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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 12:52am | IP Logged
nice part Clap but what is kashish saying Shocked i wish she is just joking nothing else Cry
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Posted: 14 June 2007 at 1:52am | IP Logged
nice FF pls cont.
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PART-3
....but....kashish had more to say.....few more shocks were yet to come...
k:plzzzz.....suniye.....
sujal stopped,he still has his back towards kashish....
k:main janti hoon aap mujhse nafrat karne lage honge....lekin fir bhi main aapse 1 request karna chahati hoon.......plzzz....(sujal still has his back...) aap...aap is shaadi se inkaar kar dijiye....plzzz.....warna mere papa zabardasti meri shaadi aapse kara denge...aur main uske bina nahi reh sakti...plzzzz.....yeh baat maan lijiye....
sujal nods in yes n leaves....without even looking at kashish....kashish is so much confused at sujal's strange behaviour.....but is kind of happy that now she will get the love of her life.....inside...mr sinha is serving to garewal family then sujal comes inside.......alone.....mr sinha looking at sujal's xpressions is perplexed as to wat happened in the garden.....sujal calms himself down...and with all remaining courage.....he says....
s:chaliye mumma..........main yahan shaadi nahi karna chahata hoon......
v:lekin beta.....(and she stops in between seeing the mayus face of sujal)....
ks:kya hua sujal beta......kashish ne tumse kuchh kaha(with stern voice)
s:...nahi uncle....main ye shaadi nahi karna chahata....
kashish has also come inside till now n she listened to all the talks.....she is happy that sujal helped her out....
cg:..(in some wat happy tone)...haan haan....chalo beta....main to waise bhi is shaadi ke khilaaf tha....chalo sujal....

and all of them leave....cg n sujal goes away immidiately.....followed by mehek(shocked due to sudden sequence of events....)..and veen comes to the door then turns n look at kashish with hopeful eyes.....kashish n veena had an eye contact for a second but kashish suddenly looked down......destroying every hope .......n veena left....with tears in her eyes.....she was so much happy for his son...but....fate had something else in store for sujal...she went away n sat in the car...........the journey back home was silent n killing....no one uttered a single word except cg who was unusually contended at watever happened......

cg:achha hi hua sujal tumhe sahi waqt par akal aa gayi....tumne shaadi se mana kar bahut sahi kiya.....
but sujal didnt answered him back......they reach home n sujal went to his room....he sat on the bed with head in his hands nd cried...kyu kashish...kyu...kyu kiya tumne mere saath aisa......maine tumse kitna pyaar kiya.....tumhe khud se zyada chaha....lekin.....lekin tumne......akhir...
akhir kyu kashish.....???he cries for few more minutes....nd then hears a knock on door.....sujal knew who was at door....
s:wiping his tears....aa jaaiye mumma.....
v:kya hua beta.....tumne shaadi se inkaar kyu kardiya?
sujal is still sitting wid his head in his hands but has composed himself so that he doesnt cries in front og veena.....
v:kuchh to bata beta.......ab tu mujhse baatein chhupayega....??..apni maa se bhala kuchh chhupa hai.....batayega to tera dil bhi halka ho jayega.....now he hugs veena and cries like nething.....in between he also gave the reason.....
s:.....maa...maa wo ..kashish ne...mujhse...maa mujhse shaadi ke liye....mana kiya maa.....wo...wo...kisi sur se...pyaar karti hai.....usne kaha...ki..ki
wo mujhse shaadi nahi kar sakti.......aisa usne kyu kiya maa.....sujal...sujal garewal jispar ladkiyaan jaan deti hain,usne us sujal ko shaadi ke liye mana kardiya.....maine us se pyaar kiya hai maa......
veena is very disturbed n shockd listening to all this.....not b'coz kashish said no....but abt sujal's attitude......the way he took the whole situation....
he was sad not b'coz kashish said no but b'coz kashish had said no coz od sumone else...............
veena tried to calm him down....she wiped his tears n made him sit on the bed.....then she asked...
v:sujal......mujhe tumse yeh puchhte huye thoda dukh ho raha hai .........lekin fir bhi main tumse pucchungi........tumein,sujal garewal ko kis baat ka dukh hai???.....tumne apna pehla pyaar khoya ya fir......sujal .....sujal garewal ke ego ko thes pahunchi.....batao sujal.....
sujal is standing their silent and analysing the question askd by veena.....he understood wat veena meant how true she was.........but veena left
b'coz she knew the answer......sujal goes and stands by the window........
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end of part 3...waiting for comments....

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Posted: 15 June 2007 at 2:37am | IP Logged
awesome part. pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 June 2007 at 5:13am | IP Logged
gr8 update Clap Clap but how kashish can do this to sujal Confused and who is that guy Dead whom kashish luvs i just hate him Angry Angry well lets see what happens next keep posting Smile
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Posted: 15 June 2007 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
very nice stry yar...do cont soon
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Posted: 15 June 2007 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
very nice part....cant waite to read more
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