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lucky-moon Goldie
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Posted: 04 August 2005 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
wow good one just read ur fiction i liked it
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Posted: 06 August 2005 at 10:47pm | IP Logged

your fan-fic is very good!

please continue whenever u can

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Posted: 06 August 2005 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
VERY NICE YOU PLEASE CONTINUE.
 
BYE,
 
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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 12:04am | IP Logged
hey i just read ur fanfic its really good! Especially how Armaan and Jassi tease each other! I luv it! please continue!
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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 12:34am | IP Logged
that was great, please continue.
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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 10:00pm | IP Logged

Wow!! Thanks alot... i didnt know that soo many ppl who be reading it.. i will cont soon.. or right now.. thanks alot guys! Tongue

 

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Posted: 07 August 2005 at 10:01pm | IP Logged

Part 4

Later In the Evening....

Saahil left already.... jassi and armaan are still in the office...

J - Armaan, i'm leaving...bye..

A - Bye...(sarcastially) Nice knowing you

J - Yea..Same here...

______________________

Outside Of Gulmohar

Jassi is standing there alone..

Jassi to herself: Meri Gadi..abhi tak nahie ayi?

jassi calls up gaurav..

J - gaurav...

G - Ya....

J - Meri car kaha hai?!

G - tumare paas

J - sweety, yaha pe nahie hai

G - oh shit..! i think ki the car went to your hotel....

J - KYAAAAA??

G - sorry yaar...

J - forget it.. par abb mein ghar kaise jau...

G - mein thume pick-up karlu?

Jassi sees armaan comming out...

J - um...no thanks..i'll mangage..

G - Sure...?

J - Yea.. Bye...

Jassi runs over to armaan.... - Armaan...armaan...

A - yea..

J - i think i need a little help...

A - kya hua...

J - vo subha meri car tow ho gayi thi..aur iss waqt i dont have a car....

A - so u want me to drop u off....

J - obviously...

A - teek hai.. chalo ...

They are driving when the car starts jumping...

A - Aab Isko kya hua...

J - tire punkchar hogaya hoga...

A - i think i know that...

J - to pucha kyu...

A- forget it... ab mere paas ek spare tire bhi nahie hai...

J - Kya? Tire Nahie hai... jassi looks around... there is exactly nothing around them exept trees... - Aab hum kya kare... mujhe..mujhe tumare saath ana he nahie chaia tha...i thnk i have bad luck with u.. yeh stupid car!! uhhh.... (jassi's voice getting louder every word) aur..aur...isko rukhna bhi yaha e tha naa...iss...iss sunsan jaga paar...Gooooodd!

A - Jassi will you just chill out... aur "sunsan jaga" ka kya matlab hai... ye "sunsaaaaan" jaga humne khane nahie vali....

J - aab tum kuch karoge?

A - Haan...Agar tum apni buk-buk band karo...

jassi just turns her face...

Armaan tries dailing saahils cell but its off....

A - saahil ka phone nahie lagra...

J - Mein aapne friend ko phone karne ki koshish karti hoon... jassi gets her cell and calls gaurav

jassi tells him and gaurav said he would be there...

gaurav gets there and helps them out...

A - Thanks a lot... and sorry, humari vaje sa tum disturb hoge....

G - no, no..its no problem...

A - By the way..i am Armaan...Armaan Suri..

G - Oh..the owner of Gulmohar right? mane bauth suna hai... I'm Gaurav.. Gaurav Gera

Armaan laughs - the famous tycoon...

J - sorry to interupt..paar agar aap logo ki bate katham ho gayi hai.. to chale?

Gaurav Drops of jassi and then armaan....

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Clapgr8 job dude..plz continue soon!!

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