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thnxx frnz fr ur comments....they mean a lot to me....nxt part up in 5 mits..

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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 4:49am | IP Logged
PART 4
Sujal stands by the window......its dawn now....he can see far away sun setting......its immense heat experienced during day time was replaced by
cool breeze that ws blowing during sunset....it ws during one such sunset he saw kashish........
#############FLASHBACK (SOME 7 DAYS AGO)#################
S(To himself):ohh...yeh kya ho gaya....main aaj ka din kaise bhul gaya......mehek ko pata laga ki main bhul gaya tha to bohot naraz hogi.... kaam ke chakkar mein pata hi nahi laga kab din nikal gaya aur maine us ke liye kuchh liya bhi nahi......meri to shamat hai aaj......
he is driving his car and heading to wards a shopping mall to buy a cute n b'ful gift for his lil sis mehek....just then his mobile rings...he has'mein to gaya kaam se' wala expression seein the name of the person on mobile screen....he gathers all his courage and answers fone.......its none oder than mehek...

s:haan mehek bol....
m(in full anger):bhaiya aap kahan hai.......???.....is se pehle aap jawab dein main aapko pehle hi bata doon ki agar aapne kaha ki aap office mein hain to aaj aapko ghar mein entry nahi milegi aur agar kaha ki raaste mein hain to aaj ka khana nahi milega.....lekin(in some wat less anger) agar aapne kaha ki aap mere liye gift le chuke hain to i love you bhaiya.....ab jaldi bataiye aapka jawab......??
s:huh???....totallu confused.......
m:...bhaiya...bhaiya...jawab do ....
s(kuchh sochke):main 10 mts mein aa raha hoon.....bahut cute gift bilkul tumhari tarah liya hai......chal ab fone rakh nahi to tujhse baat karne ke chakkar mein late ho jaunga....!!!!!
he disconnects the call......parks the car n reaches mall.....enetrs the gift shop...
s(to himself)...keh to diya ki cute gift liya hai....par ab kya kharidoon.....sujal bete aaj to teri khair nahi....teri chhoti behen tujhe bohot maaregi aaj....aur kar kaam.....!!!!
sees all the stuff toys and is more confused....then he sees some foto frames...but....doesnt likes.....he is seeing everywhere,wat to buy then suddenly he spots someone.....someone who was standing in cards section....checking some cards probably.....and he was glued to the place......the girl was so
fair,so pure,,,,,so innocent......that he almost forgot where he was standing......she had a smile on her face which added to her beauty......so simple yet so b'ful....he was wondering how can this be possible....he had seen so many girls in parties he attended but no1 had this grace and simplicity which this girl carried.......she was wearing yellow kurta with striped multi colored salwar and chunni.......and in staring her he didnt realised that she paid at the counter for the card n left the gift shop......when she disappeared from his vision....he came into reality.....he had a small smile on his face
....he glanced 1 more time in the direction.....touched his hair with is hands.....shying off a lil.....and suddenly panics.....as he remembers the real purpose of being in shop......so he takes a very b'ful,diamond studded wrist watch n leaves......he is still in thoughts of that b'ful girl........he reaches home and finds mehek shaouting at her......
m:..bhaiya....aapko poora 1 ghanta lag gaya....aaj aapko khana nahi milega aur na hi mera b'day cake....(now sujal is just staring at mehek but he is lost in his own thoughts...)...BHAAAAIIIIIYYYYAAA..........(mehek shouts)....kahan kho gaye aap...
sujal startles and comes into senses....
s:...ummm...haan...err....haan wo kuchh nahi....ye lo tumhare liye..(hands her the gift n leaves for his room).....
now mehek is really upset with his bro's attitude....she goes to her mom who witnessed all this and has a smile on her face....a smile that reached her eyes and she was very happy......she knew the reason....may be she knew the reason....!!!
m:..mumma yeh bhai ko kya hu gaya...kahan khoye huye hain yeh?
v:(veena just gives her daughter a smile and a kiss on forehead.)....kuchh nahi beta ja tujhe party mein jana tha na.....aur sun.....yeh watch pehen ke ja...bohot sundar hai.....
lets see in sujal's room.....
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sujal ki condition in nxt part...

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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Clap Clap good part....continue

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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 6:12am | IP Logged
nice update Clap Clap may be that girl is none other than kashish Tongue i just luved the part Smile

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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 11:57am | IP Logged
hey sweet update!!! Clap Clap Clap but i am very sad casue kashish said no!!!!!! to sujal. bechara sujal Cry .the story is interesting Wink Wink Wink . continue soon plzzz.. can't wait any longer. Smile Tongue Smile

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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Clap nice part........poor sujal...who the hell is that kabab me haddi........ LOL

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Posted: 17 June 2007 at 12:31am | IP Logged
PART-5
in sujal's room....

sujal is very happy...he himself dont knows the reason.....but has some good feeling in his heart....aaj wo dil se khush hai.....shayad itna khush wo kabhi nahi tha........pata nahi kyu...kyu use aisa lag raha tha ki maano wo us ladki kabse jaanta tha.....aur hamesha uske saath hi rahega.......aisa
sochte hi....we can see a twinkle in his eyes.....he is overjoyed......
(song time)
pehla nasha,pehla ghuman
naya pyaar hai,
naya intezaar,
karloo kya main apna haal,
ae dil-e-bekraar..

tu hi bata....


he is playing with pillows and sofa cushions....completely thinking abt the girl....her simplicity,her beauty,her smile,her eyes......everything is so b'ful...he thought.....he laid down on bed.....and tried to sleep....but only he cud do was think abt the girl.....is it??.....is it??...yes....yesss....it is
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT.......and he smiled shyly......and dont know when he dozed off to sleep.....

'GOOD MORNING'     'GOOD MORNING'   'GOOD MORNING'     'GOOD MORNING'
the alarm goes off...sujal gets up and opens the window...its 7 in morning and he is smiling.....he goes to to wahroom,takes shower and reaches downstairs where his loving mom was doin pooja.....sujal stands besides her and does the pooja......when pooja is finished veena is almost in shock seeing sujal standing........

v:beta tum itni jaldi uth gaye.....tabiyat to theek hai???aur pooja kari tumne mere saath....zaroor tumhein fever hai.....(she checks his forehead and finds him normal).....kya baat hai beta....koi baat tumhe pareshaan kar rahi hai...

all the while sujal is smiling...

s:nahi mama....hugs her a little....aap waise hi chinta kar rahi hain.....bas dil kiya aaj aapke paas pooja karne ka to aa gaya......kyu nahi aa sakta??
v:bilkul aa sakte ho beta....main bahut khush hoon aaj......sirf tumhari wajah se.....tum khush raho hamesha....
s:achha mumma....main mehek ko utha kar aata hoon....(...he thinks something and turns around....)mumma wo.....mehek naraz to nahi hai na mujhse kal ke liye??.......
v:beta tujhse koi naraz reh sakta......ja ke dekh le aur puchh le us se....
sujal goes upstairs....in midway...some naughty idea came ti his mind.....he went to mehek's room opened the dooe and started screaming at the top of his voice.....
s:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....... .MMMMEEEEEHHHHEEEKKKKK..........
mehek gets up startled.........
m:.....bhaiya....kya ....kya hua bhaiya....????aap chilaye kyu....???
s:.....with innocense on face......aise hi......
m:'aise hi'.....bhaiya aap theek to hain....kal khoye khoye se the....aaj pagal ho gaye ho....??kya hua hai aapko????
s:...wo..mehek kal raat ke liye....sorry...kehna tha....i m sorry.....tumhe gift to achha laga na???
m:bhaiya aapse main kabhi naraz ho sakti hoon.......haan bohot sundar watch thi....mere frenz ko bhi pasand aayi.....
s:hugs her....chalo ab tayyar ho jao.....main tumhe coll chhod dunga......
mehek is terified at the thought....
m:aap...aap mujhe coll chhodenge....nahi baba nahi....main nahi jaungi aapke saath......(sujal smiles as if he knows the reason....)aap to jaante hain na meri coll ki ladkiyaan aapke peechhe pagal hain....mujhe din bhar pareshaan karti rehti hain...'mehek plzz apne bhaiyya se milwao'.....'mehek plzz unka phone no de do na'.....mehek ye....mekeh wo......mera to dil karta sab ko 1 punch maroon......aur agar aaj aapne mujhe coll chhoda aur inhein pata laga to meri khair nahi.........(now all this while sujal was laughing like nething.....he liked his kid sister imitating those crazy girls......)
s:nahi mehek chhodunga to aaj main hi.......jaldi ready ho jao.....main neeche mumma ke saath hoon....aur haan....jaldi matlab jaldi.....

sujal goes down and his 'happy-loving' expressions changed to tough one .........
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end of this part......thanks for commenting on my fic.....it really brings a smile on my face.....

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Posted: 17 June 2007 at 7:25am | IP Logged
gr8 part Clap Clap Clap plz sk ko jaldi milwao Tongue cant wait anymore Smile

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