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'DON'T JUDGE...KYPH FF p33 (end)pg 31 (Page 7)

angullgrl91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 July 2007 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
hey. i just started reading this fan fic. it's really good so far. angad is so cute n sweet at times. great job. cont soon. Big smile

bheegi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2007 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone Smile


Once they were back at their hotel room, Angad and Prithvi talked about the evening.

"Angad tujhey lagta hai Kripa bura maan gayi hogi kyunki mainey uske saath dance nahin kiya?"

Angad, who was lost in his own thoughts, responded, "Hmm….bura kyon nahin maanegi…..tu abhi bhi apni high school ke dance disaster ke wajah se kisi ke saath dance nahin karta…yehi baat hai na?"

"Haan, mujhey abhi bhi darr lagta hai kisi ladki ke saath dance karney mein….yaad hai kaise mazaak udaaya tha sabney jab main Dolly ke saath steps nahin match karr paya tha.."

"Yaar wo Dolly thi…...yeh Kripa hai… need to show her that you like her….kahin aisa na ho wo kisi aur ki ho jaaye…." Angad's fears were not unfounded; he had sensed that Kripa was attracted to him-in fact after tonight he had no doubts…the way she held him during the dance….her heart pounding against his chest… concerned she had been about his wound…….he had reciprocated to her feelings too, but he was hoping, she would not see this as a sign that he was interested in her…..he would have to make sure, he kept his distance from her……kahin mere dil ki baat wo meri aankhon mein naa dekh le …..

Angad dressed his wound and took the scarf off. He looked at the scarf and savored it's fragrance…… felt like she was still in his arms………he folded the scarf and placed it in the same bag as his lipstick stained shirt.


Suryabhan felt much better, "beti….yahan Birmingham mein suna hai bahut sunder mandir hai….chalo aaj wahan chaley…..15 saal pehley jab tumhari mummy ke saath aaya tha, tho hum log wahan jaana chahtey the…..ab jab ki Gayatri nahin hai is duniya mein, mera mann hai hum wahan jaaye…."

"Theek hai papa….aaj hi chaltey hain….parr Prithvi aur Angad na aana chahey tho?"

"Theek hai…wo log aaj kuch aur karr lengey.."

Kripa changed into a light blue churidaar kurta and answered the door. She saw her two new found friends at the door, "Good morning Angad and Prithvi…."

Prithvi admired her "Indian look" but did not say anything. Angad could not resist himself, "aaj mandir-wandir jaaney ka iraada hai kya?"

"Kuch aisa hi hai…" suryabhan welcomed them
"Haan uncle…hum bhi chalengey…." Prithvi said enthusiastically-he would do anything to be with Kripa.

Kripa looked at Angad and smiled, "thodi pooja paath se aap logon ki shaan mein koyi kami nahin aayegi….."

"Bilkul nahin….jab London aakar hum dal makhani kha saktey hain, tho mandir kyon nahin jaa saktey…." Angad was back with his witty comments.

They reached Birmingham by bus and train. Angad made sure that Kripa and Prithvi rode together for most of the journey. He in turn gave company to Suryabhan and entertained him with his anecdotes and jokes. Kripa was impatient to be close to Angad.

As they were walking inside the beautiful hindu temple, Kripa made sure, she walked with Angad, "Angad, ab haath kaisa hai?"

Angad was surprised to hear her voice, "Oh..wo theek hai…..your magical scarf did the trick!" he smiled and could not help notice Kripa blushing at that comment. He decided to keep quiet till they reached the temple, "main abhi aata hoon…"

Angad got hold of the priest in the temple, "Panditji….aap wahan uss ladkey aur ladki ko dekh rahey hain," he pointed to Kripa and Prithvi, "aap jab hamarey paas arti laayen…tho unko saath saath aashirwad de dena…." He slipped some money as "dakshina" in the priest's hand.

They all offered their prayers to the various deities. Prithvi was impressed to see what a devout Kripa was in the temple, "yaar Angad…tu theek kehta tha….Kripa chahey bahar se kitni hi modern ho….andar se bilkul apni Hindustani ladki hai….," Prithvi whispered in his ear.

"Meri baat maanega, tho hamesha khush rahega…" Angad whispered back

The priest approached them with the 'pooja thali," but before he could offer the arti and teeka to them, he was called back by another priest, "wo..aapko peechey bula rahey hain…kuch Prasad ka maamla hai….."

The priest handed the pooja thali to Angad, who was standing right in front of him, "beta, zara…..yeh arti aur teeka sab ko laga dena, main aata hoon…."

Angad obliged and offered the arti and placed teeka on everyone's forehead. When he approached Kripa, she took her blessings from the arti and lifted her head to get the teeka from Angad. Angad was about to place the kumkum teeka on her forehead, when a moving insect bit her on her foot, "OUCH!" she slipped down but Angad's kumkum laden thumb was already on her forehead….as she slipped, his thumb extended the teeka all the way to her "maang." She fell down on the floor, right at Angad's feet!

Prithvi helped her get up on her feet and escorted her to the side. Angad was dumbstruck –he stood still with the thali in his hand and his thumb still in the air-he just realized what had just happened. Whether it was fate or an accident-he had filled Kripa's maang with kumkum and she had touched his feet! He could not believe that. No one else noticed what had happened as Suryabhan and Prithvi were helping her nurse the insect bite on her foot. Kripa looked up and saw Angad still standing with the thali. She placed her hand on her head and felt the teeka in her "maang." She had tears in her eyes, she forgot the insect bite and smiled through her tears.

"Kripa kya hua….lagta hai bahut zor se keeda kaata hai….?" Prithvi was worried when he saw her tears- the bite was probably deeper than it looked.

Kripa came back into her senses, "nahin Prithvi…I am fine….chalo chaltey hain…" she got up but kept staring at Angad. Their eyes were still locked with each other…..they were the only one's who noticed what had just happened… of the crowd was oblivious of this divine intervention.

Kripa and Angad were uncharacteristically quiet on the return journey. They sat across from each other in the train, Prithvi read a book and Suryabhan napped. Angad and Kripa exchanged a lot of glances with each other but did not say a word to each other. As the train stopped at various stops, Kripa could see her reflection in the glass window…..her "maang" was still red from where Angad had filled it. Prithvi and Suryabhan saw what had happened but they dismissed it as an "accident."


Angad and Prithvi were ready to go back to Mumbai. Kripa and Suryabhan still had another week of vacation; they were planning to visit Scotland and Ireland during that time. They came to the airport to see the men off. They all exchanged phone numbers and e mail addresses. Kripa was sad to see them leave. She had really enjoyed their company…she would specially miss Angad. Angad and Prithvi were sad to leave them two.

Prithvi, who rarely spoke about his feelings, looked at Kripa and her dad, "Uncle…humein aisa laga ki hum aap logon ko sirf 2 hafte se nahin, parr bahut pehley se jaante hain….please stay in touch." Angad nodded his head and was pleased that Prithvi finally spoke up.

"We will call you as soon as we reach Mumbai…..Dilip se miley bhi kitney saal ho gaye…" Suryabhan hugged both Prithvi and Angad. Next Kripa gave a bear hug to both Prithvi and Angad.

As they were returning back, Kripa saw the baggage claim carousel-she stopped there and said her silent "thank you," and walked out with her dad. Suryabhan said, "bahut achche ladke hain….kya socha tumney Kripa?'

Kripa blushed, "Papa….Mumbai jaakar baat kerengey"

As they rode back to their hotel, Kripa felt an emptiness inside her….a lonely feeling…..she really missed them….

Song in background- 'na jaane kyon" from "choti si baat" (remix version but sung well)

Na jaane kyon, hota hai yeh zindagi ke saath
achanak ye man
kisi ke jaane ke baad, kare phir usiki yaad
chhoti chhoti si baat, na jaane kyon

vo anjaan pal
Dhal gaye kal, aaj vo
rang badal badal, man ko machal machal
rahen, na chal na jaane kyon, vo anjaan pal
tere bina mere nainon me
Toote re haay re sapanon ke mahal
na jaane kyon, hota hai yeh zindagi ke saath ...

vahi hai dagar
vahi hai safar, hai nahin
saath mere magar, ab mera hamsafar
dhoonde nazar na jaane kyon, vahi hai dagar
kahaa gaeen shamen madabhari
vo mere, mere vo din gaye kidhar
na jaane kyon, hota hai yeh zindagi ke saath ... be continued...

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ixi-shaj Senior Member

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Posted: 08 July 2007 at 7:19am | IP Logged
that was really good!
Divine intervention indeed!! Wink They totally belong together, even God thinks so!
candyprincess IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2007 at 9:23am | IP Logged
great part
aww kripa like angad Embarrassed
Hope prithiv doesn't mess it up 4 them
-Ami- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 July 2007 at 9:43am | IP Logged
aw that was a great part...
they both are falling for each other..
cheeselova IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2007 at 11:01am | IP Logged
gr8 part

bugs_bunny IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2007 at 11:11am | IP Logged
just read the whole FF! loving it!
even God wants them to be togther!
its so sweet to see angad giving up kripa just because prithvi likes her! Embarrassed
cant wait to see what happens when they meet in mumbai!
cont soon!
eternal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2007 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
wow...angad and kripa are really destined to be...he filled her maang and she took his blessings...i loved the update plz continue soon...i cant wait.. Embarrassed

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