HOT OR NOT? (AK)Important note pg.18

Hi everyone again!! I mean only the people who use to read my other fanfics like
angad and kripa after marriage
and my previous one ak fell in love in school!!!!

As most of you know, especially the one's who read my other FANFIC ak fell in love in school. They know that I love doing stories in school. But don't worry this story is nothing like that one! This is more exciting and they don't fall in love fast!!!! Most important is that angad and kripa are very very different in this FANFIC!

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                         INTRODUCTION

Angad khanna: he is very popular at school and his parents care too much about him!!

Karthick khanna: Not popular at school.angad's brother

Naina khanna: cares a lot about angad and karthick.

Dilp khanna: cares lots about angad nad karthick.

Kripa sharma: she is very popular at school. Her parents care lots about her.

Kripa's parents: cares lots about kripa!

Dadi: knows angad well.

Please comment

hint: the faster you comment the faster i update the next part!!!😃😃

KIMI


Edited by kyph great fan - 15 years ago

sounds good... continue soon...

sounds really cool & interesting!!! CANNOT wait to read more, continue
soon!!! 😛

Thanks for the comments!
but only 2 comments
well lets see if more people like it after Part # 1!!

Part #1
In MAAVIN SCHOOL
Girl: the hottest boy is Angad. Don't you think???
Other girl: Yes, I feel even more hot when I am near Angad then I am when I'm in the sun!!!
Girl: omg! Boys are so hot man!!!
Boy: but girls aren't less!
Girl: oh wow you think I am hot!!!
Boy: No not you I was talking about Kripa. Kripa Sharma! Just look at her!
Girl: I wonder how much clothes she has! Everyday she wears a different outifit you know!
Boy: who cares about the outfit. Just look at her body!!!!
Other boy: Kya chal hai uski!
Another boy: Kya gal hai uske!
Another boy: Kya hont hai uske!

We now see Kripa Sharma walk down the hall. All the boys turn from their lockers to see her dashing look! Kripa wears a pink backless top with a mini skirt!
Other side of the hall there are a bunch of girls talking about Angad!!
Girl: just look at his muscles
Other girl: just look at his eyes!
Another girl: did you EVER hear his voice!

We now see angad khanna walk down the hall. All the gils turn from their locker and look at his smashing look!! Angad wears a white shirt that is stuck on to him and blue jeans!!!
The weird thing is that Angad and Kripa never even look at each other. It's like they are strangers to each other. But now it looks like as if they will meet!!
But how? When? Where? why? and how???????


KIMI

hey kimi, great part... sounds really interesting!! cant wait till they meet!! continue soon!!

tht was totally wicked!!! lol... CANNOT wait to see wht will happen when
they FINALLY meet!!! continue soon!!! 😛

wow its awsome yaaar......cont soooon

👏 great start thanks for giving me link 👏 👏

thanks for your comments!!!
i am working on the next part and im sure to put it today or tommorow at the maximum,!!

thanks !!!

Part #2

Well how? When? Where? why? will they ever ever meet!
it has only been about a week and a half in this school and its very surprising that angad and
kripa arent attracted to each other when they are the one who love hot people!!

Daily angad looks at new girls and takes her to a hotel to check her out and so does kripa.
its like they are partners.angad thinks every girl who comes to him is hot and so does kripa!!
But how will they meet? when and where will angad and kripa ever see each other!!

The same day a girl and a boy were talking to each other.
boy: i wonder if kripa thinks angad is hot?
girl: i wonder if angad thinks kripa is hot??
boy: why dont we see if they think each other is hot. they would make a bomb couple!!
girl: why dont we make them meet!!
(so here is WHY they will meet!!)
boy: but how??
girl: you could tell angad that there is a very hot girl and ask him if you wanna meet him
since he always asks people
that if they know any hot girl.and i could do the same to kripa!!
(this is how)
boy: well we can tell them to meet in a hotel.
(WHERE!!!!)
girl: okay lets go!!!!


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girl who's name is mallika talks to kripa,

mallika: eh kripa
kripa: yes!
mallika: want any advice to check out some really hot boy?
kripa: whats the name? you never know i might of saw him already!!
mallika: no no his name is ANGAD
kripa:ANGAD! he is not hot at all. like really he is so uncool all he does i check out girls. right?
mallika: uhhh...kripa...no offence...but you do the same.
kripa:oh..yeah...nevermind

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boy's who's name is irfan

irfan: hey angad! what's up??
angad"nothing, just need a new girl, who is extemly hot!!!
irfan: i have one in mind!
angad: who who
irfan; KRIPA
angad:kripa...she is such a show off. all she does is take people to hotels
irfan: you do too. and its quite fun, im telling you once you take her you would want her for LIFE!!!
angad:ok ok!!

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KIMI