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Koi Apna Saa

Kapoor family- Lives in Shimla

Krishnakant Kapoor - Mahi's Grandfaather.

Leela Kapoor- Mahi's Grandmother.

Rajveer Kapoor- Mahi's father and owner of Kapoor industries.

 

Shalini Kapoor- Mahi's mother.

Rewa Kapoor- Mahi's older sister.

Yuvraj Kapoor- Mahi's brother younger than her.

Mahi Kapoor- Smile of the Kapoor family.

Sareen Family - Lives in Mumbai

Shabd Sareen- A very rich business man at very young age. He is the owner of Sareen industry.

Megha Sareen- Shabd's mother.

Priya Sareen- Shabd's Younger sister.

Aditya Sharma- Shabd's best friend and legel advisor in Sareen industry.

Hi Friends, i am writing a new story with Mahi and shabd as the hottest pair in these days. these story is going to be more romantic and more passionable so ple give me your comments on characters bcoz i am waiting for your comment so i can start postiong my story. thanks



Edited by goodkashish - 22 September 2007 at 11:03pm

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YAY finally something i can read no one ever updates their fan fics anymore Cry Cry but will you regularily update this fanfic and is this from the show maayka and will you have your own introductions if yes then thank you because i dont watch maayka anyways continue son Embarrassed

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omg. cant wait 2 read ur fan fic. cuz i totally luv ms's pair. cont soon.

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hi! my name is kashish and i am from philadelphia (USA). i just love to write love story. this has nothing to do with maayka story. i just took the couple from there but in this story it is more interstring and more exciting.As for updated i will do it every other day so maybe 3 or 4 updates a week.

thanks

love

kashish 



Edited by goodkashish - 21 May 2007 at 9:26pm

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Clap wow geat please conti soon Clap

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Awesome cnt wait for u to start!

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Part - 1

Subaah ki pehli kiran kapoor house me girti hai aur hum dekhte hai ek ladki bahar garden me se phool chun rahi hai. (uske haath me choodi ki kankne ki aawaz aati hai) Woh dauti huyi andar jakar ek haath me akhbar leti hai. Aur phir dheere dhree apne ghar ke logo ke bare me batati hai (uske pairo se payal ki chan chan pure ghar me shor karti hai).

Ladki: Lijiye dadaji aapka akhbar. Sorry dadaji woh aaj thodi dair ho gayi is liye.

Dadaji: Dair hi to huyi hai naa. Koi jung to nahi har gayi naa. tu jaa apni dadi ko phool deaa. Janti hai na teri dadi ko ek minute bhi pooja ke liye dair huyi to.

Ladki: Ji dadaji

Yeh hai mere dadaji Krishnakant kapoor aur is ghar ke sabse bade sadsay. Dadaji ne apna sara business papa ko de diya aur khud retired ho gaye kyunki dadi aur apne betiyon ke saath waqt bitane ke liye. Jaise hi bade hai waise chote bachche ki tarah sararat bhi karte hai. Doctor ke mana karne per bhi dadi se chup chup ke mithiyaa khate hai. kabhi kabhi to raat ko jagke bhi.

Mandir me se koi " Mere phool kaha hai."

Ladki : Kya baat hai dadi, aaj koi khaas puja jo aap itni khush hai.

Dadi: Haa aur tuje nahin samaj me aayega. Aaj mere bete ka bahot bada project ki meeting hai.

Ladki (confused): gadbad ho gayi. main to bhool hi gayi thi ki papa ne muje kaha tha ki project ki file kal raat ko unke kamre me rakhne ko.

Dadi (pareshan hokar): Koi kam thik se nahi kar sakti. kal jake teri shaadi hogi to kya karegi. Bhagwan bachaye tere hone wale pati ko aur uske ghar ko.

Ladki (with shy smile): Kyun aap saath nahi chalegi.

Dadi: ab tu yahaan se jaa verna tere papa naraz ho jayenge.

Yeh hai meri sweet dadi Leela Kapoor. Unhe bas ek hi kam aata hai din raat bhagwan ki pooja karne ka aur bhagwan ka bar bar sukhriya karne ka. Ek baat hai jo ise bar bar satati hai woh hai meri aur di ki shaadi ki. Hamesha hume ghar ke kam kaj shikhne ko kehti lekin papa hai jo hamesha hume bahar upni pehchan banane ko kehte hai. Main to bhul hi gayi ki papa mera intazaar kar rahe hai.

Ladki file lekar apne kamre me pahoch jati hai.

Ladki : (apne haath se dono kan pakdkar) Papa, aap jo bhi saja chahe de sakte hai.Per mujse naraz mat hoiye. woh kya hai ne main kal yeh file padhti padhti so gayi.

Papa (smiled): Tu janti hai phir bhi. main kabhi tujse baat na karu aisa kabhi ho sakta hai. tu to mera lucky charm hai. Waise bata tune is project ki details to padh lina. aur is bar apne bhai ko bhi is project pe kaam pe lagvana.

Ladki: aap chinta mat kijiye. dadi hum sab ka mandir me intzaar kar rahi hai.

Yeh hai mere papa Rajveer kapoor. Waise hai bahot sakht per jahan beti ki baat aaye wahi uska dil pigal jata hai. lekin ek bar jo woh faisa kar de woh koi nahin badal sakta dadaji bhi nahin. Woh apne bachcho ko Rajveer Kapoor ke bachche se nahin balki khud ki pehchan banane ko kehte hai. Papa hamesha muje apna lucky charm mante hai aur main bhi papa ki har ek faise ko manti hoon. Haa koi waqt aisa bhi jahaan muje apni marji ke khilaf jana padta hai lekin papa ke chehre pe muskaan dekhkar me sabkuch bhul jati hoon.

WOh kitchen me jati hai wahaan uski mama breakfast ki taiyaaria kar rahi hai.

Mama (danti huyi): Kahan thi subaah subaah. Aur kal raat bhi kyun nahin aayi file dene. Pata hai tumhare papa kitne gusse me the.

Ladki (hasti huyi): Mama, papa aur gussa aur woh bhi mujse.

Rajveer (sir pe haath rakte huye): Thik keh rahi hai meri beti. Kabhi aisa hua hai ki maine apni beti se do minute ke liye bhi baat na ki ho.

Mama: Itna bhi mat bhigado. ek din iski doli bida karni hai.

Rajveer: tum kyun chinta kar rahi ho. main sab kuch thai kar liya hai meri beti ko lekar.

Yeh hai meri mama Shalini Kapoor. Hamesha apne bachon ki chinta karne wali aur kabhi apne bare me sochti hi nayi. Mama kabhi bhi papa ke khilaf nahin jati kabhi kabhi to yeh jante huye ki papa ka faisa galat hai. Lekin hum sab mama se bahot pyaar karte hai khaas karke yuvi.

Chaliye hum is ghar ke bete Yuvraj kapoor se milte hai. Waise Yuvraj apne naam ko Yuvi jyada pasand karta hai. Waise woh mujse ek saal chota hai phir bhi muje di nahin kehta kyunki woh muje apni behen kam dost jyada manta hai. Uska ek hi manna hai ki jio aur dusro ko jine do. Use papa ke business me koi interest nahin. Aur papa hai ki woh use Business college me dakhil kar chuke hai. Unhe achcha lagta hai to woh hai papa ke paiso se late night parties. Ab aap hi dekh lijiye suraj nikal aaya hai lekin woh abhi tak soya hua hai.

Ladki (khidaki khol ke): Yuvi utho. Tumhe yaad hai naa tumhe mere saath office chalna hai.

Yuvi : (blanket sir pe rakh ke) kya, aaj subaah subaah lecture. Sone do naa mere college ki chutiyaan chal rahi hai.

Ladki: Bilkul nahin. Tum aaj abhi mere saath office chalonge warna me papa se keh doongi ki kal raat tum kitne baje ghar aaye the.

Yuvi: (haath jodkar) chup kar meri maa. Aaj tak tujse koi jita hai.

Ladki: Aaj tak mere jaisa koi paida bhi to nahin hua.

Ladki ek kamre se gujarti hai aur andar dekhti hai to Ek ladki apni padhai kar rahi hai. Aayiye aap se bhi milwati hoon apne Rewadi se. Nahin apni Dr. rewadi se. Di apne aakhri year me hain. Di ko doctor is liye banana hai kyunki use lagta hai ki business me insaan ke jasbaton ki koi jagah hi nahin hoti. jagah hai to sirf paison ke liye. Aur woh doctor banke logo ki seva karna chahti hai. Uske pass dusri chijo ke liye time hi nahi hai.

Ladki: Di, Aaj subaah subaah hi padhai, mera matlab aapka vacation hai to aapko enjoy karna chahiye. bahar jana chahiye.

Rewa: Mere pass iske liye waqt nahin hai. muje apne agle saal ki taiyaaria karni hai.

Ladki: (book rewa ke haath se leke) Mera matlab. bahar jao kisi se milo. pata nahin kab kahan koi mil jaye.

Rewa (tang aakar) : tu jati hai ki main mama ko bhulau.

ladki: thik hai main ja rahi hoon lekin aap niche breakfast karne aa jana.

Sabhi log breakfast table per bethe huye hai.

Dadaji (ladki ki khurshi ki aur dekhkar) : Are yeh hamari beti kahan reh gayi.

Rewa : Dadaji, aapko to pata hai sab ke sare kaam karne ke bad use apne liye time milta hai. aur us time me sirf woh ek hi kaam karti hai. Apne aap ko sawarne ka.

(Woh apni aankh me kajal laga rahi hai aur phir apne balon ko sawar rahi hai. Woh apne mathe pe bindi lagati hai.)

Yuvi: Waise bura mat maniye Di lekin meri bahen hai inti sundar ki jab bhi koi ladka use dekhega to apne aap ko bhul jayega.

(woh aaine me dekhkar apna dupatta thik karti hai)

Shalini : Khabrdaar aaj ke bad meri beti ke bare me aisa bola to.

Rajveer: Meri Mahi abhi tak aayi kyun nahi. Office ke liye dair ho rahi hai.

(Mahi sidiyon se pink color ka salwar kameez pehnake utarti hai)

Mahi: Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai mere papa mujse kuch kahe aur main inkar karoon. right papa.

Aur sab log hasne lagte hai.



Edited by goodkashish - 22 May 2007 at 12:36pm

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awesome starting.... i really liked mahi and shabd characters....yuvi and mahi intro was really nice

kip up the good work Clap Clap

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