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esha_cool_girl

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Posted: 04 August 2005 at 1:35pm | IP Logged

ARJUN: (GETTING READY FOR OFFICE)-- BHAVRI BHAVRI KAHA HO TUM MERI TIE KAHA HAI AUR MERA WALLET KAHA HAI

BHUMI: AA RAHI HU BABA (AND SHE JUST ENTERED IN THE ROOM) ARE WAHI TO BED PAR DEKH NAHI SAKTE

and arjun sees on the bed and smileTongue bhumi olso smile and just moving toward arjun and sudenlyshe slips and fall on arjun and they fAll on the bed TongueWinkand then......................................they just look each other Wink.BHUMI PUT HER EYES DOWN WITH SHYEmbarrassed AND ARJUN STILL LOOKING AT HER AND ARJUN IS GIVING HER PASSAINATE LOOK WITHOUT ANY BREAK ClapAND JUST MANASVI COMES AND LOOK THEM AND SMILE AND COUGH SERCASTICALLYLOL .AND SHEFALI OLSO WATCHING IT AND GOT JEALOUS AngryWITH IT AND GO AWAYAngryOuch

MEAN WHILE BHUMI ARJUN SEES AND GOT UP VERY QUICKLY AND BHUMI SAYS

BHUMI: BHABHI ASAL MEIN MEIN.........................

MANASVI: MEIN SAB JANTI HU AND SMILE .............................WAISE BHI PATI PATNI KE BEECH AISSE ACCIDENT HOTE REHTE AUR WAIS BHI ARJUN TUMHE SATYA BULA RAHE HAI

ARJUN : HA BHABHI MEIN AA RAHA HU

and then arjun goes off

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NEXT SCENE

now bhumi olso comes down in kitchen and start making making breakfast and she is taking it down to the dinning table and

and shefali come near to her and make her slip and suddenly her hand slip Confusedand the dish fall on clothes Confusedofffffffffffffffffffffffffff.............................

noe pls tell me u liked it or not and then i will cotinue

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Posted: 04 August 2005 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
hey, its good. I'm currently writing a fan fiction too, its made a sticky. Go ahead and have a read, it'll be great if you could comment on it to.

Mrs.Fr..

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Posted: 04 August 2005 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
nice keep it up...........................write fast ....................or thora zayada haan.......................Big smile

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Posted: 04 August 2005 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
yah please continue..........i like both scenes....Clap

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Posted: 04 August 2005 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
KEEP IT UP Clap

kggkgrl11591

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Posted: 04 August 2005 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
I really like it. Its soooo cute. Who knows wen Bhoomi and Arjun will really gett romantic! lol

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Posted: 05 August 2005 at 12:25am | IP Logged

Well now I amm going to continue my fiction.

Story begins: as bhumika was going with the dish the bad evil shefali made her slip and all the dish was falln on the clothes of KAKA SHAHEBLOLand then all the ppl of family stand  with surprise on on hand ARJUN was smiling . MANASVI was olso smiling sarcastically  and just then yuvraj shouts at bhumi

YUVRAJ: bhumika agar dekh kar chalna nahi ata to apne kamre mein bhatoi raha karo.

{and tears came in the eyes of bhumiCry}\and then arjun start protecting her

ARJUN: yuvraj  bhumi se galti  ho gayi  who to bas apna kam kar rahi thiDead

 

VISHKHADead : galti tum ise galti kehte ho arjun bhumi ne dad ka itna mehga suit kharab kar diya aur waise bhi bhumi ne is tarah ke kapre  dekhe kaha hone

ARJUN : shouts VISHAKA!(gud workWink )

YUVRAJ: ARJUN BHUMI ne jan bhuj  yeh  kiya hai tum log hamesha haemin neecha dikhana chat ho magar bhumi have to pay it off

And just then baisa comes their and scold yuvraj and kaka shaheb who was all silent shouts at baisa ki why the hell she always siddharth family

KAKASHAHEB: mujhe acchi tarah pata hai  yeh sab bhumi ne jaan bhuj ke kiya hai

And bhumi says : nahi kakasaheb…………..

KAKA SAHEB:\shutupConfused

GULWANTI : comes their and tell koi baat nahi bhumika and turn aroud and tell kakasaheb chaliye mein apke liye naya kapre nikal deti hu

and bhumi olso goes from their crying Cryand arjun feel very sad for hurt(akhir is bewakoof ko kab samajh mein ayega that he loves her)Confused 

 

ShefaliAngry who was watching all this felt very happy and goes to her room

 

                                                            NEXT SCENE

SHEFALIAngry : goes to her room and says to her self bhout shok tha use fisalne ka ab kabhi bhi sapne mein bhi  fisalne ka nahi soche gi

 

And just then yuvraj comes their  ans says himat kaise huyi us nuakrani  dad ke sath aissa karne ki 

SHFALIAngry: tum to jante ho yuv bhumi ko to arjun ki sheh mile hu hai  jab tak wo dono sath hai hum log  ko neeca dikhate rhahege  

YUV : tum theek kehti ho kuch na kuch to karma hi parega and he goes to office

SHEFALI OLSO HAVE WINNING SMILE ON HER FACE

 

                                                           Next scene

 

Bhumi is sitting on sofa having tear in her eyes and arjun comes their  and see her and comes sit next to her  and says

ARJUN: mujhe nahi pata tha kaka sahib khane the tarika tha pata hota yeh shubh kaam mein kar detaLOLLOL

Bhumi cant stop her smilingLOL  

Arjun continue

ARJUN: well tumhara khana khilane ka style bhout accha hai magar pls yeh mujhpe mat try karna. Janti ho mujhe to kaka sahib ko dekh kar bari hasi aa rahi thiLOL

BHUMI : with a smile says magar arjun yeh maine jaan bhuch kar nahi kiya

Arjun put his finger on her lips and says shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhEmbarrassed

ARJUN : mujhe pata hai aur jis bhavri mein janta hu use logo ke bhalayi  ke bare mein sochne se fursat mele tab na kissi ka nuksan kare magar bhumi itni acchayi bhi acchi nahi  tumhe apne  bare mein sochna chayie

BHUMI: mere bare sochne ke liye tum ho na and both of them smile amd hug each other tightly

 

ARJUN: theek hai madam to phir aaj hum apko diiner  pe le jayege   so ready hoi jana sham ko 8 bhaje

BHUMI : pakka tumhe office mein phir se to koi kaam nahi ayega and smile

ARJUN: smile and kiss her forhead and smile ansd says bye

 

Guys now I amm tied of writing  but soon on next episode u will have more romatic scene off arjun and bhumi so keep  reading and do give ur suggestion byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 05 August 2005 at 2:11am | IP Logged
wow esha u r also doing a gr8 wrk hney

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