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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 8:58am | IP Logged

Hey guys here is a new fic of ur ( most of people) fav. pair.....Rajveer-Naina.........

 

i have written the most close to me inagination so..

 

welcome to my imagination..........

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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 9:00am | IP Logged
nooooooooooooooo………………..
a boy about 5 years came running from the room. With fully drenched in water.

" mmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa………………..ma…..help me…I dnt want to…….."

" abey rook……kither ja raha hai…………………." A guy ..tall handsome in his green army dress was following him with a glass of milk in his hand.

" oye cadet naveen………I said stop …………I order u to stop…"

they both were running around the room…………….forward again back……circling the center table……………
" cadet naveen stop……….or else dekh main bhool jaonga ke main tera baap hu…"

" I m not cadet dad………and ma ne kaha hai dad ko baap nahi kehte……"

" tu teri ma aur tumhara sophisticated nature……….. I don't care……….just drink this…..i have to go to work……….common champ "

" no…….aap ne usme ek kaccha egg dala hai eeeeeeeekkkkkkkk …..main nahi piunga.."
finally he stop by the table and said " tu kya tere baap ko bhi peena padega"

" to piyo na aap ……….mujhe kyu de rahe ho?

(Now bye the time u all have come to know that I m talking about naina-raj and their son…………if not ………….arey ..jab bhagawan akal baat rahe the to aap kaha the?)

raj stop there and said in very calm tone
Raj:- look champ…..agar tum yeh nahi peeoge to strong kaise banoge? Ek accha sipahi
Kaise banoge?

Naveen:- ( he is not naina 's bhai but son ……….remember ..)
Dad I dnt want to be a sipahi…I told u many times

Raj:- ( in very sharp tone) never…..ever……say……that ……..again….
Tumhe pata hai yeh baat kehne ki saza kya hai?

Naveen: no….ek aur glass? Ma……………….waise kisne kaha ke yeh pinese koi strong
Hota hai?

Raj:- ( remembering his old days)
Major bhargav ne!

Naveen:- oh wohi major bhargav jinko aapne pakada tha? Hi was spy na! Toh aap unki
Baat kyu maan rahe ho?

Raj:- arey who kehte the ke aisa karo magar unhone kabhi piya hi nahi toh uska nateeja
Hai ke who pakade gaye…and look at me . maine hamesha yeh piya hai so I m colonel now! So..drink!

Naveen:- ok! Dekhate hai ke aap mujhe peelane chakkar mein haar jate hai ya main
Peeneke!

Raj:- ( in very filmi tone)
Jani jis army ke tum cadet ho us army ke hum colonel hai!

Then a beautiful girl peep from the kitchen and shout
" raj kum se kum muhavare toh army ke mat use karo…….waise bhi tumne ghar ko pura army base bana diya hai!……

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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 9:07am | IP Logged
raj:- my dear baccha………uska kya fayda hai? Itna kar ke bhi hamare sahebjade army
ke naam se door bhagate hai!
But not today…….i m gonna get u…..

Naveen run towards naina and hold her
Naveen:- ma……save me………..

Raj:- ( laughing like a demon to scare naveen)
Hehahaha hehahaha …….aab tera kya hoga kaliya? I mean……………… naveen?

Raj went towards him..and naveen hold naina more tightly!

Naina:- ok stop raj! Dekho tum late ho rahe ho so main naveen ko yeh pila deti hu aur tum jale tayyar ho jao plz go.varna der ho jaegi…

Raj:-ok! If u say so!
Raj went but again turn

Raj:- if u dnt drink then two more glasses at evening

And went in his room
Naveen ask naina in very confused tone
" kya yeh mere hi dad hai?"

naina:- of course! Now drink this!

She pretend to scold him and pour all the milk in to the flowerpot in kitchen table.

Raj came out from room and shocked to see empty glass of milk

Raj:- maine ab tak kitne code crack kiye hai lekin main ab tak samajh nahi paya ke mere kehne se yeh khabhi dudh nahi peeta….magar jab bhi main chala jata hu to tumhari baat kaise maan leta hai?

Naina:- ( look towards naveen then towards flowerpot then scratch her head )
Arey tum is daatate ho aur main pyar se pilati hu na is liye! Aur tum yeh kya baatein le kar baithe ho u r getting late do ur breakfast

And winked at naveen!
Raj went to do breakfast.

Naveen told his mom " dad ko ulloo banana kitna aasan hai na? I dnt really grt kisne inhe colonel banaya?"

Naina hit him on back and he went to get ready for school.

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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 11:12am | IP Logged
ye its too diff n interesting,cont soon,plz.............
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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap wow naina it's interesting plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
this is very interestingand different.please continue.
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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
lolz cute part
continue soon
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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
its too good. pls cont waiting for the next part

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