kahin usney mana karr diya tho?"

"Nahin karegi….isski guarantee main leta hoon….aisa karr, aaj raat ussey ek romantic dinner parr lejaa……aur wahin poonch lena…"

"Tu bhi chal na….."

"Nahin mujhey koyi milney aa raha hai…..dinner ke baad Kripa ko ghar ley aana, phir main bhi mil loonga….."

Angad went to his room and dialed a number on his cell, "Hello….Mishti…..haan I need your help now….."


As Kripa was pondering on how to approach Prithvi with her dilemma, her cell rang, "Hello…Oh Prithvi?…..Main tumhey phone karney hi waali thi…..kya dinner?….oh……Achcha chalti hoon tumharey saath…wahin baat karr lengey….main 8 baje tayyar rahoongi….Bye…"

Prithvi picked Kripa at 8 in the evening; Suryabhan was pleased with the development, "Jao…beta…have a good time…Angad kahan hai?…jab sey aaye hain, mila nahin"

"Haan….uncle wo aaj busy hai" Prithvi answered. Kripa froze at the mention of Angad's name…..she had not mentioned anything to her father about her earlier meeting with him.

Prithvi took Kripa to one of the trendiest restaurant in town. They had a wonderful dinner. Kripa tried to speak to him about Angad several times, but Prithvi was in an unusually chatty mood that evening. He talked to her about their trip, photography, music, poetry……Kripa never got a chance to say anything. Kripa thought she would speak to him in the car on their way back.

On the way back, Prithvi put on the radio and said, "Kripa….yeh gaana maine tumhare liye chuna hai…..main apni baat zubaan sey nahin keh sakta…iss liye please listen to this song…"

Kripa just nodded and smiled, 'theek hai Prithvi…."

Song-to express Prithvi's feelings:

"jo tum ko ho pasand" from "safar"

Jo Tumko Ho Pasand Wahi Baat Karenge
Tum Din Ko Agar Raat Kaho Raat Kahenge

Dete Na Aap Saath To Mar Jaate Hum Kabhi Ke
Poore Huye Hain Aapse Armaan Zindagi Ke
Hum Zindagi Ko Aap Ki Saugaat Kahenge
Tum Din Ko Agar...

Chaahenge... Nibhayenge... Sarhayenge Aap Hi Ko
Aankon Mein Dam Hai Jab Tak Dekhenge Aap Hi Ko
Apni Zubaan Se Aapke Jazbaat Kahenge
Tum Din Ko Agar...

Kripa had tears in her eyes as she heard the song. She thought, "Ek Prithvi hai jo mere liye kuch bhi karney ko tayyar hai….aur Angad….ussney kaise berahemi se mera dil tod diya…."

"Kya hua Kripa?….maine kuch galat kaha….I am sorry…." Prithvi got worried when he saw her tears.

"Nahin Prithvi…….kuch nahin…..bas aise hi……"

"Kripa….will you marry me?" Prithvi stopped the car and popped the question

Kripa was not expecting that question so soon, her mind was still blurred with Angad and their conversation from the afternoon at the club. She remained silent.

"Kripa…you don't have to tell me now…..i am willing to wait for your answer," he restarted the car and drove home.

"Prithvi…please don't misunderstand me…..main abhi shaadi ke baare mein kuch baat nahin karna chahti…..please muhjey ghar chhod do…"

"No problem….lekin pehley ghar chalkar kisi sey mil lo…..," Prithvi parked the car in front of his house.

Kripa was puzzled but followed Prithvi inside.

"aao…oopar chaltey hain…" Prithvi led the way upstairs when he did not find Angad downstairs.

He knocked on Angad's door. After a little wait, a sleepy Angad opened the door with his shirt unbuttoned and untucked. Kripa was a little embarrassed to see him like that, and stood behind Prithvi.

"Oh…HI Prithvi….bahut der kardi…." Angad tried to button his shirt as he spoke

"Kaun hai jaanu?…." An unfamiliar female voice followed Angad. She was in her mid-twenties, scantily dressed with her cleavage prominently at display , her hair all ruffled.

"OH…Prithvi, Kripa…yeh hai Mishti meri khaas dost…" Angad put his arm around her and winked at them.

Kripa turned red with anger and humiliation, "Prith….Prithvi…please drop me home…." She turned around and ran downstairs.

Angad looked at her back with a painful expression but then smirked, "lagta hai Prithvi mujhey iss roop mein dekh kar ghabraa gayi…..well she will just have to get used to her colorful brother-in-law," he winked at Prithvi again and closed his door.

Prithvi just shook his head, "yeh Angad bhi naa….pata nahi kab sudhrega….KRIPA!" he followed her downstairs.

Kripa looked at Prithvi as he came down, 'Prithvi…I accept your proposal….I am ready to get married to you….."

Prithvi was ecstatic; he held Kripa's hand and kissed it several times. Kripa just stood there like a statute and gradually withdrew her hand, "Prithvi….please ab chalein?"

As they drove back, Prithvi was in seventh heaven but Kripa was trying her best to swallow her tears, "


"Mishti…yeh lo aaj ke 10,000 Rs…..ab jab bhi tumhari zaroorat hogi…main bula loonga….same rate…same job….." Angad said coldly

"OK…baba….apney clients ko main hamesha top class service deti…." Mishti spoke in her tapori accent, "waise…aap bahut achcha client ho…..bahut kam zaroorat hai aapki…….sirf acting karna……mujhey pasand hai….aap sachchi bahut sharif aadmi ho….achcha main chalti…" Mishti picked her bag and left.

Angad stood there frozen, unable to respond to any emotions.

Song in background- "main bewafa" from "pyar, ishq aur mohabbat"

(Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar) - 2

Duniya ke sab aashiqon ki todi hai sab maine rasme - 2
Beche hai sab apne vaade, bechi hai sab apni kasme
Bechi hai sab apni kasme
Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar

Yeh pyaar ishq aur mohabbat kya hai yeh ab maine jaana - 2
Vaapas magar kaise aaye guzra hua voh zamaana
Guzra hua voh zamaana
Main bewafa, main bekadar, maine tera dil toda
Mera bhi dil toota magar, tujkho nahin iski khabar
Teri yaad mein dil thaamkar tadpoonga main saari umar

…to be continued….

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sweetmittal Senior Member

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Posted: 09 July 2007 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
hey good part. its not fair that angad always sacrifies for kripa and prithvi always get it what he wants. please don;t do this. this ff makes me cry already Cry Cry Cry

continue soon

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Posted: 09 July 2007 at 10:18pm | IP Logged

Aww that was sad...
Both are heartbroken now...Ouch

bheegi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 July 2007 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Cry Cry I am sorry, but that is how Angad is in this ff. He is so indebted to Dilip and Prithvi, that he will sacrifice anything for them. But is the sacrifice worth it?? Confused

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