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Posted: 06 August 2005 at 10:02am | IP Logged

NEXT SCENE

 

Bhumi  sitting in her room and thinking about today wat had happen in the office and is very upset. And then Manasvi comes there calling bhumi bhumi and see her upset and says

 

MANASVI: bhumi kya hua tum intni pereshan kyu ho

BHUMI: kuch nahi hiding herself

MANASVI: tum janti ho bhumi tum kabhi bhi kissi se bhi jooth nahi bol sakti ho ab jaldi batao  kya hua

BHUMI: tells her whole incident(manasvi face having angry then tense expreesion)

MANASVI: accha tum chinta mat karo mein arjun se baath

BHUMI: nahi bhabhi aap arjun se kuch nahi kahgi isme shefali bhabhi ka dosh hai

MANASVI: mein jaanti hu aur issi liye tumhe apne aap ko badalna hoga nahi to shefali ke chalo ko khabhi nahin samajh pao gi

BHUMI: bhabhi………………………

MANASVI: chalo ab rona band karo aur apni class pe lago and both of them laugh

 

 

AFTER FEW HOUR GOES  AND MANASVI GETS a CALL FROM SATYA AND SHE GOES (guys wat manasvi had taught bhumi let it be a secret but soon it will come our)

 

 

                                                                 NEXT SCENE

ARJUN IS SITTING IN HIS OFFICE AND  THINKING ABOUT TODAYS NATAK THEN ONLY KESHAV COMES:

 

KESHAV:kya hua arjun………………………….

ARJUN: kuch nahi keshav but still tell his whole incident

KESHAV: mein baat karta hu bhumi se tum to janti hona …………..(but still keshav thinks in his mind that arjun is baar bhumi sahi hai tum shefali ko samjh nahi pa rahe ho)

ARJUN: keshav bhumi tumhari behan kahi tum mujhe………

KESHAV: are nahi arjun mein tum pe pura vishwas karta hu.

And then one of the officer comes there and says that meeting is about to start

And both off them goes

 

 

NEXT SCENE(in the nite) bhumi is sitting in her room and arjun comes there and says nothing but comes very quietly and about to scare bhumi then only bhumi says

 

BHUMI: khana laga du ya phir meeting se kha ke aye ho

ARJUN: are tumhe kaise pata!!!

BHUMI: tumhari shakal dekh kar jab tum aa rahe the maine tumhe mirror pe dekh liya tha

ARJUN:  aur tumhe kaise pata ki aaj meri meeting thi?

BHUMI: keshav bhayia ka phone aya tha…….

ARJUN: (by remembering todays scene) bhavri aaj tum jo samajh rahi thi waisa kuch nahi hai

BHUMI: to kya tha who arjun (tuanting way) aur waise bhi maine tumse safai nahi magi

ARJUN: bhavri!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Agar tumhe mera vishwas karma hai to karo nahin mat karo (and then he goes )

BHUMI : still standing and thinking" mein janti hu arjun ki tuhari galti nahin hai magar tum shefali bhabhi pe itna vishwas kyu karte shayad aaj bhi……………….Cry

 

 

Byeeeeeeee guys

 

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Posted: 06 August 2005 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
ClapClapClapawesome esha keep rocking
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Posted: 06 August 2005 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
keep up the work Smile
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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 7:57am | IP Logged
it is awesume esha... keep it up and continueClap
LUV, ESHAH
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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 8:00am | IP Logged
hey esha gr8wurk.. keep it up!!!!Clap... do continue!!!
LUV, ESHAAH
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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 9:03am | IP Logged
great.....you can actually write for them.......cool.........please continue.....
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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 12:24pm | IP Logged

keep it up

 

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we are waiting for your next post. so please hurry up. i can't wait any more.

 

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