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Masti- Part 17 Pg 39.... P-M scene (Page 9)

Fashion101 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 June 2007 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
Nice Promo and can't wait of the part.



spring92 Goldie

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Posted: 25 June 2007 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
awesome fanfic! it has all my favorite jodi's. continue soon Embarrassed
Marauders IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 June 2007 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Thanks fashion101,subhag and spring 92, I am very happy that so many of u like this ff so far and are commenting, thanks a lot guysssssss Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed I am done with my exams finally- yayyyyyyyyyyyy and eagerly waiting for my report card. The next part will take me some time so please have patience Tongue
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Posted: 26 June 2007 at 7:18pm | IP Logged


Part 1.

Angad! Wake up! Robbie yelled on top of his lungs.
Angad sleepily: Robbie, go away and let me sleep.
Robbie getting annoyed: You idiot. We have to go to university today, we're getting late. GET UP!
Angad gets up and rubs hus yes: Jesus. You don't let me do anything in peace. And since when did you start to wake up early?
Robbie: Whatever. I had set my alarm, next time I am not gonna wake you up, you have your alarm clock and that should do it.
Angad yawns: Is Prem up yet?
Robbie: No. and he adds angrily: and I am gonna have to go and wake him up, and he storms off to Prem's room.
Robbie's mouth drop open: Omg! Phir se?
Angad comes there: Phir se kya?
Robbie points to Angad's bed.
Angad smirks: Yeh to hum se bhi do kaddam aage hai/
There is a girl lying beside Prem who is shirtless and her head if on her bare chest.
Robbie shakes his head: Angad go wake up the girl and I'll wake up Prem.
Angad: Ok.
He walks upto the girl and picks her up.
Robbie cocks an eyebrow: I think I told you to wake her up not pick her up. and he adds grinning: I could have done that myself.
Angad shrugs: Whatever, I am just gonna throw her into some cab, you never know how she'll react when she wakes up and sees 3 guys around her.

With much great effort Robbie manages to wake Prem up.
Prem yawns: I am up, happy?
Robbie: Yeah. Very. Go take a shower now, do I have to give you instructions for every single thing?

While Prem is showering Robbie and Angad are thinking of a way to have some fun.
Angad: I have an idea.
He whispers it to Robbie and they both give each other a thumbs up.

Angad and Robbie goes to the basement and turns off the water's main switch(Not sure what you call it).
Angad: Get ready to hear a scream One, Two, Three.
Angad and Robbie cover their ears with their hands and soon enough Prem screams: AHHHHHHHH! What the hell?
Robbie and Angad goes up running to his room.
Robbie pretending: Prem, what happened? Everything all right?
Angad trying hard to control his laughter: Are you ok lil bro?
Prem getting angry: Tou f***** idiots, why'd you turn off the water? Arrr, I am taking a shower and you..... Angry Angry oh come on.. please turn the water back on.
Angad trying to sound iccocent: Man we didn't do anything.
Robbie: Yeah, and he adds with a fake angry expression: and if you don't believe us then just come and turn the water on yourself.
Prem: I would! Bit I have shampoo in my hair. I can't...
Angad cuts him off: We ain't turning anything on. Not after you called your smart brothers- oops i mean me a f**** idiot.
Robbie glares at him: I am smart too ok?
Angad scartches his eyebrow: yeah, from what angle?
Angad ignores him: Ok so prem you just come out and do whatever you want.
Prem curses them and comes out in a towel around his waist, shampoo in his hair, soap around his body amd shaving cream on his face which is half shaved.

Prem frowns and turns the water back on, unaware of the fact that Robbie and Angad are taking his pictures.
Prem finally completes his shave and shower and they all finally go to college after loads of masti.

Okie, so there was the first part, I know it wasn't well written, but first parts for me are always a challange to write, I know there wasn't too much masti or anything but I promise in future there will be loads, and this part was supposed to be longer a lot longer actually, but my typing speed is really slow right now lolz, I will try to continue almost everyday now with long parts, next part will be how the sharma's live and stuff, and please do comment on this part, please don't just say grt part,or awesome part,please comment beyond that, and if you have any suggestions then feel free to tell me- by PM.
Take care. Embarrassed

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 26 June 2007 at 7:19pm
-Ami- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 June 2007 at 7:28pm | IP Logged
wow that was a great part..
hehe it was funny... LOL
smart how they took his pictures..
Xo-PuZen Goldie

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Posted: 26 June 2007 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
plz continue soon..
you've got a new fan of your ff and you*LOL* Tongue
dieing to read the next part...
Aisha Embarrassed
xoxsubhaxox IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2007 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
haha too funny...
i love how they are all close and play funny pranks on eachother!! and ontop of that the pictures!! hmm i wonder wut they will do with them Confused LOL
plz cont soon..cant wait to see how the girls are Big smile
cheeselova IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2007 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
gr8 part


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