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Life and Crime( Cont.) (Page 48)

princessunara IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 3:58am | IP Logged

wow..beautiful part bhaiEmbarrassed

da 1st meeting between lil bhoomi n her papa s soo touching..n da lines MM says abt relationships dsnt need memories bt feelings s such a beautiful line..da get 2gether f da small family,cz dats wt t s,s sooo wonderful..Clap

shayurya thnking abt his relationships wth people who luved him..reminiscensing da happy past was also very touching..da way he thought abt deepika as an older sis..da bonds between all f them..u hav dealt wth a lot f emotions n dis perfectly done..i jst luved tEmbarrassed

waiting 4 da next when u read a bit, all u can thnk s i need 2  knw wts happenning more dan intriguing..da story s touching..nt jst wanting..u jst need 2 knw...Embarrassed

creddy Senior Member

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Wow!!!What a comeback...loved both the parts...they were superb...Especaily the scenes btw Pratham & Bhoomi were so cute & emotional....can't wait to read the next parts...please post it soon
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 10:19am | IP Logged
wowowow its awesome thx dear sooo sweet. Clap
maha_prakrti IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 June 2008 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Aww... Pratham jaanu ko sab yaad aa raha hai Bhai.... How sweet! Embarrassed Such me bachon ke effect se koi nahi back sakta.... Princess and Magicman make a cute jodi... Magicman ki umar Bhoomi's se sirf do teen bada LOL Pratham bhi naa... Lekin pappa pappa sunke uncle use thoda ajeeb laga, lekin keh nahi paya! Clap

Bhai wonderful writing.... Prithvi is such a dear friend and understands Shaurya gaddha so much Wink
gauriandme Groupbie

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 8:09am | IP Logged
This was very cute episode. I loved Pratham-Bhoomi's encounter scene very much. Post the next part soon.

princessunara IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 July 2008 at 11:37am | IP Logged
bhai missing ur FF soo much.... pls post da next part soon..plssssssssEmbarrassed
sunny8410M Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2008 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessunara

bhai missing ur FF soo much.... pls post da next part soon..plssssssssEmbarrassed
I will try my best to post the next parts soon. Thanks a lot Sunara for commentingSmile

Edited by SAMAR KAPOOR - 04 September 2008 at 8:40am
Amina90 Goldie

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Posted: 05 September 2008 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Great fanfic. Please continue soon.

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