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kuchh is tarah mile hum..FINISHED...sk ff

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~''kuchh is tarah mile hum''~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

this is my 1st ever ff...thnx ti u all guys whose ffi hv read n got inspired.its a SK fic,my fav jodi ever.i love their chemistry on-screen
here it goes....

PART-1
its small house but b'ful.we see a black honda civic stop in front of this house with a screech....then we see a handsome guy wearing black
tuxedo suite  [yes he is our hero SUJAL GAREWAL.young,dynamic,dashing,charming,full of attitude n has got 'young achiever of the year' award.owns garewal industries.has studied business managment frm UK]stepping out from driver's seat

then we see a middle aged but handsome man out from the car from passanger's seat[he is chetan garewal
founder of garewal industries.good at heart but thinks that he is the only rich person alive,luvs his family but not more than his business.due to this there r always altercations between him n sujal.]

from back seat comes out a middle aged lady short but plum n sweet.[veena garewal,mother of sujal garewal.she is the only reason that sujal talk to his dad.he loves his mom a lot n veena also understands him.sujal can nvr hide his feelings from her]

from the other side comes mehek[she is just 20,very chulbuli,loving.sujal n veena pamper her a lot.sujal ki to jaise wo ladli hai.sujal cant see tears in his sis's eyes.watever mehek wants,sujal gives him almost immidiately]

we see garewal family heading towards the house...seeing the house chetan murmuring:-
cg:veena yeh kahan le aayi ho....yeh to koi middle class family lagti hai...ghar to dekhokitna chhota hai....hum yahan.....(veena cuts in between)
v:main sujal ki pasand sirf daulat aur shauharat ki wajah se thukrana nahi chahati.aur main aisa kisi ko karne bhi nahi dungi....(b4 veena cud say more....there's a voice...

v:arrey garewal saab....chaliye andar chaliye...[he is krishnakant sinha.works as assistant director in garewal industries]..he greets everyone and sees sujal wid love....aao beta andar aao..
every one goes inside house...we see a drawing room,very b'ful.the table is laid with every kind of sweet n snack....then krishnakant sinha calls someone n a girl comes running....

g:haanji papa....
ks:(to everyone else)yeh meri chhoti beti charu hai....charu jao zara kashish ko bula lao...(charu is 21 yrs old,completed studies,good looking,loving n very sweet....she loves chatting on net]
c:ji papa abhi le aati hoon...glances at sujal n smiles...
she goes n aftr 2 min comes wid a vry b'ful girl..

c:aao di...papa kashish di...[she is KASHISH SINHA.female lead of my fic.very b'ful,fair,n looking gorgeous.she is wearing red
colored georgette kurta with antique gold color parallel.kurta had small work and long earrings wid red coloured stone]
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ok readers this ws the 1st part n intro of my fic..
few more important character coming in next 2 or 3 part.then fic will take a fast track.its not a long fic..nd i will rugularly update it coz i dnt like incomplete fics....
do comment....bye...



Edited by liquidfantasy - 29 August 2007 at 5:36am

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read the first part and i liked it very much Clap and after reading this wanna read more so keep continuing Smile Smile Smile
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Nice intro.... Clap ...plzz continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 June 2007 at 8:16am | IP Logged
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Cry hey guys do u also face the 'cookie problem' while logging in or ots just me....wts the solution fr this?
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Posted: 13 June 2007 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
hey the starting was really good Wink . continue soon. will be waiting for next part. Smile Tongue Smile
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PART-2
ks:aao kashish beta,yahan betho...he directs her to sit nxt to sujal.she goes n sits there.her eyes r trained to ground....
v:badi hi pyaari bachi hai aapki bhaisaab,naam bhi utna hi pyara hai....humein sujal ki pasand bahut pasand hai...
m:arrey ma bhai to chhupe rustam nikle....nd giggles...sujal gives her an angry bt loving stare....
ks:arre kashish jao sujal ko garden dikha aao..
kashish stands frm her seat nd waits fr sujal to get up.....sujal gets up n kashish escorts him to garden....sujal is mesmerised by her simple
looks.strands of her hair which she was tucking behind her ear time n again.....he was smitten by her innocense...again...he fell in love with her again...
they reach garden n sits on the chairs kept there...
k:ji baithiye
sujal still staring her n is lost in her....kashis says again....sujal comes into his senses...
s:ummm...errr....haan...n sits down...
k:aapko sorry kehna tha...us din ke liye,mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap mere papa ke boss hain...i m so sorry fr that day....
s:its ok...
kashish now raise her eyes for saying something sujal noticed she had brown colored deep intense and beautiful eyes....they for the 1st time had an eye contact...sujal
seemed to be drowning in them.
k:aapse 1 baat kehni thi...
s:kaho..
k:main.....main...yeh shaadi nahi kar sakti....
sujal tries to understand that kashish really mean it,yes she did........he got a tear at the corner of eye
sujal is completely shattered...he nvr xpected that life will be heaven wen he saw kashish fr d 1st time ......aur yeh to kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki yeh khushi milne se pehle hi chheen jayegi.....it ws like
someone had stabbed hard in his heart....the pain ws unbearable......
s:kya....tumhein mujhse shaadi nahi karni....puchh sakta hoon kyu....???(anger nd sadness cud be seen on his face n eyes.....)
k:wo...wo..main kisi aur ko pasand karti hoon....aur usi se shaadi karna chahati hoon.....kashish has got tears in her eyes...
s:tum kisi aur se......
k:...silently...nods in yes.....haan..
those eyes...same brown,intense eyes were full of tears now....sujal cudnt see them like this.......he didnt knew wat to do...his own eyes were full of tears nd didnt want then to show to anyone.....not even to kashish....1st love of his life.....he loved her for those 6 days...he dreamt of her,imagined her everywhr......and now.....he cud see his broken heart,felt pain and ws completely broken.....he began to leave n turned around....but.....
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thnx fr ur valuable comments n suggestions frenz......continue reading....

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Nice part... Clap Clap Clap ...i hope she is just teasing him Ouch

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