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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 ff.. πŸ‘ ..n lovely parts dear.... πŸ‘ ...cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi liquidfantasy just read ur ff. its too good.waiting for the next part eagerly.plz cont soon.. πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-8
KS:arrey kashish beta....tu yahan...??
k:ji papa wo yeh lunch dene aayi thi....!!!lekin inse(pointing toward sujal)...takraayi aur sab gir gaya.....sorry papa....
ks:arrey koi baat nahi....maine canteen se hi kha liya tha.....aur kashish....inse milo...ye hain sujal garewal......chetan sir ke bete....aur hamare MD....
kashish is shockd completely , she turns to say sorry with a cute puppy face....but just then sujal's cell starts ringing again{wrog time...lolzzz...} sujal sees the same name again and says xcuse me for a minute......

s:hello....
person: abe gadhe bhool gaya tha kya mujhko......kaun thi wo ladki jo tujhe....sujal garewal.....ko daant rahi thi.....aur sujal tu uski daant sun raha tha....kaun hai wo bata mujhe.....nahin to tujhe jaan se maar dalunga......
s:kuchh bolne dega mujhe.....wo ladki hai jis se shayad main pyaar karta hoon......

there is a silence for a minute.....lagta hai wo kuchh zyada hi shock ho gaya ye sunke....
person:oye laale-di-jaan, mere gul -e-gulzaar . chaman-e-bahar......tujhe pyaar ho gaya.....aur tu mujhe ab bata raha hai.....kamine.....dost hai tu..???
ye sab kaise hua...??

and sujal tells him everything abt the gift shop incident....and today's incident......

s:oye dhat tere ki...main to bhool hi gaya....wo mera intezaar kar rahi hogi....usne shayad kuchh baat karni thi.....main tujhe fir fone karta hoon...bye.....
he keeps down the fone and walks over to same place but sees only mr sinha....gets disappointed a lil....
s:mr sinha .....wo...aapki beti...kashish....(mr sinha cuts in between)
ks:ji wo to chali gayi.....uski taraf se main maafi mangta hoon.....
s:arrey nahi nahi...mr sinha....
ks:sir wo meeting hain....mr basu aa gaye hain.....chalein...???
s:ji bilkul....haan...
and they head towards conference room....mr basu was sitting and waiting for presentation to start.....but sujal was lost somewhr else...in kashish..
he loved the feeling of being in love wid 1st love of his life......he had a constant smile on his face....mr sinha and saujal reached aonference room....
ks:...to presentation start karein sir...
s:presentation.....kaunsi presentation.....
ks(confused):sir..wo aashirwaad project ki....
s(thinks):haan...mr sinha...bas aashirwaad hi to chahiye...aapka...baki kashish to mana nahi karegi...
mr sinha snaps in fron of sujal....
ks:sir ....wo mr basu wait kar rahe hain....
s:mr basu...ohh...haan...(greets mr basu and starts with the presentation......but gradually , mr sinha takes over as sujal was not in his senses....he was lost in kashish..... )

after the whole meeting is done...mr basu signs the deal papers and so does the sujal...the meeting is over...papers signed and its time to go home.....
sujal also drives back to home.....but he is not able to move that b'ful face out of his mind........he reaches home...hugs veena and kisses mehek on her forehead....veena n mehek both are dumbstruck.....

m:maa bhai pagal ho gaye hain....2 din se inhe kuchh ho gaya.....
v:janti hoon beta....jo hua hai achha hi hua hai......tu jaa kar apna kaam kar....

sujal is in his room and again thhinking abt kashish..........wat has she done to me....

(song time)
tumko dekha to yeh khyal aaya,
zindagi dhoop tum ghana saya,

aaj fir dil ne 1 tamanna ki,
aaj fir dil ko humne samjhaya,
zindagi dhup tum ghana saaya,
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aaya

tum chale jaoge,to sochenge,
humne kya khoya,humne kya paaya
zindagi dhoop tum ghana saaya
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aaya....

hum jise gunguna nahi sakte,
waqt ne aisa geet kyu gaaya,
zindagi dhoop tum ghana saaya,
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aaya.

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end of PART-8...

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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part πŸ‘ πŸ‘ sujal is so cuuuuuuuuteeeeeeee πŸ˜› keep continuing 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

oye laale-di-jaan, mere gul -e-gulzaar . chaman-e-bahar......tujhe pyaar ho gaya.....aur tu mujhe ab bata raha hai.....kamine.....dost hai tu..???
ye sab kaise hua...??



hehehehehehehehe!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

tooo good yaar!! πŸ‘

But now im angry at kashish 😑 ..........mere cute sujal ko chod ke wo kis stupid ke peche padi hai πŸ˜† .........jaldi usse wapis le aao......warna na main entry mar dungi tumhare ff me........and sujal ko le jaungi πŸ˜†

 

luv,

vanduπŸ˜‰

Edited by togepe30 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_kia

gr8 part πŸ‘ πŸ‘ sujal is so cuuuuuuuuteeeeeeee πŸ˜› keep continuing 😊

thnx dear....and we all know sujal is just toooo cute!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey great part love it πŸ‘

 

thnx...

liquidfantasy thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
Originally posted by: togepe30

oye laale-di-jaan, mere gul -e-gulzaar . chaman-e-bahar......tujhe pyaar ho gaya.....aur tu mujhe ab bata raha hai.....kamine.....dost hai tu..???
ye sab kaise hua...??



hehehehehehehehe!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

tooo good yaar!! πŸ‘

But now im angry at kashish 😑 ..........mere cute sujal ko chod ke wo kis stupid ke peche padi hai πŸ˜† .........jaldi usse wapis le aao......warna na main entry mar dungi tumhare ff me........and sujal ko le jaungi πŸ˜†

 

luv,

vanduπŸ˜‰

 

hey vandu thnx...lekin as in every fic....kashish to sujal ki hi hai...lekin fir bhi agar koi change hua to he is definately urs!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nm16

awesome part

Originally posted by: golu_1677

lovely part πŸ‘

 

 

thnx dear...

Edited by liquidfantasy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-9
it has been 4 days since sujal has been like that.....LOST!!!.....he didnt cared abt his dad's nagging,mehek's chhedchhad or his mother's constant asking......its evening sujal has just came for work , veena brings coffe for him in his room....

v:beta bata to sahi wo ladki kaun hai??

sujal is just not prepared for this...

s:ladki....kaun ladki maa......aap....aap kya keh rahi hain....??
v:teri maa hoon...tujhe bachpan se jaanti hoon.....chal ab bata kya hua.....kaun hai wo ladki..??

sujal stares at his mom for few seconds , then holds her hand and made her sit on the couch nearby....he himself sits down on ground and put his head in veena's lap.....veena is brushing his hair with her fingers....

s:maa....maa...wo...wo...shayad mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai.....
v:janti hoon beta....tabhi to puchh rahi hoon ki wo ladki kaun hai....???
s:wo..mr sinha hain na.....unki beti hai.....kashish sinha.....
v:...kashish...bohot hi pyaara naam hai....milwaega kab.....tune us se baat ki...??
s:baat....nahi maa....yeh to maine socha hi nahi....
v:lekin beta....tujhe use to batana hi padega ki tu use pasand karta hai......
s(kuchh soch ke):maa....aapke bete ko koi mana kar sakta hai......hum sidha hi unke ghar chalein......plzzzz maa.....kal hi chalte hain....
v:lekin beta....uske papa se to puchhna padega.....aur tumhare papa ko bhi.....aur fir tum to jaante ho ki chetan ki yeh rishta namanzoor hoga....
s:mr sinha se main abhi baat karwa deta hoon aapki...aur dad.....aaj tak unhon ne meri kaunsi baat maani hai jo mujhe aaj fark padega.....plzz na maa.....aap mr sinha se abhi baat karengi na.....

veena nods in yes....sujal dials mr sinha's number...and gives the fone to veena

ks:hello..
v: namaste sinha saab...main mrs veena chetan garewal bol rahi hoon...
ks:arrey namaste bhaabhi ji...kuchh kaam tha to mujhe bula liya hota....
v:arrey aisa kuchh nahi hai bhaisaab.....zara wo kal aapke paas aana tha.......sujal aur kashish ke baare mein baat karni thi...
ks:sujal aur kashish ke baare mein.....ohh...haan bilkul bhaabhi ji......hum log aapka wait karenge....
v:achha to main rakhti hoon....kal hum sab aayenge aapke ghar...(disconnects the fone and faces sujal)....ab to khush...lekin mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tumhein pehle kashish se baat karni chahiye.....
s:kashish....wo to bohot khush hogi....

so veena tells cg abt the whole thing and convinces him to come with them....cg is in full anger and disapproves the whole thing but veena persuades him to come along....

while at kashish's house......mr sinha shouts and calls everyone...

ks:kashish beta..tu....tu bohot khushnaseeb hai.....main tere liye bohot kush hoon...
k:kya hua papa aap to bohot khush lag rahe hain(smiles!)
ks:haan beta....har baap chahata hai ki uski beti raaj kare aur aisa tumhare saath hua hai.....tum jaanti ho kiska fone tha.....mrs garewal ka....unhone tera haath maanga hai sujal ke liye....

(the smile on kashish's face fades away.....she is shockd to death......tears come in her eyes....)

k(hesitantly):papa...main...main yeh....shaadi nahi karna chahati hai.....
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end of this part....hope u liked it......do comment....