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gr8 job but after adding sajish dont separate them and please do bring them more closer

 

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gud job ClapClap

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Claptoo gud esha keep posting u r also doing a gr8 job hney

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esha hney waiting for ur story where r u buddy

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Soo the story continuessssssssssssssss

 

                                                                    IN THE MORNING SHEFALI IN HER ROOM THINKING HOW TO SEPRATE ARJUN BHUMI(YAAR ISKO JUCH AUR NAHI ATA)

WELLLLLLLLL

SHEFALI:      agar mujhe arjun ko pana hai to mujhe arjun ko bhumi ke kilaf karma ho ga nahi to who nuakerani bhumi arjun ko mujhse se chn lege

AND THEN SUDDENLY YUV COMES THERE

YUVRAJ: kya hua shefali

SHEFALI(still think in her mind): agar mujhe arjun ko pana hai to mujhe ak acchi patni aur bhahu banna parega aur tumhara sath dena hoga taki arjun yakeen ho gaye ki ab min use nahi pana chahti hu and then she says to yuv ki tumne bhumi ke bare kuch socha hai uski wajah se humari puri society mein humari nak kat gayi hai

YUV: tum sahi kehti ho isiliye to mein mama aur dad ke pass ja   raha hu tumbhi chalo (and both of them go to kaka sahib room)

 

IN THE ROOM MAMA AND KAKASAHEB IS TALKING AND YUV,SHEFALI COME THERE

KAKA: us arjun ne bhumika se shadi  kar ke waise hi humari izzat ko uchal diya aur yeh ab baisa ka nay natak accha kushal tumne vakeel se bath ki kuch ho sakta hai ya nahi

MAMA: jeeja legally to kuch nahi ho sakta  aur agar humne kuch illegally kiya to hum hi nuksan hove aur vakkel ka kehna ki baisa ne 25% manasvi ko diya hai aur manasvi uska kuch bhi kar sakti hai. To hum kuch nahi kar sakte hai.

KAKA: KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTE KYA MATLAB HAI TUMHARA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!to kya us nuakrani ko hum 450cr le jane dege

MAMA:jeeja sabr karo

YUV: aur arjun ke factry ka kya hua(now shefali is angry on yuv)

MAMA: bhanje agar bhumika ko 450cr mil gaya na to arjun ek factry  10 factry khol lega

KAKA: to kya kare

MAMA: jaise meine pehl kaha ki ab hume unke beech bhed dalna hoga aur is bhed ki shuruat hum arjun aur bhumi se kare ge .agar hum bhumi ko badnam kar de toooooooooooooooooooooo aur waise bhi  uska koi bhi manasvi ki tarah is ghar mein vishwas nahi karta hai isi liye hume bhumika ko badnam karke is ghar se nikalna hai

SHEFALI: mama ji hume aur bhi asani hogi kyuki shakuntala kaki bhumi ko pasand nahi karti hai

YUV: mama shefali  theek keh rahi hai

KAKA: jo karma hai jaldi karo

AND ALL OF THEM LEAVE FOR OFFICE
 

                                                                           NEXT SCENE

 

Shefali goes to arjun's office ans sees he his working then she thinks ki yahi accha moka arjun se mafi magne ka

SHEFALI knocks the door

ARJUN: come in

As shefali enters arjun look her and says

ARJUN: shefali meine kitni baar kaha hai ab hum ek nahi ho sakte humari zindagi.

SHEFALI: interrupts him and says mein janti hu arjun isi liye to main tumse mafi magne ayi hu(aur wo apne magarmuch ke aasu bhane lagti hai)meine tumhare sath bura kiya na  arjun…

ARJUN : nahi shefali aisa kuch nahi mujhe to khusi hai  shefali ki tumhe apni galti ka ehsas hai

SHEFALI: thaxs arjun tume mujhe maf kar diya . to kay ab hum ak achha dost ban sakte hai  then she  give her hand to her.

ARJUN: thinks and then he olso give his hand(lol)

Just then shefali sees bhumi coming arjun office and  and just then she hug him arjun is not aware about bhumi and think a friend is hugging him so he olso hug her back and then tabak…………………………..the door is open and bhumi enter saying arjun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And dammmmmmmmmmmm she is silent and tear come to her eyes(as usual)and very silently says ARJUN……………..

Arjun seee her and is shoucked and says bhavri ,…………………..aissa kuch nahi

And bhumi go away from there…………………………….arjun run after her saying bhavri bhavri ………………

Shefali says in her mind lo mera kaam to ho gaya.

 

                                                                 NEXT SCENE

Arjun is running after her bhavri and sees her bhavri is in lift  he olso enter and says bhavri meri baat nahi jot um samajh rahi ho

BHUMI: to mein kya samjhu aur kya samjhu

ARJUN: shout at bhumi……… BHAVRI…………………..

BHUMI: is surprise and crying  and go away

ARJUN : becomes angry and go away from there to his office

 

Now guys I amm closing but stay tune more shajish is coming up

byeeeeeee

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Clapmindblowing too gud keep writing

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hey, gr8 wurk... keep it up!!!Smile
LUV, ESHAH

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