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Posted: 21 June 2007 at 6:22am | IP Logged

Originally posted by nm16

awesome part

Originally posted by golu_1677

lovely part Clap

 

 

thnx dear...



Edited by liquidfantasy - 21 June 2007 at 6:29am

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Posted: 21 June 2007 at 6:44am | IP Logged
PART-9
it has been 4 days since sujal has been like that.....LOST!!!.....he didnt cared abt his dad's nagging,mehek's chhedchhad or his mother's constant asking......its evening sujal has just came for work , veena brings coffe for him in his room....

v:beta bata to sahi wo ladki kaun hai??

sujal is just not prepared for this...

s:ladki....kaun ladki maa......aap....aap kya keh rahi hain....??
v:teri maa hoon...tujhe bachpan se jaanti hoon.....chal ab bata kya hua.....kaun hai wo ladki..??

sujal stares at his mom for few seconds , then holds her hand and made her sit on the couch nearby....he himself sits down on ground and put his head in veena's lap.....veena is brushing his hair with her fingers....

s:maa....maa...wo...wo...shayad mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai.....
v:janti hoon beta....tabhi to puchh rahi hoon ki wo ladki kaun hai....???
s:wo..mr sinha hain na.....unki beti hai.....kashish sinha.....
v:...kashish...bohot hi pyaara naam hai....milwaega kab.....tune us se baat ki...??
s:baat....nahi maa....yeh to maine socha hi nahi....
v:lekin beta....tujhe use to batana hi padega ki tu use pasand karta hai......
s(kuchh soch ke):maa....aapke bete ko koi mana kar sakta hai......hum sidha hi unke ghar chalein......plzzzz maa.....kal hi chalte hain....
v:lekin beta....uske papa se to puchhna padega.....aur tumhare papa ko bhi.....aur fir tum to jaante ho ki chetan ki yeh rishta namanzoor hoga....
s:mr sinha se main abhi baat karwa deta hoon aapki...aur dad.....aaj tak unhon ne meri kaunsi baat maani hai jo mujhe aaj fark padega.....plzz na maa.....aap mr sinha se abhi baat karengi na.....

veena nods in yes....sujal dials mr sinha's number...and gives the fone to veena

ks:hello..
v: namaste sinha saab...main mrs veena chetan garewal bol rahi hoon...
ks:arrey namaste bhaabhi ji...kuchh kaam tha to mujhe bula liya hota....
v:arrey aisa kuchh nahi hai bhaisaab.....zara wo kal aapke paas aana tha.......sujal aur kashish ke baare mein baat karni thi...
ks:sujal aur kashish ke baare mein.....ohh...haan bilkul bhaabhi ji......hum log aapka wait karenge....
v:achha to main rakhti hoon....kal hum sab aayenge aapke ghar...(disconnects the fone and faces sujal)....ab to khush...lekin mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tumhein pehle kashish se baat karni chahiye.....
s:kashish....wo to bohot khush hogi....

so veena tells cg abt the whole thing and convinces him to come with them....cg is in full anger and disapproves the whole thing but veena persuades him to come along....

while at kashish's house......mr sinha shouts and calls everyone...

ks:kashish beta..tu....tu bohot khushnaseeb hai.....main tere liye bohot kush hoon...
k:kya hua papa aap to bohot khush lag rahe hain(smiles!)
ks:haan beta....har baap chahata hai ki uski beti raaj kare aur aisa tumhare saath hua hai.....tum jaanti ho kiska fone tha.....mrs garewal ka....unhone tera haath maanga hai sujal ke liye....

(the smile on kashish's face fades away.....she is shockd to death......tears come in her eyes....)

k(hesitantly):papa...main...main yeh....shaadi nahi karna chahati hai.....
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end of this part....hope u liked it......do comment....

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hey great part............i am so sorry for sujal Cry

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awesome part

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Posted: 22 June 2007 at 6:56am | IP Logged
thnx readers for liking my fic... Smile

i m posting nxt part in few mins...!

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Posted: 22 June 2007 at 7:08am | IP Logged
PART-10
KS:nahi karna chahati......(with anger in his tone)....ye kya keh rahi kashish tu....sujal....sujal garewal ne tujhe pasand kiya......aur tu us se shaadi nahi karna chahati......kyu??...
(Kashish is silent all the time......eyes trained to ground , she cant face her dad.....mr sinha is constantly shouting n scolding her...)....akhir baat kya hai...kyu tu shaadi se inkaar kar rahi hai......???
kashish ab poori himmat jutati hai aur kehti hai....
k:wo....wo...papa....wo main kisi aur ko chahati hoon......
ks:kisi aur ko.....maine tumhe aise sanskaar to nahi diye the kashish...kaun hai wo ladka....
k:papa...wo rishi se....

now mr sinha has reached epitome of anger......he is going to slap kashish but stops in middle thinking something......kashish is all crying.....mr sinha screams in full volume....

ks:US RISHI SE TUMHARI SHAADI KABHI NAHI HOGI......WO 1 BADTAMEEZ AUR DOKHEBAAZ LADKA HAI......MAIN JANTEBUJHTE TUMHE MAUT NAHI DE SAKTA KASHISH.....TUM PACHHTAOGI KASHISH.....BOHOT PACHHTAOGI......WO TUMHE DOKHE AUR   DUKH KE SIVA KUCHH NAHI DEGA.......

screaming this he goes into his room....while kashish remained standing there....crying....and crying.....after some time she gets up and goes to her room......

its new day now......mr sinha is reading newspaper when kashish comes down with cup of tea.....

k:papa...(offers him the cup)....papa rishi aisa nahi hai....jaisa aap sochte hain.....aap us se 1 baar mil to lijiye.........
ks:ready rehna kashish.....sujal apni family ke saath 11 baje ke aaspaas aayega......aur mujhe kuchh nahi sun na.....!!!!

he gets up from there without taking the tea......and goes to his room.....kashish is again left there crying.....and broken.....then charu comes...

c:kashish di aap theek to hain.....
k:haan charu main theek hoon....tum jao tayyar ho jao....!!!

its new day for sujal also....he gets up early and awakes mehek and veena also.......tells them to get ready.....they both are happy for this good change in sujal....

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sujal had a sweet smile thinking this......then he remembers kashish 's denial......aur wo fir toot jata hai........lekin is baar use apni mumma ke kahe shabd yaad aate hain....

''sujal......mujhe tumse yeh puchhte huye thoda dukh ho raha hai .........lekin fir bhi main tumse pucchungi........tumein,sujal garewal ko kis baat ka dukh hai???.....tumne apna pehla pyaar khoya ya fir......sujal .....sujal garewal ke ego ko thes pahunchi.....batao sujal.....''

ab sujal ko samajh aati hai ki kyu veena ne baar baar kaha tha ki pehle kashish se baat karlo....aur ye bhi ki sujal ne kashish se pyaar kiya tha....sacha pyaar......aur sacha pyaar to sacrifice ka hi dusra naam hai......now he understood uska dil dukhi tha lekin uska aham(ego) zyada hurt hua tha.....aur wo apne pyaar ko 1 dukh ke saath nahi jod sakta tha.....isliye usne pyaar ko pyaar ki tarah dekhna shuru kiya....1 ego problem ki tarah nahi....fir bhi use dukh to mila tha...
he is walking on the khali road......thinking abt kashish...
     (song time)

mohabbat meri jo pyaasi hui,
to gehri meri udaasi hui,
zindagi...zindagi mein hai tum bin ye veeraniyaan...
ye veeraniyaan..

sune sune saare raste hain.
suni manzil hain hai jaana
suni suni si meri aankhen
suna yeh dil hai jaana...
jaana janaa....
mujhe ghere hain sirf tanhaiyaan
mere dil mein sirf hai khamoshiyaan
zindagi...zindagi mein hai tumbin ye veeraniyaan...
ye veeraniyaan..

saans jab lu to seene mein jaise
saans chubti hai jaana
dil mein umeed ki 1 jaise
phaans chubti hai jaana
jaana...jaanaa...
khwab ab saare tutne hi ko hain
tinke bhi haath se chhutne hi ko hain...
zindagi...zindagi mein hai tumbin ye veeraniyaan...
ye veeraniyaan..


he reaches home n sees veena waiting for him....its too late in night....he dont answer n walks to his room......

while life at kashish's end is quiet happy....her problem solved(for the moment),as sujal said no to marriage...

k:tum jab zid karte ho to bohot cute lagte ho....
rishi:achha....ummmm to tum is cute se rishi ko kiss nahi dogi....
k(sharma ke):...tum bohot badmaash ho.....chalo ab mujhe jaana hai.....der ho gayi to papa aur naraaz ho jayenge....
r:papa ki chinta hai....meri nahi....
k:rishi(in a very serious tone) .....rishi tum papa se kab miloge.....
r(in mind......yeh to pichhe hi pad gayi hai):mil loonga kashish , mil loonga .....ab tumhe der nahi ho rahi......
kashish smiles and leaves....when rishi holds her hand aur use apni taraf kheenchta hai.....and kisses her cheek....kashish then waves out to rishi and comes home...
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end of this part......comments awaited...

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Posted: 22 June 2007 at 7:15am | IP Logged
gr8 part but sujal ko kitna dard hua hoga aur yeh rishi Dead i m sure yeh kashish ko dhoka de raha hai Angry but jab kashish ne sujal ka dil toda Ouch to use ka bhi yehi haal hoga Ouch jab use rishi ki asliyat pata chalegi Confused use pachtava hoga ki usne apne papa ki baat kyun nahin maani aur sujal ko na kyun kaha Cry Cry Cry well keep posting Smile

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Posted: 22 June 2007 at 7:59am | IP Logged
yuckyy.............chee rishi............. Dead

mere sujal ko naa bola and wo bhi rishi ke liye...

i agree with kashish's dad's words........tum bahut pachtaogi kashish....

nice part!!
continue soon dear!!!


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