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Originally posted by berkeleygirl818

noooo!!!! i LOVED it... i woke up, nd jumped on my computer to see if u
had updated, nd u did!!!! YAY!!! Embarrassed tht was sooooo f-ing cool, Angad nd
Dev talking all gangsta language, lmao... TOTALLY WICKED!!! Clap
Clap the way u
described Kajjal, Kripa, Dev, & Angad, i cud totally visualize them in my
head, Kaajjal nd Kripa were ok, but Dev & Angad, wow, hot!!! lol!!! u have
an amazing talent!!! i CANNOT wait to find out wht will happen between
AK nd DK, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE cotninue soon!!! Tongue

AWWWW THANKS!!!Big smile heheh yeh i think it hotter if they tlk like that lolzLOL.. aw  thnx Embarrassedi love writing parts describing what they whereLOL

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Originally posted by nehagupta_9

Awesome part... kool dats y hes a poolboy loll thats funny

lolz yehLOL thanks!!!Big smile

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Originally posted by pal89711

hey really awesome part.....wat is going 2 happen next can't wait 2 read continue soon...... Smile plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon............. Wink

 

aww thanks, glad you liked it....i'll continue later on todaySmile

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Originally posted by candyprincess

great part

thankssssBig smile

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Posted: 28 May 2007 at 5:14am | IP Logged

Originally posted by angullgrl91

omg. totally awesome part~!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait 4 da next part. cont soon.

aww thank youSmile...i'll continue soon

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Posted: 28 May 2007 at 5:16am | IP Logged

Originally posted by erier101

awesomeful partss!!! haha kripa shell-shockeddd!! love angad and dev's relationship, they are such cool bros!! wonder waht angad will do.. prolly some close dancing with ehr.. nd kripa'd be all enjoying cept go, what are u doing u poolboy.. lol.. .girlss i tell uuu!! *shakes her head* Continue Soon!!

LOLLOLLOLlolz thanxx.....lol yep i love writing theior parts ...nope kripa will get dissed their a little preview LOL

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Originally posted by Rejected

that was so good lol i would love to see angads expression at that moment...god that would have been so good to see Kripa all shocked when looking at angad at a club and stuff....you have to continue soon that was a great part, i love all your fan fic and your are really putting this fan fic to a very good start....keep up the great work, cant not wait for the next part Tongue

heheh yup lolLOL i would like to see kripa's , aww thank you glad you like my ff'sBig smileSmile

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Part 3

Kripa just freezes staring at angad until she gets out of her trance and drags Kaajal away from the dance floor

Ka- what happened, why you so scared

Kr- omgshh Kaajal his following me

Ka- what on earth are you talking about?

Kr- you know how I was talking about my new pool boy, well guess what he is here

Ka- omgshh kripa seriously your such a drama queen, just because he is here doesn't mean his following you

Kr- Kaajal what would he be doing at club, I mean his a pool boy no offence aren't they supposed to be poor or something

Ka- well maybe his not

Kr- please who would be stupid enough to get a job if they were rich

Ka- man kripa you'll never change, newaiz which one is he

Kripa then points to Angad, they are standing in corner

Ka- damn kripa gotta admit his really hot, omgshh his friend so hot , but its strange I've seen him somewhere

Kripa who didn't realize her finger was still pointing at angad until angad himself saw and smirked

A- so what do you say huh dev

D- angad I don't know

A- chicken whatever I'm off I'll be back later

D- alrite

Angad starts slowly walking over to kripa , where kripa is getting nervous seeing him coming over to her

Kr- oh no Kaajal his coming run

Ka- omg kripa chill he aint following you, you know he might not be interested in you, probably just wants to say hi

Kr- please, of course he is, I mean every guy is interested in me


Angad finally reaches them, kripa thought he was coming for her.

A- hey beautiful

K- hi(with attitude)

A- umm I wasn't talking to you I was talking to her, pointing to Kaajal

Kripa who is just thinking wtf , as its normally her that gets the attention just rolls her eyes

A- may I have a dance with you , Kaajal looks at kripa

Ka- um okay , kripa your alrite alone rite

Kr- (attitude) yeh go on I'll be fine

Ka- okay see ya later

And they both go to the dance floor dancing to:

Mariah Carey- It's like that

Dis is, the point when I need everybody get to the dance floor
It's like that y'all (that y'all), that y'all (that y'all)
Da da da da, I like that y'all (that y'all)
It's like that y'all (that y'all), that y'all (that y'all)
Like that, that, that, that, I like that y'all (that y'all) MC

[Mariah Carey:>

[Verse 1:>
I came to have a party
Open off the Bacardi
Feeling so hot tamale
Boy, I know you watchin me
So what's it gonna be?
Purple taking me higher
I'm lifted and I like it
Boy, you got me inspired
Baby, come and get it
If you're really feelin me

[Bridge:>
Cuz it's my night
No stress, no fights
I'm leavin it all behind
No tears, no time to cry
Just makin the most of life

[Chorus:>
Everybody is livin it up (Uh)
All the fellas keep lookin' at us (cuz)
Me and my girls on the floor like what
While the DJ keeps on spinnin the cut
It's like that y'all (that y'all), that y'all (that y'all)
It's like that, that, that, that, I like that y'all (that y'all)
It's like that y'all (that y'all), that y'all (that y'all)
It's like that, that, that, that, I like that y'all (that y'all)




Kripa on the other hand was watching them , it made her jealous Angry , she hadn't been rejected before or not being paid attention to , she was getting bored she saw dev at the bar and thought to strike up a conversation with him.

Kr- hi I'm kripa, your Angad's friend right?

D- yep, I'm dev nice meeting you

Kr- same with you

Angad who saw this sight didn't like it.

A- hey lets go to the bar

Ka- okay

A- hey guys

D- hey your back I was just talking to kripa, sees Kaajal now…."and who is this beautiful girl"

Kaajal just blushes Embarrassed Embarrassed

Kr- she is Kaajal my best friend

D- nice meeting you…. Could I have a dance with you

Ka- sure

Kripa who got angrier this was the second guy today, angad who saw her expression knew what she was thinking about and just grinned

A- do you wanna dance

K- ( with attitude) I don't dance with pool boys

Angad just smirked, as she didn't know the truth

A- suit yourself and he walks off to the dance floor

Kripa just stays at the bar getting bored after 10 minutes she decided to leave without telling any one she leaves the club without knowing angad had saw her.

He just grinned and decided to follow her to her house, he knew she was heading for home.



Well here was the next part, short i know sorry, promise next part will be longer...well hope you like ...please leave comments!!!oh and btw i didn't prrof read it so there might be mistakes

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