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HEyyy awesome part... hes rich??? then y da flip is he a poolboy??? INterestin... cnt wait to read da nxt part!!!
p.s. Luv ur other ff as well!

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sweetangle04

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Posted: 26 May 2007 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
hmmm great first part...
wondering why a rich guy would work as a pool boy..interesting twist..nice work dear..you r building suspense from the first part itself..great going..continue soon

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Posted: 26 May 2007 at 11:31pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by nehagupta_9

HEyyy awesome part... hes rich??? then y da flip is he a poolboy??? INterestin... cnt wait to read da nxt part!!!
p.s. Luv ur other ff as well!

thanksBig smileSmile...lol you'll know in part 2..which i'll be posting shortly

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Posted: 26 May 2007 at 11:32pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by sweetangle04

hmmm great first part...
wondering why a rich guy would work as a pool boy..interesting twist..nice work dear..you r building suspense from the first part itself..great going..continue soon

 

aww thanksSmile posting next part soon

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Posted: 26 May 2007 at 11:35pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by berkeleygirl818

ahhhh... ur killing me here... this FF sounds soooooo GUD!! nd the first
prt was WICKED AWESUM!!! Clap
Clap wow... Kripa is Little Miss Attitude...
nice... nd Angad is a Hottie with an Attitude... double nice... i have a
feeling they will have loads of fights, which will be AMAZING, lol... nd
same here hun, i LOVE guys with studs... so damn hot!!! lol... nd WTF...
Angad is RICH!!! why does he work as a pool boy... mayb he is trying to
improve Kripa or sumthing like tht... tht'd be REALLY cool!!! lol... CANNOT
wait to read more... nd PARTYYYY, sounds WICKED... continue soon!!!  Tongue

lol LOLLOL thanks , glad you like the first part , hehehe i think its absoutluely hot when a guy has a stud hehehehe, lol oh heck no will he try to improve her heheheLOL Wink

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part 2

Hey guys angad is 20 and kripa is 18 turning 19


The other guy on the line is now shown and it is dev

D- hey bro wassup

A- nuthin man you know work


D- whoa what angad Khanna and work


A- oh shut up

D- so what this you and work, come on spill it

A- well you know how I told dad I wanted to move out and for him to buy me a place, he said no right and you know me and my big mouth had to say "please I'll do anything" well he goes "anything", me being a idiot said, "yes" and that when he goes you have to get a dumb job so yeh that how I ended up getting a job as a pool boy

D- who was just laughing, and so you chose being a pool boy and he laughs

A- oy dude shut up

A- omg bro you should see the girl that lives there man, she thinks she is miss universe seriously, such a high maintenance brat

D- whoa guess some one had a bad day, well is she hot

A- damn Yeh , too bad she is brat could have hooked up with her you summer fling

D- man Angad bro you'll never change

A I know

D- newaiz what you doing tonight

A- nuthin bro , lets hit the club tonight

D- sure , what time

A- lets say around 8

D- alrite dude I gotta bounce , see ya at the club

A- yeh laterz

Now we go back to Kripa's place. It's 6pm and the door bell rings. Kripa goes and answers it as she knew it would be Kaajal and she was right.

Kr- hey

Ka- hey

Kr- about time you're here

Ka- sorry

Kr- its kewl

Ka- newaiz how ya day been

Kr- all good except girl, guess what I got a new pool boy

Ka- and so what's the problem

Kr- his hot that's the problem

Ka- yeh and what let me guess he didn't pay attention to you

Kr- YES!!

Ka- seems like an interesting guy

Kr- shut up, newaiz forget about him lets go get ready for the club

Ka- sure let's go


They both headed up to Kripa's room and got ready and hour later Kaajal came out wearing a red halter dress, with her hair left out straightened, with a little makeup. Kripa on the other hand looked absolutely stunning for sure she would get attention tonight and she knew it.

She wore a black strapless dress with light silver jewelry, her hair was out in curls, she had applied make up, and wore mathichng high heels. They were both ready in no time and left for the club.

On the other side two guys have just entered the club , one that is wearing light faded jeans and a white stripped shirt with his hair wet and gelled in spikes with a sliver chain on yes he was none other than dev.

The other guy was wearing a black shirt, dark faded kind of baggy jeans with a sliver chain, a stud in one of his ear, and his hair was spiked as well with some of his hair falling over his forehead (hope you get what I mean). It was none other than angad.

They enter in and head to the bar and sat themselves down ordering two drinks

D- Man check out the girls tonight

A Yeh looks like it's gonna be a fun night today and he grins

Kripa and Kaajal enter the club by this time and go straight to the dance floor right in the middle as Kripa's favorite dance was playing , her and Kaajal danced while the guys were drooling over kripa and Kaajal the girls were just giving them dirties but kripa and Kaajal just continued to dance to


Shakira hips don't lie

Ladies up in here tonight
No fighting, no fighting
We got the refugees up in here
No fighting, no fighting

Shakira, Shakira

I never really knew that she could dance like this
She makes a man wants to speak Spanish
Como se llama (si), bonita (si), mi casa (si, Shakira Shakira), su casa
Shakira, Shakira

Oh baby when you talk like that
You make a woman go mad
So be wise and keep on
Reading the signs of my body

And I'm on tonight
You know my hips don't lie
And I'm starting to feel it's right
All the attraction, the tension
Don't you see baby, this is perfection

Hey Girl, I can see your body moving
And it's driving me crazy
And I didn't have the slightest idea
Until I saw you dancing

And when you walk up on the dance floor
Nobody cannot ignore the way you move your body, girl
And everything so unexpected - the way you right and left it
So you can keep on shaking it

I never really knew that she could dance like this
She makes a man want to speak Spanish
Como se llama (si), bonita (si), mi casa (si, Shakira Shakira), su casa
Shakira, Shakira

Oh baby when you talk like that
You make a woman go mad
So be wise and keep on
Reading the signs of my body

And I'm on tonight
You know my hips don't lie
And I am starting to feel you boy
Come on lets go, real slow
Don't you see baby asi es perfecto

Oh I know I am on tonight my hips don't lie
And I am starting to feel it's right
All the attraction, the tension
Don't you see baby, this is perfection
Shakira, Shakira

Oh boy, I can see your body moving
Half animal, half man
I don't, don't really know what I'm doing
But you seem to have a plan
My will and self restraint
Have come to fail now, fail now
See, I am doing what I can, but I can't so you know
That's a bit too hard to explain

Baila en la calle de noche
Baila en la calle de da

Baila en la calle de noche
Baila en la calle de da

I never really knew that she could dance like this
She makes a man want to speak Spanish
Como se llama (si), bonita (si), mi casa (si, Shakira Shakira), su casa
Shakira, Shakira

Oh baby when you talk like that
You know you got me hypnotized
So be wise and keep on
Reading the signs of my body

Senorita, feel the conga, let me see you move like you come from Colombia

Mira en Barranquilla se baila as, say it!
Mira en Barranquilla se baila as

Yeah
She's so sexy every man's fantasy a refugee like me back with the Fugees from a 3rd world country
I go back like when 'pac carried crates for Humpty Humpty
I need a whole club dizzy
Why the CIA wanna watch us?
Colombians and Haitians
I ain't guilty, it's a musical transaction
No more do we snatch ropes
Refugees run the seas 'cause we own our own boats

I'm on tonight, my hips don't lie
And I'm starting to feel you boy
Come on let's go, real slow
Baby, like this is perfecto

Oh, you know I am on tonight and my hips don't lie
And I am starting to feel it's right
The attraction, the tension
Baby, like this is perfection

No fighting
No fighting



Dev who had spotted them both dancing said to angad

D- aye bro check those two hotties out in the middle

Angad who turns around grins looking at kripa, Dev notices this

D- what you grinning about

A- dude you know how I was talking about that girl who thinks she's miss universe well she is the one in the black dress

D- **** you seriously damn though gotta admit she is hot

A- Grinning, sure is, hey lets have a little fun tonight what say

Kripa who was still dancing to song when she turns her head to see angad grinning at her with one eyebrow up , is just shell shocked





Well here was the next part hope you like it... and please leave comment!!!

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 27 May 2007 at 12:16am

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no one liked it??? Cry

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 27 May 2007 at 6:43am

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Posted: 27 May 2007 at 8:09am | IP Logged
nooo i loved ittt. i cant wait..i wanna see wat angad doess....i love this ff!! k, continue soon.

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