tere pyaar mein fanaa(sg)note pg 4

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Posted: 16 years ago

it has been a wek with shiv-gauri's wedding.all the other ceremonis have also taken place.shiv is really frustrated with gauri.gauri has considered it as hr destiny.she has accepted her marriage as the fruit of all her deeeds(apne karmo ka phal)

a fresh morning

gauri comes out after taking her shower.shiv just wakes up.he stretches his arms to drop of all the laziness.

gauri is wearing a simple baby pink saree.she is drying hr hair .while drying hr hair with th towel ,she is proceeding 2wards the dressing table.shiv also gets up frm th bed and moves 2wards the washroom.gauri didn't notice shiv's shoes lying on the floor and she slips but a pair of strong muscular arms holds her frm falling.we see his deep brown eyes,then his lips .it's none other than shiv kapoor

some of gauri's wet hair r on shiv's face .shiv is holding gauri by her waist.

background music

aaaahhhhh
yeh tera mera milna
yun dilo ka khilna
yeh hai khuda ki marzi
yuhi nahi hain yaar

yeh tera paas aana
yun nazarein milana
yeh hai khuda ki marzi
yuhi nahi hai yaar

[tere bin tere bin dil naiyo lagya
O tere bin tere bin dil naiyo lagta]2

aaaahhhhh
yeh tera mera milna
yun dilo ka khilna
yeh hai khuda ki marzi
yuhi nahi hain yaar

yeh tera paas aana
yun nazarein milana
yeh hai khuda ki marzi
yuhi nahi hai yaar

[tere bin tere bin dil naiyo lagya
O tere bin tere bin dil naiyo lagta]2
aaaahhhhh

dhadkan ki madhoshiyaan
marti hai nazdikiyaan
ek bahaane se
ek to hai bekhabar baki sab ko khabar hai jahano mein

sari umeedein meri
hogi mukamal tere
ek nibhane se
jodi sab ki milaye rab jodiyaan banaye aasmano mein
aasmano mein

yeh tera mera milna
yun dilo ka khilna
yeh hai khuda ki marzi
yuhi nahi hain yaar

[tere bin tere bin dil naiyo lagya
O tere bin tere bin dil naiyo lagta]3

becheniyo ke yeh pal
kyon janeja aajkal
yun satate hain
tere ishq mein mujhse beqarariyan
mili hai nazrano mein

yaadon ke lamhay bhi
tujhko hi har kahi
kyon bulate hai
dil ki anjuman tum
tum hi rehti ho mere afsano mein
afsano mein

yeh tera mera milna
yun dilo ka khilna
yeh hai khuda ki marzi
yuhi nahi hain yaar

[tere bin tere bin dil naiyo lagyia]

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Posted: 16 years ago
kl FF plz continue love da start!!! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
thx.i m ready with the next part but i m not getting many replies.
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Posted: 16 years ago
oooo plz can u continue i realli love ur FF πŸ˜† plz plz pity plz with cherry on top 😳 can u continue πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pink_09

oooo plz can u continue i realli love ur FF πŸ˜† plz plz pity plz with cherry on top 😳 can u continue πŸ˜†

how sweet.i'll try and continue 2day

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Posted: 16 years ago
if i get 7 more replies i'll update the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
part2
shiv felt a different sort of feeling flowing thru his body.he soon realised thatr how closed he and gauri were.he drooped her in an instant.gauri had not expected this.
g:ouch
shiv without saying a word went inside the washroom.
gauri dried her hair .while she was applying sindoor in her maang,she saw shiv in the mirror.(shiv had come out of the bathroom by that time)shiv also turned around and saw thru the mirrormirror.both were seeing each other thru the mirror.gauri filled her maang with the sindoor.
shiv somewhere felt happy deep inside her heart but he ignored this feeling.
background

shiv gauri mantra

next scene
both shiv and gauri were sitting at the breakfast table.
vivaan:bhai,after 3 days,i've thrown a bash 4 we youngsters on the ocassion of ur wedding
s:wat?
shiv choked on his food
v:yes!i guess,ipshita will help gauri with her dressand every stupid thing that a gurl reqiures 4 a party.
ipshita:VIVAAN!
v:just kidding yaar
i:hey gauri u know u'll be the first 1 to start the dance.isn't that romantic?
g:oh no!i don't know how 2 dance
i:oh my god!u know it's like a parampara here that the wedding couple is supposed 2 start the dance.
g(worried)but..
i:don't worry.shiv will teach u.
shiv choked on his food while gauri forgot how 2 breathe.she felt numb.
ipshita ,anupam and vivaan somehow convinced shiv to teach her dance.

at night
s:GAURI COME FAST.I DON'T HAVE TIME TO WAIT 4 U 2 TURN UP SO THAT I CAN TEACH U
gauri came running frm downstairs

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Posted: 16 years ago
part3
gauri came up

shiv:gauri,i m not ur servant.
g:(softly):



shiv ,i know how 2 dance.i just said so,so that u don't have 2 dance with me.i know u don't like me being around.i m sorry 4 the trouble i've created 4 u.

shiv felt sad and dissappointed,why was she saying sorry.she was his wife .she didn't need 2 say sorry 2 him.WIFE did he say wife.wat was happening to him.gauri is his wife just 4 the sake....
his thought were cut in betwn by gauri
g:(softly)shiv
s:(angrily)gauri plz behave like a true lady in the party.plz don't be like a silly village gurl.
gauri felt bad but she knew that shiv was not at fault.why was she thinking abt shiv.she was here at shiv's house with an aim.she had a mission 2 complete here.


party scene
shiv was down with his frends.
shiv was luking like this.


at the party but his eyes were searching 4 gauri.he was confused.was the strenght of marriage so strong that it could bind 2 strangers who barely knew each other.to divert his mind he spotted a hot chick in the party and started flirting with her.soon he started singing along with flirting with that chick.


Ishq hai...
(teri aankhon ke matvaale kaajal ko mera salaam
zulfon ke kale kale baadal ko mera salaam) - 2
ghayal kar de mujhe yaar tere paayal ke jhankar
hey soni sone teri soni har adaa ko salaam
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq - 2
(ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-) - 2 ishq hai....

ho teri mastaani anjaani bataon ko mera salaam
rangon mein doobi doobi raaton ko mera slaaam
khwaabon mein kho gayi main deewani ho gayi main
soney soney aisse soney har adaa ko salaam
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq - 2
(ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-) - 2 ishq hai....

ho teri hathhawitch mehandi ka rang khila hain
tujhe sapano da changa mehboob mila hain
meri banno pyaari pyaari sari duniya se nyaari
ise doli mein tu leja doliyaan, doliyaan...

teri meri nazar jo mili pehli baar
ho gaya ho gaya tujhse pyaar
dil hai kya dil hai kya jaan bhi tujhpe nisaar
maine tujhe kiya aitbaar
ho main bhi toh tujhpe mar gayi
deewanapan kya kar gayi
meri har dhakan betaab hai
palkon vich tera khwaab hai
ho jaan se bhi pyaari pyaari jaaniya ko salaam
salaam-e-ishq, (salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq) - 2
(ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e) - 2 ishq hai....

main tere ishq mein do jahan vaar doon
mere vaade pe kar le yakeen
keh rahe hai zameen keh raha aasman
tere jaissa dooja nahin
ho aisse jaadoon na daal ve
naa aaon tere naal ve
jhooti tereefein chodh de
ab dil mere dil se jod de
ho jo abhi hai dil se nikli uss dua ko salaam
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq - 2
(ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-) - 2 ishq hai....

rab se hai iltija maaf kar de mujhe
main toh teri ibaadat karoon
aye meri soniye na khabar hai tujhe
tujhase kitni mohobbat karoon
tere bin sab kuch benoor hai
meri maang mein tere sindoor hai
sanson mein yehi paigaam hai
mera sab kuch tere naam hai
ho dhadkanon mein rehnewaali soniye ko salaam
salaam-e-ishq
teri aankhon ke matvaale kaajal ko mera salaam
zulfon ke kale kale baadal ko mera salaam
khwaabon mein kho gayi main deewani ho gayi main
soney soney teri soney har adaa ko salaam
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq - 2
(ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-) - 3 ishq hai....
salaam-e-ishq


gauri entered wearing this


shiv :ooh


shiv was amazed to see gauri in western dress .he had always considered her to be gawaar type but she was different.though she was wearing mini skirt,then also she was luking descent.shiv had never expected gauri to be so angelic and beautiful.even in short dress she luke innocent.before shiv could come out of this shock his frends dragged him to the dance floor
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Posted: 16 years ago
just read whole story
it is good
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pink_09

klkl plz continue xx

thx