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~~Raj Naina Fanfic~~Part 5,6 page 9

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Itzz me with a fic nowwwEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
hope u all like it!!!!!!!!!!!!HugIts based on Raj n NainaBig smile

minneeBig smile

Edited by minnee - 24 July 2007 at 9:47am

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Best Cadet Pass Out: Cadet Deepak Shivaastav

Topper:Cadet R.Nair
Runner Up:Cadet Shaalini Sinha

Topper:Cadet Navin singh
Runner Up:Cadet Rajveer Shikkawat

List of the new joinees in First year
yaduvansh sahani
Pooja Gai
Amardeep Huda
Naina Singh

Edited by minnee - 17 June 2007 at 5:41am
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~~~~~PART 1~~~~!!!!!!!!!

After reading the Results~
Ali: Appne tho kamaal kiya Nair bhai!!!!!Hume laga tha ki shaalini is baar top kar degee!!

Shalini:Who said Nair has topped???use tho mujse sirf ek mark jyaadha mila he!!!

Alekh:Lekin aakir top tho kiya hi na usne!!!ab too nautangi math shuru kar!!!

Ali:Alekh bhaai teek keh raha he!!!aap is saal mann lagaa kar padiye

Alekh: Shaalini agar tu mann lagaakar padegee na tho aoun kya koi bhi tumhe hara nahi sakthaa!!!

Nair:Nahi!!!Aaj tak jo history KMA ki nahi badli he woh kal kya badlegaa????KMA ka Best Pass Out hamesha ek marth hi rahegaa!!

Shalini:Dekthe he!

Alekh:Apun ko lagtha he koi toofaan zaroor aayega or KMA me top kar degee!!!

In mess hall

Ritu: Navin tum bathaao kya KMA me bhi muskat ki tarah Ghonu toofaan ya Florida ki tarah Katrina aa saktha he??

Navin:Tum itha dari hooi kyo ho??Jab tak me yahaan hoo Tofaan kya hawa tak KMA me me aane se daregaa!

Raj:Navin tuje dekhkar toofaan kya hurricane bhi baag jaayenge!
(Navin bcoms red getting furious)
Ritu:Raj tumhaara matlab me kya ek shaitaan se pyaar kar beiti hoon???

just thn shalin n others enter th mess hall

Shalini:Kisi ne teek hi kaha he Opposites Attract!!!Dont u guys agree???

Alekh:Tumhaara matlab apun dhono ka jodi bhi negativ positive attraction ki he??

Ali:Tum guys kya aise hee phaaltho baathe karthe rahenge ya phir kuch khaayega bhi???

Raj:Ali u came at the right time!!Me tho in sab love birds ke beech me padkar paagal ho rahe the!!

Shalini:Tujse kisne kahaa ki tum ek single stick banke raho??

Alekh:Apun ko lagtha he tuje Ameesha ki proposal maan leni chaahiye!!Woh bhi aakir ek ladki hee ha!!!

Navin:Muje lag raha he iske liye koi toofaan ki aana zaroori he!!

Raj: (totally irritated now)
Toofaan kya Cyclone aaya tho bhi mje koi asar nahi padegaa!!

Alekh:Apun ko pakka yakeen he ki tumhaare liye ek zabardasth or shakthshaali toofaan zaroor aayegaa!

Ali:Bhai woh bhi bahoth jald!!

Raj:(Now he has lost his temper)Ali tum bhi???Me KMA me ek soldier banne aaya he Girl Frind banaane nahi

Raj stormed out of the room abandoning his tea!!

As he was going out he clashes on something really hard!!It was none other thaan the dangerous Major Bhargav!!

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Bhargav:Bilkul sahi waqt par Cadet Raajveer!!!Aaj yahaan koi Orderly nahi dikhaayi de rahi!!You hav even finished ur tea!!Tum jaldi se jaakar meri car saaf karoge!!I have to go 2 Army Headquarters at shaarp 19 Hundred hours!!I need the car completly white!!!Its an order!!Cadet Dispersed!!

Rajveer couldnt even utter a word!!He was shocked down to death!!

He looked at Alekh,Shaalini,Navin and Ritu who were still having there tea!!!They winked at him giving him a knowing look meaning We Warned u so!!!

All these was too mch for Rajveer!He stormed out even more angrily

Raj was angrily cleaning the caar!!He was loosing his temper each second!!
It was 18 houndred hundred hours now!!Just an hour left for him 2 clean the car!!He knew Major Bhargav alwazz meant what he said!!But what cud Raj do now??He soaked a cloth in water and started doing the dreadful job!!
Now he was cleaning the tyres!!His blue and expensive jeans were now completly turned into a thirdclass pant....his violet Shirt was now moreover a black muddy colour!!
The tyres were almost finished now!!He was still fuming with anger at this dreadful fate of his!!

As he finished the tyres he saw the bucket was still half full!!!
Raj turned took a mug of water n threw it on to the caar!!As it was completly dark by now Raj didnt kno which direction he was aiming now!!

came a yelling and equally angry reply!!!!!

Unfortunately the water he threw had fallen on a girl who had just stepped out of her taaxi!!She was fuming with anger as the water spoiled her expensive casuals she was wearing!!!

"ha nahi,bas kar! agar koi dekh liya tho!!!!"

"Kya hoga agar koi dekh liya tho??""

Ab muje apni pyaar se aakir akele romance karne ki mauka mila he""

He slid his hand slowly around her shoulders!!Opened up the first two buttons of his

Shirt!!And pulled her close to his bare chest!!!

"Navin"Ritu cudnot stop Navin now!!She too was njoying his love!!



A ball of mud had just fallen over them !!!!!
Naina out of fury had thrown the ball aiming at Raj whom she thought to b an Orderly!!
But wat say her bad luck~~ it fell on Navin her brother!!!

She undrstood it was Navin who bcame her target! and suddenly took her lugage and cleaned up from there!!!
Naina has come to the academy without informing her brother !!She had pursued her parents sumhow to send her to Army Academy!!But Navin it was imposible!!!She had told her parents too not to tell Navin tat she came to KMA!!!      

Edited by minnee - 17 June 2007 at 5:39am

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Writers part~~~~~~~~~~~
tats all for now!!!!!!!hope i dint bore u all!!!!
but see it is just the first part of my fiction so u see i have 2 introduce all the charecters to u!!Romance cant start so early rite????But i hv diferent plans 2 cheer u guys up in my next part!!!!!
Do reply how is my fic~~'U need b fraank!!!!Tell if its pathetic......its pathetic.......kk!!!

if u want to complain of any part of my fic!!U r free to say so!!!!i will not feel bad!!!1
u see i am just a beginner!!!!!

minnee Embarrassed

Edited by minnee - 19 June 2007 at 8:57am
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its nice cont soon......
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minnee bahuth accha hai Clap please continue soon
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