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Chocolate_luver

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Originally posted by mintfresh

interesting concept
plz cont soon

thnakss Smile .. i sure will

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berkeleygirl818

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damn... Angad has got to be the hottest pool boy, EVER!!! lol!!! this
sounds wicked awesum... is Kripa gonna be like the bad kid nd Angad the
gud kid in tis FF??? ughhh... i CANNOT wait to read more... conitnue
soon!!!

Chocolate_luver

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Posted: 25 May 2007 at 10:18pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by berkeleygirl818

damn... Angad has got to be the hottest pool boy, EVER!!! lol!!! this
sounds wicked awesum... is Kripa gonna be like the bad kid nd Angad the
gud kid in tis FF??? ughhh... i CANNOT wait to read more... conitnue
soon!!!

lol tru dat , thanks Smile ...well she kinda upherself and a brat and well anagd guess your just gonna have to read and find out lolz LOL

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Posted: 25 May 2007 at 10:23pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Chocolate_luver

lol tru dat , thanks Smile ...well she kinda upherself and a brat and well anagd guess your just gonna have to read and find out lolz LOL

omg i just cant wait for you to start the ff we got it when you say kripa is a up for herself, brat but i also want to know what angad will be like, god i dont want to wait for a long time to find out you will have to start this ff fast before i rip my hair out think about angad's personality LOL

Chocolate_luver

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Originally posted by Rejected

Originally posted by Chocolate_luver

lol tru dat , thanks Smile ...well she kinda upherself and a brat and well anagd guess your just gonna have to read and find out lolz LOL

LOL LOL LOL lolz don't worry i'm writing the first part but i'm trying to make it long

hehehe you make me laugh

angullgrl91

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Posted: 25 May 2007 at 10:45pm | IP Logged

great intro.
cant wait 4 da 1st part.

Chocolate_luver

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Part 1

Okay well here is the first part , story takes place in California, hope you like it

TRING! The auditorium was surrounded by screams, clapping, cheering

Principal- congratulation to the class of 2007

2007- WOOOHH

Everyone runs out screaming and jumping with happiness , including the most popular girl of class 2007, and might I add the richest, yes her name was Kripa Sharma , she was petit, had good figure, long brown hair, hazel eyes, good complexion, and very beautiful which made guys drool over her.

It was summer break!!!

Kripa was sure excited she was finally out of school, even though she would miss the attention she used to get while at school she new she would get even more in college especially with guys.

Kripa went up to her Best friend, Kaajal

Kr- finally were out of school, no more of these high school guys, typical jerks

Ka- man kripa you'll never change, still miss attitude, I feel sorry for the guy here, so many asked you out and you just rejected them

Kr- well ain't my problem that I was made beautiful

Ka- whatever

Kr- anyways lets go out tonight to that club

Ka- what time

Kr- I don't know come over to my house and we'll just go whenever

Ka- sure alrite I'll see ya later Yeh

Kr- alrite laterz

Kripa got into her black Lexus car and put on Dior sunglasses on and drove of listening to a song

Kelis-Bossy

Hey ya.
You don't have to love me
you don't even have to like me
but you will respect me
You know why?
Cuz I'm a boss!

Uh uh... watch the beat go...
Uh uh... watch the beat go...
Uh uh... watch the beat go...
Uh uh... watch that beat go...

[Chorus - Kelis:>
I'm bossy
I'm the first girl to scream on a track
I switched up the beat of the drum
That's right, I brought all the boys to the yard
And that's right, I'm the one that's tattooed on his arm
I'm bossy
I'm the ***** you love to hate
I'm the chick that's raised the stake

She reached a huge mansion and drove in , she parked her car and went inside

Kr- mum & dad I'm home

There was no response

K- They are probably out, she said to herself

She went to the kitchen to get a drink when she saw a note

Hey kripa beta,

I and your dad are out for the first two weeks of summer, will call you later, and take care of yourself, bye

Love mum

K- Great the whole house to my self, perfect and she smiled

She went up to her room, and called up Kaajal

Kr- hello guess what

Ka- what?

Kr- dad and mum are out for two weeks, you know what that means right

Ka- PARTY!!!

Kr- YUP!!

Ka- hey gotta go now my bro bugging me, I'll see around 6 tonight Yeh

Kr- yep see ya later

Kripa decides to take a bath in her spa tub , she runs the water and pours an aroma soap into the tub and she gets in to enjoy herself,

10 minutes later

DING DONG!

Kripa could here the door bell ring , but she ignored it thinking her maids would get it

DING DONG, DING DONG

K- Ahhh!!.... She gets out of the tub and wraps herself in a towel and heads down stairs forgetting to put on her robe as she was pissed off at the person who ruined her relaxation

She opened the door, to find a tall, well built, you, tan guy, with spiked hair, his face was faced down when he moved up he grinned at the sight that was right in front of him. Kripa who had a better look at the guy and thought "omg his soooo hot and just to make it even better he had a stud earring on one of his ear, which kripa totally found hot on guys.(lol so doo I hehe)

Yes the guy was none other than Angad

A- Hey I'm Angad

K (thinking) – dam this guy has a sexy voice

K- With proud, hi I'm kripa Sharma

A- Yeh okay that kewl, well I'm your new pool boy

K- WHAT!

A- umm if you don't mind could you just show where the pool is, I don' have all day

K- (Thinking)-"hot guy, but what attitude, does he know who he is talking to "

K- Whatever

Kripa showed him to the pool, and was about to go before she left she turned to say

K- And don't think of stealing anything, I know how you pool boys are, otherwise you'll just be fired like the last one

Angad didn't reply and just rolled his eyes thinking "what spoilt brat, what does she think she is, Miss Universe"

After Angad finished working he left.

Then you see a red car pull up in front a huge mansion, a guy steps out and walks into the house and goes straight up to his room. He picks up the phone and dials a number.

G- Hey wassup

And he turns around and it's none other than Angad

Well here was the first part hope you like,, please leave comments!!! Smile

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 25 May 2007 at 11:05pm | IP Logged

wow. great first part. cont soon.

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