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neeti_huda

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Posted: 18 June 2007 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
[SIZE-6]thanks kavi but you are right you can never write like me because mere jaisa kharab writer koi nahin hai
aur mera week poora hone aaya hai to mujhe sawal jaldi se poochon na,

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Posted: 18 June 2007 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Cool answers Neeti. Clap ....Waise maine milk products poochhe the, milk companies nahin. LOL ..but it's ok.. Smile Smile
Kya letter likhi hai!!!!! LOL LOL Hans hans ke haalat kharaab ho gayi....it is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL

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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 1:51am | IP Logged
aur woh gana jo maine us chapad ganju ko dedicate kiya woh kaisa laga are yaar tum log to sawal hi nahin poochte ho poochona Cry
     okay bye

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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Why bye????????? Cry

Main sawaal poochhungi, lekin koi achha sawaal soojhta nahin......... Ouch

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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Neeti, main last tabele main tume questions puchi thi yaar, tune nahi dekha Confused
Amail, main wo competition ki theeno brides ke bare main bath kar rahi hoon…. Aur ha ye bhi puchnewali bath hain kya… it is all for fun..we are waiting Tongue .
Natalie, Mansi tum dono ka collaboration achha hain yaar. I am just waiting for next ff Big smile .

Okay it is time for my ff Wink

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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 2:53am | IP Logged

It's KMA's Annual day and all cadets are given different duties, Huda gets ready by 7 p.m and is eager to check what duty is given to him and meets Alekh & Yudi on the way.

H : Oye Khaidi, patha nahin, kya duty diye honge Suriji ne mujhe.

A : Oye shane, tu kyon pareshan ho raha hain, pareshan to mujhe hona chahiye… kahi, mujhe iss baar bhi bawarchi banna pade tho

Y : Chief, don't worry, iss baar mess incharge Naina ko banaya gaya.

H : Kya, Phoolan ko?? Yudiye… tu maan ya na maan aaj main tera mehamaan, chalo tumhara ghar chalthe hain lunch pe (aur khaidi tum bhi chal, issi bahane Neelu se mulakat bhi hojaayegi)

A : Tu kahan jaaraha hain, Dekh.. tujhe bhi tho kitchen ka duty saumpa gaya hain.

H :  Mujhe, kitchen ka kaam?? Yaar ye tho na insaafi hain

A: Kyon??  har bhar, hum kitchen main sad jathe the aur tum istri kapde pahan kar, ladkiyon ko line martha phirtha tha to tab nainsafi  nahi tha

Y : He huda ye dekho, tum donon ke saath Meenal bhi hain

H : Oye kya bath hain, tho koyi problem nahi, O dono jananiya mess samalegi aur main un donon ko sammaloonga, chal main tho chala mess

Y : Chief, tujhe nahi lagtha hain ki, na insaafi, hamaare saath horahi hain. Kya ye theeno milke hame do waqt ki roti de sakenge

A : Oye, nautanki, Tension kaiku letha hain, ye Hudda haina, apni Phoolan ki madad karne. Chal, apna duty karna hain

Y : No way bro, Huda Kitchen main hain tho mujhe ye situation use karna hain na…kyonki ab tho ladkiyan mujhe hi dekhegi   Bye.

A : ye nahi sudhrega.

 

Later in kitchen, Naina assigns duties to every one and starts making dough.

N: He Bhagwan, ye atta main paani jyaad hi hogaya, aur kuch atta millani chaahiye..Huda Please aur atta dalna idhar..Huda…Huda

she turns back and what?? Huda is trying to put bandage on Meenal's finger

N : Huda kya huwa, ye kya kar rahe ho

H: Arre yaar, tamatar kaththe waqt Meenal ki ungli kath gayi tho main bandage laga raha hoon.

N: Ungli kath gayi?? Dikhawo arre Huda ye tho mamuli scratch hain.

H : Phir bhi yaar, risk kyon lena… lo Meenal hogaya

M : Thank You so much Huda, you are a sweet heart, lekin ab main ye tamatar kise kathoongi aur aloo kaise ubhaloongi

H : Arre, no problem yaar, ye sab hum dono samalenge, tum jaake araam karo jao (meenal leaves)

N: Huda tum bhi na.. kya samalenge hum  tumse tho kuch bolna bhi bekaar hain.., yaha awo aur issse theek karo, aur atta dalo, dalo….

H: (tries to mix atta) Yaar ye tho swimming pool bangayi, aur ye saari atta dhale tho bhi bas nahi hogi

N : Ha Huda , atta ka ye  haalath hain, daal jalgayi aur ye aloo tamator…. main kya karoon, ab sab logon ko kya khilayenge hum 

(she sits on a near by chair and looks at him helplessly , Huda feels sorry for her and sits on his knees in front of her)

H : Phoolan, main hoona main tujhe aise haar maanne deta kya tum chaahe tho main ye problem suljha saktha hoon (N : kaise)  Kaise?? Socho socho.

N :  Kaise…. Huda, You mean wahi dhaba se khaana…O Thank you Huda Thank You so much

H : Sirf Thank You, gale nahi milogi..aisi kya dekhrahi hain.. Theek hain, mera madad tho kardo iss atta se chutkara pane main dekho purre meri  face pe chipak gayi ,jara saaf karo na

N : No way, tum koi bachha hain kya, khud karlo

H: Phoolan, ye kya hain yaar  main tera itna madad  kar raha hoon aur thum mere liye itna bhi nahi karsakthi, please yaar aur log tho meri chahara dekh kar hi mujh se bath karthe hain… agar ye chehara lekar jawoonga tho

N: Huda ab bas karo.. theek se kade hojao..ye kya do minute bhi atta mix nahi kiya purre chehre pe atta lagaya..(she starts wiping the stains on his face)

H: Phoolan, tum bhi kitna pyaar se daanth rahi ho Yaar, meri mummyji ki tarah, wo bhi meri daddyji ko aise hi daanth thi hain..

N : tumari mummyji tumari daddyji ko daanth thi hain..

H : Haa yaar kabhi kabhi magar pyaar se…jab meri daddyji unhe gussa dilathe hain..

N : lagtha hain tumari problem khandaani hain

 

Wa Kya scene hain !! (Both Naina and Huda turn back and see Yudi standing there)

Y: Dude tume Suriji bhularaha hain.  Waise Yahi romance chal rahi hai ya kuch Khaane ki bandobasth bhi ho rahi hain.

N: Shut up Yudi lunch time tak khana tayyar hojayega. (Naina throws the napkin on the table and goes inside)

Y: Chief you are gr88. Main ne socha kit tum pasina pasina ho raha hoga, tum tho ishq pharmaraha hain.

H: (Arre Yudiye, ye tho sirf jhalk hain asli cinema tho aage hain, main jaraha hoon Suriji se milne, ab dekho Phoolan kaisi tadpegi). Phoolan main abhi Suriji se milke ajawoonga

N: Huda, rukho main bhi awoongi tere saath, phone karna hain na

H: Nahi yaar, main abhi vaapas awoonga, tab tak tum ham sab ke liye coffee banao (dekha Yudiye).

 

After half an hour

H: Ye Suriji bhi haina purre bees minute waste kiya, ye phoolan mere liye kithne baichain  ho rahi hogi waise aaj unhe patha chalega ki  Huda bhi kya cheez hain

But when he enters mess he is surprised to see Naina sitting relaxed and having Coffee

H: Phoolan mere bina hi coffee phee rahe ho tum , mere liye bhi banao aur ye kya tune purri tarah meri chehara saaf kiya hi nahi, purre karo

N: Huda Coffee waha flask main hain cup main dalo aur pheelo, aur napkin waha hain wash basin ke paas jakar saaf karo

H : (ye kya hawa itna achanak badal kaise gayi. ) Phloon phone nahi karni hain kya

N: Nahi karni, waise  tumari jaane ke baad tumari Ghar se hi phone aya tha aur maine bath ki hain.

H: Kya Ghar se, mummyji ka hoga, tune kya bath ki … mummyji se meri shikayat  ki hain kya

N; Nahi, maine mummyji ko sirf meri problem bathayi, tho wo fauran meri bath wo Dhabewali auntyji se karwayi aur Khana ek ganthe main table pe ajayegi

H: tune mere bina meri mummyji se ye sab aise kaise karwaya

N: Kyonki mummyji tumari tarh nahi hain wo bahut achhi hain.

H : Hoi hoi Phoolan phir se kaho kya kaha hain

N: Phir se kyon, tujhe patha nahi mummyji kitni acchi hain.

H: Hoi Phoolan, mujhe patha hain meri mummyji kitni acchi hain lekin mujhe ye path nahi tha ki meri mummyji  tumare liye bhi mummyji kab se bangayi

N: Mera matlab, auntyji… auntyji bahut acchi hain.

H : Arre Phoolan, maan jao ki kabhi kabhi dil ki bath jaban pe ajathi hain

N: Tum ye bakwas bandh karo aur kitchen saaf karne main meri madad karo. Nahi tho Suriji se daanth padegi hi aur main mummy.. auntyji se complaint karoongi

H: (Arre karo yaar, main tho chaahtha hoon ki puri jindagi complaint karthi raho… Mummyji aap g88 ho, ek jhatke main phoolan ko patha liya.. bas mujhe aap ki madad chahiye)

He joins Naina & they both start cleaning kitchen

 

amail1601

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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Great ff Kavi!!!!!!!!!! Clap Clap Clap Awesome!!!!!!!!! Clap Clap Clap I loved it, specially Mummyji Daddyji ko daantti hai waala part. LOL LOL ..it was so cute.. LOL LOL ..................


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Oh...wow! Its jus ausom!! Clap

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