Chocolate_luver
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It was a dusky night, the trees echoed, whispering to each other, lightning splashed here and there in the pitch black sky, and a black car is seen driving on an isolated road surrounded by tall trees and bushes, and then the camera takes you inside the car we see the person driving by parts. It was a tanned guy with a good complexion, with sparkling green eyes; his dark, rich brown hair was jelled with a few pieces lying on his forehead like a fringe. He has a sharp nose, he seemed to be tall, now you see the whole face and it is none other than Angad, he drives slowly in the dark when all of a sudden the car screeches. He gets out to check what happened, he opens the bonnet, when he feels something pinned against his forehead he looks to find a petit girl, with long chocolate brown hair, with a tan complexion, she had sweet pink lips, he then looked into her twinkling blue eyes, the camera now focuses on the whole figure it was none other than kripa. Angad then looks up to see what was pinned against his forehead, it was a GUN. "It's her", he said to himself.
Okay guys this is my third fanfic, my other fanfic are desire which is finishing really soon and the other is unpredictable…well here was like the intro..Tell me whether I should continue.. plzz comment telling me
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