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Fanfic about RN (Ek Adhura mission ya phir kitni adhri zindagiyan…. A love story or a betrayal)


Introduction

Scene @ KANCHANJANGHA MILITARY ACADEMY

 

Voice over: KMA is the one of the best military academy in India. Yahan pe admission pana bahut hi muskil hai lekin uss se bhi muskil he yahan ki training aur discipline and yahan ki faculty members, principal BC and vice principal Major Niar. Aaj tak KMA ke itihas mein yahan ka koi bhi cadet bina apni training puri kiye bina nahi gaya kyonki BC & Major niar ka ye usool hai ki jo  bhi yahan pe aayega unhe wo fauji bana kar hi dum lenge. Aur aaj tak inki academy ka discipline na to koi tod paaya hai aur na hi inka usool…

Lekin is saal hum ko KMA mein aisa bahut kuch dekhne ko milega jo humne pehle nahi dekha aur aisa bahut kuch hoga jo aaj tak nahi hua.

 

Ab dekhte hai is saal ke cadets ke paanch batch hai jis mein se aakhri batch ke students ko hum dekhte hai.

 

Fifth batch of first year cadets:
Cadet amardeep huda: (Cool dude) iski life mein sirf do mission hai. Ek to apni mummyji ki kahi har baat manna doosra ladkiyon ke saath flirt karna. Waise ye har kisi se sirt lagata rehta hai, aur KMA mein woh apni mummy ke kehne ki wajah se hi aaya hai. Lekin inka ek aur mission bhi hai jinhe hum baad mein dekhenge.

 

Cadet Aalekh sharma: (Hot dude) iski language ek dum Mumbai ke tapori logo ki tarah hai, waise to iske parents ki zidh ki wajah se ye yahan pe hai kyonki who apne bete ko sudharna chahte hai, lekin isko Military se bahut nafrat hai jiska reason sirf who khudh hi jaanta hai aur ye yahan is academy ke band bajane ke irade se hi aaya hai taaki use yahan se jald se jald nikala jaaye aur woh apni easy life mein wapas ja sake.

 

Cadet Aditya Arya: (Cute dude) Ye yahan pe apne mummy papa ka sapna poora karne aaya hai ki woh ek army officer bankar dikhaye lekin uska bhi apna ek apna sapna hai jise who doondh raha hai.

 

Cadet riya sinha: (sweet gal) amir parents ki bigadi hui aulaad jise yahan pe aane ki sazaa court se sunai gayi hai sudharne ke liye lekin inka aisa koi irada nahi hai, inko to sirf apni tin saal ki training jaise taise poori karke wapas jana hai.

 

Cadet pooja ghai: (zalli punjaban) Ye yahan pe apne pyar rohit ki talash mein aayi hai aur academy to sirf ek bahana hai inke liye jis se who rohit ko aasaani se apne ma-baap ki roktok ke bina doondh paye.

 

Cadet Naina singh: (serious but mischievous girl) Inke irade kya hai koi nahi jaanta. Inka andaaz bilkul alag hai. Ye na to un paanch cadet se ki tarah immature hai aur na hi total mature. Iske dimaag mein kuch aisa chal raha hai jo koi nahi jaanta lekin kuch to hai isme aisa jo is KMA ki neev hila dene ke liye kaafi ho sakta hai.

 

Now let's see our faculty members:

 

Brigadier chandok: Principal of KMA, bada hi strict banda hai is ko students BC kehkar bulate hai.

 

Major Niar: ekdum khadoos insaan hai ye vice principal of KMA aur inke to kai naam hai jinme se ek hai BC Ka MC aur hamari pyaari batch inhe Muchchad ke naam se jaanti hai.

 

Subedaar suri: bade hi dilwale hai yeh aur inka dil Lolita maam ke liye dhadkta hai.

 

Lolita maam: ye kabhi suri ji ko ghaans hi nahi daalti lekin dil hi dil mein inse bahut pyar karti hai.

 

Captain Abhimanu rauy chauhan: hai to yeh prince of badhmair lekin dosto ke dost hai aur bade hi pyaare insaan hai. Apni biwi nandini aur apne dosto se inko bahut pyar hai. Ye yahan pe one of the drill commander aur music teacher hai.

 

Captain nandini rauy chauhan: ye bahut hi nice lady hai, aur KMA ki yoga teacher hai aur ha ye sirf abhimanu ki wife hi nahi BC ki bhaanji bhi hai.

 

Dr. Captain Shalini singhal: she is sweet person and she has a very handsome boyfriend captain navin singh ahaluwalia. She is a doctor @ KMA.

 

Dr. Ritu Mishra: She is a psychiatrist @ KMA. She is very beautiful and a sharp doctor.

 

Captain Navin singh ahaluwalia: ye yahan ke one of best drill commander hai lekin for one semester inhe kisi aur academy mein posting di gayee hai and he will be back in KMA after one semester.

 

Captain Rajveer singh shekhawat: He is our sweet and best teacher. Ye yahan pe stratage aur communication ke teacher hai lekin saath mein one of the drill commanding officer bhi hai.

 

Ye ho gaya hamara introduction ab chaliye kahani shuru karte hai ek pyar ke safar ki aur ek adoohre mission ki ya phir in sab cadet aur captain ki zindagiyon ki……………….

 

Lekin shuru karne se pehle hum ye to jaan le ke hamare captains bhi kabhi cadet the.

Raj, shalini, abhimanu, nandini, and naveen are only four and half years elder than these cadets and they all look young as those cadets firk sirf itna hai ki ye thode mature hai. One and half year ago they all pass out from KMA and almost after 18 months of border postings and important missions they all appointed in KMA to teach these cadets.

 

If u like my introduction please comment part I will be up soon
Part-1 (A & B)- pg 1        Part-2 (A)- pg 2
Part-2 (B)-pg 3                 Part-3 - pg 3
Part-4 - pg 3                     Part-5 (pg 4)
Part-6 (pg 5)                     Part-7(pg 7)
Part-8(pg 8)                      Part-9(A)-pg 9
Part-9(B)-pg 10                Part-10(pg 11)
Part-11(pg 12)                  Part-12(pg 13)
Part-13(pg13)                   Part-14(pg 14)
Part-15(pg15)                   Part-16(pg 16)
Part-17(pg 17)                  Part-18(pg 18)
Part-19(pg 20)                  Part-20(pg 21)
Part-21(pg 22)                  Part-22(pg 24)
Part-23(pg 25)                  Part-24(pg 26)
Part-25(pg 28)                  Part-26(pg 29)
Part-27(pg 30)                  Part-28(pg 31)
Part-29(A)-(p32)               Part-29(B)-(p33)
Part-30(p-35)                   Part-31(p-36)
Part-32(p-37)                     Part-33(p-39)
Part-34(p-40)                     Part-35(p-41)
Part-36(p-42)                     Part-37(p-43)
Part-38(p-44)                     Part-39(p-46)
Part-40(p-47)                     Part-41(p-48)
Part-42(p-49)                     Part-43(p-51)
Part-44(p-54)                     Part-45(p-55)
Part-46(p-56)                     Part-47(p-56)
Part-48(p-57)                     Part-49(p-58)
Part-50(p-59)                     Part-51(p-59)
Part-52(p-59)                     Final Part(p-59)



Edited by nisha1984 - 04 September 2007 at 6:03pm

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PLZ continue soon, I like it

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PART 1 (A)

 


In a well decorated office, two army officials are sitting in chairs opposite to one another.
First army officer – Major Niar, did u check the list of new cadets. Have they all been arrived?

Second army officer- No sir, six of them are not here yet.

(First officer is KMA's principal BC and the other one is vice Principal Major Niar aka MC)

 

BC- well according to rule, we will wait until 6:00 pm, and if they are not here by then they will be punished so they can learn the value of discipline.

 

Major Niar calls an orderly and orders him that if any of new cadet will arrive before 6:00 then let them in and tell them that they all will meet me or brigadier sir tomorrow and if they arrive late then inform us as we are leaving for a meeting.

 

Then they both leave from there.

 

Now let's shift to faculty quarters what is going on over there.

 

A handsome guy in his black jeans and blue t-shirt is sitting on a sofa and two beautiful ladies are sitting opposite to him.(any guesses………………………………………………………………. Well they are our three favorite teachers of KMA: abhimanyu, shalini and nandini.

 

Abhi: suna aap logo ne, BC ne order diya hai ki agar naye batch ke cadets late aaye to unhe pehle hi din punish kiya jayega. Pata nahi kab sudhrega?

 

Shalini: You are absolutely right abhi. Hamare BC & MC ko discipline ki dozes lene ki kuch jyada hi aadat hai. bechare first year ke cadet pata nahi kya hoga aage?........

 

Nandini: Tum log na hamesha unki burai karte rehte ho jab ki unki ye dedication ki wajah se hi to hum log aaj is mukam par hai.

 

Abhi: Ye lo hamari jaan ko bura lag gaya ki humne inke uncle ke bare mein kuch kaha, lekin jaaneman such hamesha kadva hota hai.

 

Shalini: Nahi abhi, I think nandini is right @ some point ki BC ki dedication ki wajah se hi hum itne achche soldiers hai aaj….

 

Abhi: tumhara jawab nahi shalu, pal bhar mein tum side change kar leti ho, kabhi meri aur to kabhi nandini ki aur………………………

 

(suddenly a male voice is heard from the front door.)

 

Aur jab captain navin yahan pe hote hai tab inki ek hi side hoti hai unki aur right?

 

Everybody turns around and we see our hero standing there in blue jeans and white t-shirt with a cute smile on his face.

 

Abhi just goes to him and hugs him.

 

Abhi- are raj, tu kab aaya?

 

Raj- jab aap log BC ke bare mein discuss kar rahe the tab. Waise maine sahi kaha na dr. singhal.

 

Shalini- raj main na tumhe chodungi nahi, jab bhi dekho meri khinchai karte rahte ho, mere alawa ye dono bhi to hai inko tease karo na………..

 

Raj- well hamare chahuan saab ka to band baj chuka hai ab inhe tease karne mein koi mazaa nahi…

 

Nandini- kya matlab hai tumhara raj, mujh se shaadi kar ke abhi ki zindagi kharab ho gaye hai kya?

Raj (with mischief smile on his face)- Nahi nandini, mein tumhe kahan blame kar raha hoon, shaadi ke baad har mard ki zindagi ka band baj jaata hai ye to aam baat hai, navin ka haal bhi shaadi ke baad wahin hoga.

 

Now shalini & nandini both come and hit raj, and abhi is laughing @ raj's comments.

 

Raj- acha acha, ab chod bhi do yaar, mein to apne dosto se mazak kar raha tha.

 

Nandini- who to jab tumhe kisi se pyar hoga tab pata chalega.

 

Raj- pyar aur mujhe, ho hi nahi sakta. Aisi ladki duniyan mein ab tak nahi bani aaj tak jis se mujhe pyar ho jaaye.

 

Shalini- pyar karne se pehle sab yahi kehte hai aur phir…………

 

Abhi- phir hamari tarah rote hai…………

 

Raj- bilkul sahi, is liye mein in sab chakkar se door hi bhala.

 

N & S- dekhte hai, jab koi khoobsurat chehra tumhara dil chura lega tab ye saari baatein hawa ho jayegi.

 

Raj- dekh lenge.

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hey very nice part.............plz continue Tongue

by the way i have wrote about R-N here is the link .........

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=655305

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PART 1 (B)

 

Recap: pichli baar mein humne KMA ke teachers ke entry or attitude ki ek zalak dekhi, now let's move on to story and entry of our cadets.

 

At the ambala bus stop around 4:00 pm, a girl is standing with her luggage & muttering to herself.

 

Girl(to herself): pata nahi maine us din sharab hi kyon pi, sara kasoor us rahul ka hai. Na to who mujhe us raat pilata, na main woh accident karti, na mujhe koi sazaa milti aur na hi mujhe is jagah pe aana padta. Uff it's all irritating.

 

Suddenly she hears a voice calling her, are bole to riya tu yahan pe kya kar rahi hai?

 

She turns around and sees a handsome guy standing behind with some luggage and little bit shocked & surprise expressions on his face.

 

Riya- aalekh tu yahan pe?????????????????????

 

(The girl is riya sinha, & the guy is aalekh sharma. They both live in Mumbai and know each other because of their family circles)

 

Aalekh- haan apun idhar, lekin tere ko yahan dekh kar haraine ho rahi hai.

 

Riya- woh main yahan pe KMA join karne aayi hoon, tin saal ki apni sazaa katne jo court ne sunai thi. Lekin tu…………

 

Aalekh: haan tera who accident na……… tujhe court ne sazaa sunai aur apun ko apne ma-baap ne

 

Riya- kya matlab?

 

Aalekh: apun bhi KMA join kar raha hai, apun ke parents ne bola ki agar apun yahan pe nahi aayega to apun ko business join karna padega, aur baap ke pakao business se KMA acha. Un logo se door thodi azadi to milegi.

 

Riya- kya khaak azadi, lekin phir bhi koi baat nahi, ab tum yahan pe ho to koi dost to hai saath mein akela nahi lagega.

 

Aalekh- apun ko bhi………

 

Then they both turn to leave and they see some people @ a shop and get really shock of their life.

 

Aalekh- are riya who udhar dekh, shakal kuch jaani pehchaani si hai.

 

Riya- OMG, ye yahan pe kaise, chal chalke dekhte hai.

 

They both go toward the shop where one guy & a girl are asking for directions and another guy is trying to flirt with some village girls who are passing around.

 

Huda- oh hoy, yahan ki kudiyan to kamal ki hai. Kis zannnat mein bhej diya hai mummyji ne. Jiyo oy……

 

Pooja- oy huda, tu kabhi nahi sudhrega, tera signal hamesha ladkiyon ko dekh kar double speed pe kyon kaam karne lagta hai.

 

Huda- oy punjaban, mein teri tarah ek hi insaan ke piche apni javani barbaad nahi karna chahta is liye.

 

Aditya- are aap log bhi na……… pooja and huda kya hamesha shuru ho jaate ho kabhi to kisi cheez ko seriously lijiye hame 6:00 baje se pehle academy mein hona hai aur 4:30 to yahin pe baj rahe hai.

 

Huda- oy yaar, to kaunsa pahad toot padega, aisi baatein kar raha hai jaise wahan hamare swagat ke liye poori army khadi hai aur hum un logo ko intezaar karwa rahe hai.

 

Riya- tumhare  swagat ke liye to poori army bhi kaafi nahi hai huda…

 

All three of them turned around and saw riya and aalekh standing there.

 

Pooja- tum logo ne apna connection kab KMA se jod liya?

 

Riya and aalekh told them their story and these three told them theirs.

 

(Actually all five of them know each other from their family circles. They are friends but not close friends.)

 

Aditya- to ab chalein…………………

 

Riya- haan hum ko ab chalna chahiye waise bhi dair se jaane par punishment mil sakti hai.

 

Punishment to milegi hi lekin agar sab saath hai to bachne ka raasta bhi dhoonda ja sakta hai.

 

They all turned around to see who it was and they saw naina standing there.

 

Aalekh- bole to tu yahan pe? Lekin KMA mein kaise?

 

Everybody else had same question in their mind.

 

Naina- agar tum log mujhe kuch waqt do to sab samjati hoon.

 

After that all the conversation went in mute. Naina told them something. At the end of their conversation they all put their hands together and said, "Let's do it."

 

Around 11:00 pm, they all were @ KMA gate which was closed and there were guards around. All hide in near bushes to think how to get in. Aalekh took out academy map to find an alternative way to get in and all of them were trying to find solution to their problem.

 

Riya: are ab ander  kaise jayenge?

 

HUDA: wo kya hai na ki humare liye mumyji ne naya gate banwane ka order diya tha jab who ban jayega tab andar chale jayege.

 

Pooja: oy huda, tera signal hamesha galat connection hi kyon pakadta hai, kabhi to sahi number dial kar.

 

Huda: oy punjaban, teri baatein meri samaj mein bilkul nahi aati.

 

Aditya: inka matlab hai ki aap hamesha galat comment kyon marte ho ye mazak karne ka nahi sochne ka waqt hai.

 

Huda: oy adi, teri samaj mein badi aati hai cell phone conversation. Kya baat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Aalekh: abhi tum log apni bakwaas bandh karo to hum andar ja sake.

 

Riya: kya raasta mil gaya?

 

Naina: haan, academy ke pichle side pe jahan faculty quarters hai wahan par ek choti deewar hai, jahan se kood kar andar jaaya ja sakta hai.

Riya: lekin agar koi teacher jaag raha hoga aur humko pakad liya to?

 

Aditya: ab who risk to lena hi padega na…………

Naina: ek kaam karte hai, sab se pehle aalekh andar jayega phir riya, pooja and aditya, aur uske baad mein aur huda. agar koi problem hui to sab ko hostel ka raasta aur room no. maloom hai. so koi kisi ka wait mat karna nahi to sab ko punishment milega ok.

 

Aalekh- to kya hua, sab ek saath zhel lenge.

 

Naina- nahi, is waqt dosti se jyada hamara ajnabi lagna bahut zaroori hai.

 

Huda- naina bilkul thik keh rahi hai.

 

Then they all went one by one as per plan and naina was last to cross the wall when they saw someone coming with torch, so as per plan everybody run from there except naina who didn't knew as she was crossing the wall.

 

When she crossed the wall, that person gave her hand and she thought it was huda's because of darkness. She said that ye KMA ke guards bhi na……… hamare andar aane ke to raasta banaya hi lekin kabhi chupke se bahar jaane ke raaste ke liye bhi sochna nahi padega. btw thanks for helping as she was almost on the ground now.

Person: you are welcome………

 

She saw rajveer instead of huda, and all the others were gone, and she just smiled as all the others followed the plan.


Rajveer:  Intresting, aap abhi abhi andar aayi hai aur phir bahar jaane ka bhi soch liya……… what is your name cadet?

 

Naina: Cadet naina singh…

 

Rajveer: well my name is captain rajveer singh shekhawat……… so cadet naina singh aap ye batane ki jahemat uthayegi ki aap ka who dost kahan par hai?

 

Naina was almost shocked to hear this name and she didn't answer as she was in thoughts.

 

Raj: maine aap se kuch poocha cadet singh?

 

Naina: dost? Kaisa dost sir? Mujhe nahi pata aap kya keh rahe hai?

 

Raj: wahin jiska haath samaj kar aap ne mera haath thama tha or baatein kar rahi thi. Bataye who kaun tha ya thi aur kahan pe hai?

 

Naina: I don't understand sir what u are talking about.

 

Raj: well u exactly understand par aap batana nahi chahti.

 

Naina: no sir, I am not going to tell………

 

Raj: soch lijiye, uski punishment bhi aap hi ko zhelni hogi………

 

Naina didn't say a word so rajveer told her to go to girls hostel and also told her to be present in KMA ground @ 800 hours in morning.

 

Naina left and rajveer looked around but didn't find anybody.

 

Naina went in her room and saw worried pooja and riya. Naina told them the incident and they were worried as she will be punished but naina tell them to chill as it was not a big deal. They all went to sleep, and naina woke up 7:00 in the morning and went to ground @ 8:00 am.

 

Rajveer was already there, and he asked for the last time to give name of her friend but she was adamant so he gave her punishment to run five km in 30 minutes, and if she was late she had to do five push-ups for every single late minute.

 

She finished her run in 40 minutes and did 50 push-ups and was done around 9:00.

 

Raj- so cadet singh, ab aap ko pata chala agar aapne apne saathi ka naam bata diya hota to punishment kam hoti………

 

Naina- sir, sirf ek ghante ki punishment ke dar se agar mein aap ko apne saathi ka naam bata deti to aap ki soch bilkul galat hai. Maine suna tha army mein log apni jaan de dete hai lekin apne saathiyon ka pata dushman ko nahi batate, ye to sirf ek mamooli punishment thi.

 

Raj: mein koi dushman nahi hoon cadet singh, aap ka teacher hoon.

 

Naina: Exactly sir, aap mere teacher hai. aap ek dushman na sahi lekin dost bhi nahi hai. Aur mere liye apni dosti se badh kar kuch bhi nahi.

 

Raj was about to tell something but major niar came there.

 

Major niar: to ye hai wo cadet jo kar raat diwar kudh kar andar aayi thi. Mujhe nahi lagta tha ki aap is ko punishment denge captain. But u surprised me as you love your cadets more than rules. Khair I like that u respect rules captain.

 

Rajveer: sir I always believe in fair play. So mere cadets apni jagah par hai aur rules apni jagah par.

 

Major Niar: well said captain. And cadet I hope aap ko pata chal chukka hoga ki KMA koi civilian college nahi hai jahan aap ki manmani chalegi. I hope u learned your lesson so u can get back to mess for your breakfast.

 

Naina: I certainly did sir.

 

Then she went to mess without even looking at captain rajveer.

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hey very good part..........naiana gave a rigth answer to rajveer..............good job naina Tongue

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hey its really sounds to b a diff Clap Clap Clap
n yr preasentation is also awesoome....
waiting for yr next part.... Smile hey its really sounds to b a diff Clap Clap Clap

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hey

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