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kuchh is tarah mile hum..FINISHED...sk ff (Page 4)

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nice part..........but end me sujal ka ye expression change.........arey ye sach me pagal to nahi ho gaya..........kal ro raha tha, aj hass raha hai............ye sabko khush karne ke liye nataq to nahi kar raha Confused

continue soon!!!!!!! Wink
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Posted: 17 June 2007 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
nice part dear gud to see him smiling again...do update soon
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very good part....very good
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thnx dear readers....but SK will meet after few more parts....its flashback for some more time..!!

nxt part in few minutes...

surprise surprise...

 

2day 2 part back to back



Edited by liquidfantasy - 18 June 2007 at 7:48am
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PART-6
Sujal sees his dad and is quiet unhappy with it......
cg:good morning son
s:morning
cg:sujal.....aaj wo 'aashirwad' project ke silsilay mein jo meeting hai na....wo tum attend kar lena....mujhe bahut zaroori mr bajaj se milna hai to main aaj wahan jaonga....
s:mere paas to us project ka details hi nahi hai.....
cg:fikar mat karo....maine mr sinha ko sab kuchh samjha diya hai....wo tumhe is project se brief kar denge..theek hai...
s:theek hai dad....waise humein deal kis se karna hai??
cg:..dekh lena koi mr basu hain....bohot achhe insaan hain....aisa suna hai....(seeing towards veena)...main ja raha hoon mujhe jaldi niklana hai....

saying this cg leaves now we have only sujal sittin in drawing room,then mehek comes fully ready....

m:mumma....mumma...jaldi nashta dijiye....mujhe late ho raha hai....
v:sab kuchh ready hai...aaja..
so mehek has her breakfast and is ready wid sujal to leave.....then she remembers something....and says...
m:bhaiya aap car mein bethaiye ,main bas 2 min mein aayi....(sujal nods n goes).....while mehek runs upstairs to her room , logins to messenger and leaves an offliner to his chat friend....."thnx fr ur wishes , cudnt reply yest as it ws my b'day party....tkcr bye"....shuts down the laptop and runs to sit in the car....
s:..kaha thi..???..(while driving)...ab der nahi ho rahi haan....??
m:...kuchh nahi bhaiya....!!
sujal n mehek reaches college and mehek steps out of car...."bbye bhaiya"....sujal droves off and he crosses the same mall as yesterday....all b'ful moments comes into picture again.....and he again has that lovely smile on his face.....aftr few mts he reached his office.....he enters his cabin [its a b'ful furnished cabin with black long chair and table for sujal.....a sofa kept on the other side with all other facilities.......

sujal on enetering the cabin...immidiately calls his secretary ....
S; haan ritu...jaldi se mr sinha ko andar bhejo....bohot zaroori kaam hai unse....
r: ji sir...
aftr few mts there is a knock on the door......sujal says 'come in'....its mr sinha....krishnakant sinha....assistant director of garewal industries...
ks:ji sir.....meri chetan sir se baat hui thi.....ye rahi hai 'aashirwaad' project ki details.....

and then both the proffessionals taalk abt the project and meeting....

s:mr sinha meeting kab hai...???
ks:ji lunch ke baad conference room mein....
sujal works for few more hours and then it is lunch hrs....all the staff has gone to the cafeteria.......sujal is still in his cabin and realises his cellphone ringing.......he gets a smile on seeing the name of the person on mobile screen.......
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end of part-6
to chk out whose call was it....keep checking the topic.....

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PART-7
sujal's cell was ringing......he had a smile on seeing the name of the person on mobile screen......he connects to the call....

s:saale....ab yaad aayi hai tujhe....kahan tha itne din.....hello...hello...sun raha hai....hello.....(he goes out of the cabin to chk the network)....haan ab sun raha hai..???hello...hello....haan...bol ab clear hai voice...kaisa hai...1 mahine ka bolke gaya tha....3 mahine ho gaye....
...................
sujal is now moving in corridor and talking to the person.....

s:maa bhi yaad karti hai tujhe.....mehek bhi~~~~~~CCCRRRAAASSHHHHH!!!!!!~~~~~~~~~he bumps into some1......aur jaise hi wo dekhta hai ki wo kis se takraya hai....wo sab bhool jata hai.....bas use dekhta rehta hai......
person:hello.......helllooooooo.....sujal.......

but sujal is not in his senses right now....he is just staring at the girl who has dropped a bag she was carrying when she bumped into sujal......the girl the sees sujal gazing......at her.....

girl:ji aapko dikhta nahi hai.....(sujal still not in his senses)......sara khana gira diya.....ab papa kya khaayenge....????(sujal is smitten by her innocense and is mesmerised by her voice....but still staring her unblinked,the girl is now annoyed by sujal's strange staring......she snaps in front of sujal)....main aapse baat kar rahi hoon....

now sujal comes into senses....

s:ummm...haan...wo main....kya keh rahi thi aap....

person on phone listens to sujal n girl's convo and shouts over fone:..abe sujal ke bache.....ladki ke chakkar mein mujhe bhool gaya kya...????jawab de nahi to yahi se maroonga......sujal....hellooooo.....

now sujal realises he was to talk on fone....

s:...haan....wo ruk....main tujhe abhi dubara call karta hoon.....

all this while kashish moved on towards his father's table......and......sujal followed her.......

s:...suniye....suniye....
g:turns around.....ab kya kaam hai...???
s:ji wo .....sorry kehna tha.....i m really sorry..(to himself)...sujal apologising....god yeh kya kar raha hoon main....lekin ye hai hi itni khoobsurat aur pyaar...main bhi kya karoon...
g:smiles....koi baat nahi...main bhi jaldi mein thi...wo kya hai na papa ko lunch dena tha...isliye...
s:..papa...yahan??...kaun??
g:wo yahan assistant director hain.....mr. krishnakant sinha.....
s:(under his breath...mr sinha.....) jo aur aap??
g:main unki beti....KASHISH SINHA.....aap jante hain wo kahan hain???
s(in his mind):kashish....jaisa chehra...waisa hi naam....kashish...sach 1 ajeeb kashish hai tum mein.......(he is staring at her while tinking.....she was looking like goddess of purity and innocense.....in her green colored suit , with hair open and again tucking the strands behind her ear).....suddenly coming out of trance.....haan sab canteen mein hi honge....chaliye....

sujal escorts her to canteen....while kashish is talking and sujal is just listening....

k:...mere papa bohot unchi position par hain yaha.....jo owner hain na.....chetan sir.....wo bohot pasand karte hain mere papa ko....akhir kyu na karien...pichhle 10 saalon se unke saath kaam kar rahe hain aur....wo bhi poori imandari ke saath......(sujal is doing the listening and nods in yes whenever needed.....and reaches cafe.....)

there mr sinha sees kashish and comes to her......
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end of PART-7

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two wonderful parts. they are awesome parts. Pls cont
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gr8 aprts so finally sk meets i m so happy keep continuing Clap

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