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Posted: 18 June 2007 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
person on phone listens to sujal n girl's convo and shouts over fone:..abe sujal ke bache.....ladki ke chakkar mein mujhe bhool gaya kya...????jawab de nahi to yahi se maroonga......sujal....hellooooo.....

LOL

hehehehe..........too good!!!!!! loved both the parts!!!

continue soon!!

luv,
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Edited by togepe30 - 18 June 2007 at 3:36pm
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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 5:50am | IP Logged
cute part Clap Clap Clap ..the phone convo was damn hilarious Smile ....plzz continue and plzz comeback 2 present asap as i want 2 know who is the person whom kashish loves?
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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 11:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by togepe30

person on phone listens to sujal n girl's convo and shouts over fone:..abe sujal ke bache.....ladki ke chakkar mein mujhe bhool gaya kya...????jawab de nahi to yahi se maroonga......sujal....hellooooo.....

LOL

hehehehe..........too good!!!!!! loved both the parts!!!

continue soon!!

luv,
vandu Wink

THNX sweety...ur comments do matter!

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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
ohhhhhh gosh!!!!!
aj hi ff k section mei ai hun & it is such a wonderful story!!!
parhg k maza agaya!!!
plzz post next part soon!!
byee!!
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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
gr8 ff.. Clap ..n lovely parts dear.... Clap ...cont soon... Smile
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Posted: 19 June 2007 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Hi liquidfantasy just read ur ff. its too good.waiting for the next part eagerly.plz cont soon.. Clap
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Posted: 20 June 2007 at 5:21am | IP Logged
PART-8
KS:arrey kashish beta....tu yahan...??
k:ji papa wo yeh lunch dene aayi thi....!!!lekin inse(pointing toward sujal)...takraayi aur sab gir gaya.....sorry papa....
ks:arrey koi baat nahi....maine canteen se hi kha liya tha.....aur kashish....inse milo...ye hain sujal garewal......chetan sir ke bete....aur hamare MD....
kashish is shockd completely , she turns to say sorry with a cute puppy face....but just then sujal's cell starts ringing again{wrog time...lolzzz...} sujal sees the same name again and says xcuse me for a minute......

s:hello....
person: abe gadhe bhool gaya tha kya mujhko......kaun thi wo ladki jo tujhe....sujal garewal.....ko daant rahi thi.....aur sujal tu uski daant sun raha tha....kaun hai wo bata mujhe.....nahin to tujhe jaan se maar dalunga......
s:kuchh bolne dega mujhe.....wo ladki hai jis se shayad main pyaar karta hoon......

there is a silence for a minute.....lagta hai wo kuchh zyada hi shock ho gaya ye sunke....
person:oye laale-di-jaan, mere gul -e-gulzaar . chaman-e-bahar......tujhe pyaar ho gaya.....aur tu mujhe ab bata raha hai.....kamine.....dost hai tu..???
ye sab kaise hua...??

and sujal tells him everything abt the gift shop incident....and today's incident......

s:oye dhat tere ki...main to bhool hi gaya....wo mera intezaar kar rahi hogi....usne shayad kuchh baat karni thi.....main tujhe fir fone karta hoon...bye.....
he keeps down the fone and walks over to same place but sees only mr sinha....gets disappointed a lil....
s:mr sinha .....wo...aapki beti...kashish....(mr sinha cuts in between)
ks:ji wo to chali gayi.....uski taraf se main maafi mangta hoon.....
s:arrey nahi nahi...mr sinha....
ks:sir wo meeting hain....mr basu aa gaye hain.....chalein...???
s:ji bilkul....haan...
and they head towards conference room....mr basu was sitting and waiting for presentation to start.....but sujal was lost somewhr else...in kashish..
he loved the feeling of being in love wid 1st love of his life......he had a constant smile on his face....mr sinha and saujal reached aonference room....
ks:...to presentation start karein sir...
s:presentation.....kaunsi presentation.....
ks(confused):sir..wo aashirwaad project ki....
s(thinks):haan...mr sinha...bas aashirwaad hi to chahiye...aapka...baki kashish to mana nahi karegi...
mr sinha snaps in fron of sujal....
ks:sir ....wo mr basu wait kar rahe hain....
s:mr basu...ohh...haan...(greets mr basu and starts with the presentation......but gradually , mr sinha takes over as sujal was not in his senses....he was lost in kashish..... )

after the whole meeting is done...mr basu signs the deal papers and so does the sujal...the meeting is over...papers signed and its time to go home.....
sujal also drives back to home.....but he is not able to move that b'ful face out of his mind........he reaches home...hugs veena and kisses mehek on her forehead....veena n mehek both are dumbstruck.....

m:maa bhai pagal ho gaye hain....2 din se inhe kuchh ho gaya.....
v:janti hoon beta....jo hua hai achha hi hua hai......tu jaa kar apna kaam kar....

sujal is in his room and again thhinking abt kashish..........wat has she done to me....

(song time)
tumko dekha to yeh khyal aaya,
zindagi dhoop tum ghana saya,

aaj fir dil ne 1 tamanna ki,
aaj fir dil ko humne samjhaya,
zindagi dhup tum ghana saaya,
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aaya

tum chale jaoge,to sochenge,
humne kya khoya,humne kya paaya
zindagi dhoop tum ghana saaya
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aaya....

hum jise gunguna nahi sakte,
waqt ne aisa geet kyu gaaya,
zindagi dhoop tum ghana saaya,
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aaya.

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end of PART-8...

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Posted: 20 June 2007 at 5:58am | IP Logged
hey awesome part dear... Clap

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