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Guys I amm back again

 

After  arjun goes to office bhumi as usual comes to kitchen and see gulwanti ans says sorry about  the morning incident and gulwanti says its okay bhumi but I should be one who have said sorry to you about yuv and vishaka behaviour

 

BHUMI: nahi kaki apka hak mujhe  datne ka hai soory bolne ka nahi and then  ramu kaka(sorry I don't his reel life name so I add the fake name) and says bhumi tumhe shkuntala kaki bula rahi hai and bhumi started  thinking isn't it is a game of shefali

So she asked who told u kaka(smart girl)

Kaka says shkuntala herself . then she ask where is shefali bhabhi so gulwanti says she has gone to office long time before

……………………………as bhumi is thinking gulwanti kaki says u should bhumi may be shakuntala had called u for some work sooooooooo humari pyari bhumi ak adarsh bahu ki jati hai

 

As she enter the room shakuntala is sitting on the bed and says

SHAKUNTALA : wahi ruk jao  bhumi . tum apne ko kya samajhti  ho .kya kiya hai tumne subhah .kyu humare pariwar mein aag laga rahi ho.jab dekho roj na roj arjun mansen bhaishaeb se larta hai aur un sab ki wajah tum hoti ho

Mean while bhumi is listioning all these things and cryingCry

And then MANASVI comes and says mumyji bhumi ne yeh sab jam bhuj ke nahi kiya

SHAKUNTALA: tum beech mein kuch nahi kaho gi manasvi Angry.iis ladki ki wajah se hi humare ghar mein roj na roj tamasha hota hai .ek to assei hi mansen ji  arjun se naraz hai aur iski wajah se aur yeh aag aur doori bar rahi hai

MANASVI: mumyji

BHUMI: bhabhi maji sahi keh rahi hai mein hi to pure ghar mein jhagre ki wajah hu

Par maji aaj mein apse wada karti hu ki aaj se mere wajah se apko ya arjun ko kabhi bhi kaka shaheb se kabhi kuch sunna nahi parega

And poor girl run from there crying

 

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Bhumi in her room crying Cryagain(yaar yeh kab badlegi)Confused

And manasvi comes there

MANASVI: bhumi ……………………. Comes nar to her mujhe pata hai bhumi tumhe bhaout bura lag raha issiliye to mein kehti hu tumhe apne hak ke liye larna hoga

BHUMI: nahi bhabhi yeh mujhse nahi hoga mein nahi jawab de paugi kaka sahib aur unke pariwar ko aur waise bhi mein aap log ki tarah kaha .na to samjhdar ho na hi itni pari likhi

MANASVI: kuan kehta hai kit um samajhdar nahi ho bas tori bohli jo aur baat rahi parne likhne aur rahan shan ki to mein timhe sikhaugi

BHUMI: nahi bhabhi nahi hoga aur aap ko 450 cr bhi kakasaheb ko wapas lo ta dijiye.nahi to bhout badi baat ho jaye gi

MANASVI:  nahi bhumi kuch nahi hoga aur agar tum chahti ho ki tumhe yaha bhahu ka darja mele to tumhe kudh ko unke barabar banana(opps kela)LOL LOLLOLLOL LOL LOL LOL    hoga .tumhe arjun ke darje pe ana hoga .bhumi see her bhabhi in surprise way and saarthi music played

manasvi    continu her talk and says wada karo  tumhe aaj se jo kahugi who tumhe karma hoga and puts her hand in front of her

                                    music is still goingWink

bhumi is thinking and at last gives her hand to manasvi and then shri Krishna comes their and says bhumi ab badalne ka waqt aa gaya hai………………..music goes on

MANASVI: Pehle to tumhe apn bolne ka dhang badalna  hoga  and started giving her instruction and some hour pass by

 

Then bhumi suddenly watches the time and says ohhhhhhhhh manasvi ask kya hua

BHUMI: bhabhi arjun anewala hoga

MANASVI: to ane do na

BHUMI(having tense look): who bhabhi mujhe arjun bahar le jane wala thaaur mein ab tak tayar nahi hu

MANASVI: ohhhhhhhhhooooooooooooooooooooooooo thek hai jao pur ruko kya pehno gi aaj

BHUMI: kuch bhi

MANASVI: are pagal phli baar ja rahi hai kahi bahar who bhi arjun ke saath to kya assiehi jayegi ruk mein tere liye naye kapre layi thi mein to tujhe bhout pehle dene wali thi accha hua nahi diya and manasvi goes to her room.

BHUMI IS STILL THINKING WAT BHABHI IS UPTO AND THEN BHABHI COME BACK HAVE SOME BLACK DRESS

MANASVI: yeh le .

BHABHI: magar bhabhi yeh tooooooooo(guys let it be a secret)

MANASVI: aaj mein tujhe bataogi tayar kaise hote hai and then

 

Manasvi is making her ready telling her how to makeup and all that stuff

 

Meanwhile arjun come home ask the servant where is bhavri and going up shouting bhavri and about step up his eyes gone wide

Aur uske hi nahi sabki yuv,shakti,gulwanti,kushal mama,  siddharth,shaku,baisa,devjidada and kheshav(he came with arjun)and even lord Krishna.all of them was like haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!1

 

 

Now I amm closing .......................who they saw …………………………………………………let it be secret. Pls pls pls may u give me some suggestion to me bur soon I will come back byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee take care but wait next episode would be more interesting……………..

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Posted: 05 August 2005 at 4:45am | IP Logged
its realy nice esha.... keep up the gud wurk..Smile
luv, eshah

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Posted: 05 August 2005 at 6:29am | IP Logged

esha hney u r doing a gr8 wrk

keep posting

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Posted: 05 August 2005 at 6:51am | IP Logged
good job Clap but please add some more elements like comedy, fighting(including mamaji ofcourseWink) etc. beside romance

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U must continue.... you are great....

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Hi guys the story continues

 

AS ALL WERE WATCHING AT STAIRCASE WITH SURPRISE and arjun was like wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and baisa was smiling even bad dadaji and siddharth.ans shefali  face was like red tomato with jealously and just then we see a girl wearing black short sleeveless kurta with parallel salwar and her hair was tied behind loosely and her front hair was coming on her face her face was well makeup and she was wearing a very very beautiful jewellry  .

Now u guys have kwon that girl is none other than our bhumi .mansavi comes from behind and indicate bhumi to step down and as bhumi is coming down arjun is looking her ……………………………..and……………………………………………his look was that he has never seen bhumi or any girl soooooooo beautiful and then shakti says

SHAKTI : bete mu(mouth) band kar makhi gus jayegi

BAISA: are bhumi tu to bhout sunder lag rahi ho kahi jaa rahi ho kya

BHUMI:with innocent look : baisa aaj arjun mujhe…

ARJUN: interpt her nahi baisa asal mein aaj mere friend key aha party hai so I amm going.

BAISA: accha jaoooo

And then arjun and bhumi goes

And shefali was just looking them goingggggggggggggggg and yuvraj was saying her ki yeh behanji bhumi ko tayar hona ka baa gaya………….. ha……and then shefali look at yuv

 

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      Bhumi and arjun is in car and bhumi ask . where are we going and why did arjun told lie to baisa(ohhhhhhh how suit)

 

ARJUN: to kya bolta ki hum dinner karne ja rahe.woh bhi sabke samne

BHUMI:  laugh shyly

ARJUN: waise bhumi aaj tum bhout sunder lag rahi ho

BHUMI: thanks acca yeh batao hum ja kaha rahe??

ARJUN: dekhti jao

And then car stop in front of a beautiful five star hotel and then watchman comes their and open the door for bhumi and ask arjun for the cars keys.arjun give him

BHUMI : arjun tumne use gari ki chabi kyu di agar car chori kar liya to.(toeeeeeeee)

ARJUN: nahi bhavri who humari car parking pe le gaya hai

BHUMI: achha phir bhi koi bharosa nahi mein ja ke dekhti hu

ARJUN:  bhavri bhavri!! Aiisa kuch nahi ho ga

Then arjun and bhumi goes to a restuarent(which on thetopest floor and outdore) and as they enter whole retuarent was sorounded candle and bhumi ask arjun kiisska janamdin hai

Arjun was like ufffffffffffff meri bholi biwi

ARJUN: kakasaheb ka are bhudu yeh to humare liye hai

BHUMI: ohhhhhh thanku. And then music is on playing song kya pyar koroge mujhse(of kuch to hai)

ARJUN : ask bhumi for dance but bhumi says she don't know how to dance

ARJUN: never mind I will teach u and he takes bhavri hand start teaching and was little surprise that she know very well.

ARJUN: are bhavri tumhe to dance karma aata hai

BHUMI: who tv dekha karti thi.

ARJUN:ohhhh and they start dancing and they were dancing they started coming closer …………………………………and arjun hug bhumi and bhumi closes her eyes with shy.and just then they were about to look at their face then a waiter come tell that dinner is ready sir

And then bhumi and arjun is having dinner and bhumi see sea and tell arjun to take her at sea shore after dinner

ARJUN : par bhavri and then see bhavri dipointed face and says yes

After they finishes dinner they go to reception

ARJUN: tum yahi raho bhavri mein reception se aya and he turn around and see his old college friend akash(who was a flirt but yet gud)

 

 AKASH are arjun tum yaha and where is shefali,yaar tum to jante ho na mujhe beech mein hi states jana para

Bhumi listion this and feel sad go from there but arjun say shefali got married to yuvraj and look bhumi face with smile

And she olso smile back

AKASH:Tumhare  bhai se accha jane do aur batao yaar who kubsourat ladki kuan jiise tum abi baat kar rahe the hmmmmmmmmmmmm yaar tu to bada lucky hai Yaar dosti to karao

ARJUN: giving bad look to him and says who khubsurat ladki mere biwi

AKASH : haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii cough and says I amm sorry and says are bhabhi se nahi milayega

ARJUN: aao and both goes near to bhumi……..BHAVri yeh mera friend akash

BHUMI: namaste

ARJUN: aur akash yeh meri biwi bhumika

AKASH: namaste bhabhi yaar chal mujhe states ki liye flight pakarni hai

ARJUN: ghar to ana chahyie tha achha chal bye take care

AKASH: abb to jaroor auuga bhabhi ke hath ka khana khane

Byeeeeeeee

 

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Bhumi and arjun on the sea shore as soon bhumi sees sea she run toward it and start playing with water

 

And arjun started seeing her and only her and then lord Krishna comes their and says kya hua arjun lagta hai bhavri ka pyar tumhare dil pe dastak de raha haiiiiiiiiii hai na…………hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

And arjun start smiling ……………….and then bhumi comes their and say tum bhi chalo……..arjun goes with her and lord Krishna says kash abhi radha yahi hoti

As they both are playing with water bhumi started throwing water on arjun and run and arjun runs behind him and grab her and role her round and bring her near to him and started seeing her and then bhumi olso becomes serious and kiss him on his cheek and just then arjun lift her and and and and and drop her on water and run and bhumi after some pause come to relisation start smiling and runs after him after sometime bhumi says arjun its getting late we shud go home and they return home

 

At nite bhumi goes to temple and says thanku and lord Krishna says are maine kya kiya jo kiya arjun aur tumne kiya .

 

Hey guys I amm closing sooo byeee but soon there be fights and shajish betwen arjun and bhumi soo pls bear me

now my post will contain shajish mama ji and shefali

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all i can say is just "GREAT"Clap cant wait for mamajiWink

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