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kuchh is tarah mile hum..FINISHED...sk ff (Page 3)

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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 6:12am | IP Logged
nice update Clap Clap may be that girl is none other than kashish Tongue i just luved the part Smile

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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 11:57am | IP Logged
hey sweet update!!! Clap Clap Clap but i am very sad casue kashish said no!!!!!! to sujal. bechara sujal Cry .the story is interesting Wink Wink Wink . continue soon plzzz.. can't wait any longer. Smile Tongue Smile
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Posted: 16 June 2007 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Clap nice part........poor sujal...who the hell is that kabab me haddi........ LOL
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PART-5
in sujal's room....

sujal is very happy...he himself dont knows the reason.....but has some good feeling in his heart....aaj wo dil se khush hai.....shayad itna khush wo kabhi nahi tha........pata nahi kyu...kyu use aisa lag raha tha ki maano wo us ladki kabse jaanta tha.....aur hamesha uske saath hi rahega.......aisa
sochte hi....we can see a twinkle in his eyes.....he is overjoyed......
(song time)
pehla nasha,pehla ghuman
naya pyaar hai,
naya intezaar,
karloo kya main apna haal,
ae dil-e-bekraar..

tu hi bata....


he is playing with pillows and sofa cushions....completely thinking abt the girl....her simplicity,her beauty,her smile,her eyes......everything is so b'ful...he thought.....he laid down on bed.....and tried to sleep....but only he cud do was think abt the girl.....is it??.....is it??...yes....yesss....it is
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT.......and he smiled shyly......and dont know when he dozed off to sleep.....

'GOOD MORNING'     'GOOD MORNING'   'GOOD MORNING'     'GOOD MORNING'
the alarm goes off...sujal gets up and opens the window...its 7 in morning and he is smiling.....he goes to to wahroom,takes shower and reaches downstairs where his loving mom was doin pooja.....sujal stands besides her and does the pooja......when pooja is finished veena is almost in shock seeing sujal standing........

v:beta tum itni jaldi uth gaye.....tabiyat to theek hai???aur pooja kari tumne mere saath....zaroor tumhein fever hai.....(she checks his forehead and finds him normal).....kya baat hai beta....koi baat tumhe pareshaan kar rahi hai...

all the while sujal is smiling...

s:nahi mama....hugs her a little....aap waise hi chinta kar rahi hain.....bas dil kiya aaj aapke paas pooja karne ka to aa gaya......kyu nahi aa sakta??
v:bilkul aa sakte ho beta....main bahut khush hoon aaj......sirf tumhari wajah se.....tum khush raho hamesha....
s:achha mumma....main mehek ko utha kar aata hoon....(...he thinks something and turns around....)mumma wo.....mehek naraz to nahi hai na mujhse kal ke liye??.......
v:beta tujhse koi naraz reh sakta......ja ke dekh le aur puchh le us se....
sujal goes upstairs....in midway...some naughty idea came ti his mind.....he went to mehek's room opened the dooe and started screaming at the top of his voice.....
s:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....... .MMMMEEEEEHHHHEEEKKKKK..........
mehek gets up startled.........
m:.....bhaiya....kya ....kya hua bhaiya....????aap chilaye kyu....???
s:.....with innocense on face......aise hi......
m:'aise hi'.....bhaiya aap theek to hain....kal khoye khoye se the....aaj pagal ho gaye ho....??kya hua hai aapko????
s:...wo..mehek kal raat ke liye....sorry...kehna tha....i m sorry.....tumhe gift to achha laga na???
m:bhaiya aapse main kabhi naraz ho sakti hoon.......haan bohot sundar watch thi....mere frenz ko bhi pasand aayi.....
s:hugs her....chalo ab tayyar ho jao.....main tumhe coll chhod dunga......
mehek is terified at the thought....
m:aap...aap mujhe coll chhodenge....nahi baba nahi....main nahi jaungi aapke saath......(sujal smiles as if he knows the reason....)aap to jaante hain na meri coll ki ladkiyaan aapke peechhe pagal hain....mujhe din bhar pareshaan karti rehti hain...'mehek plzz apne bhaiyya se milwao'.....'mehek plzz unka phone no de do na'.....mehek ye....mekeh wo......mera to dil karta sab ko 1 punch maroon......aur agar aaj aapne mujhe coll chhoda aur inhein pata laga to meri khair nahi.........(now all this while sujal was laughing like nething.....he liked his kid sister imitating those crazy girls......)
s:nahi mehek chhodunga to aaj main hi.......jaldi ready ho jao.....main neeche mumma ke saath hoon....aur haan....jaldi matlab jaldi.....

sujal goes down and his 'happy-loving' expressions changed to tough one .........
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end of this part......thanks for commenting on my fic.....it really brings a smile on my face.....

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Posted: 17 June 2007 at 7:25am | IP Logged
gr8 part Clap Clap Clap plz sk ko jaldi milwao Tongue cant wait anymore Smile
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Posted: 17 June 2007 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Clap
nice part..........but end me sujal ka ye expression change.........arey ye sach me pagal to nahi ho gaya..........kal ro raha tha, aj hass raha hai............ye sabko khush karne ke liye nataq to nahi kar raha Confused

continue soon!!!!!!! Wink
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Posted: 17 June 2007 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
nice part dear gud to see him smiling again...do update soon
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Posted: 17 June 2007 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
very good part....very good

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