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Posted: 01 August 2005 at 9:05pm | IP Logged

Thanx i will cont soon! Wink

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Posted: 01 August 2005 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
that was very good plz continue soon
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Posted: 01 August 2005 at 10:19pm | IP Logged

Part 2

 

J to herself- Mene Yaha he to park ki thi...kaha gayi...

Jassi looks around again and sees a board which says "NO PARKING AT ANYTIMES"

J to herself madly - Shit! Aab Mein Kya Karu

Jassi looks around to see if she can seek any help...Right then, her cell phone rings...

J- Hey Gaurav...

G- Jassi Hows It Going...

J- (Angrely) Not Good...

G- Kyu kya hua...any help?

J- um....i guess i can use some....

Jassi tells gaurav about everything...and gaurav says that he would be comming...

A few minutes later a black car stops next to jassi...he pulls the window over...- Jassi...

jassi turns around..its Gaurav! He is wearing blue jeans, a while shirt and a brown jacket on top, with light brown glasses..looking super hot...

Jassi opens the door and sits down..

J - Thankgod..tum agaye..(angryly) Yeh...ye...what kind of place is this! meri jadi...it got towed!

G- Jassi Chill, agar tumne galat jaga park karni hai to yeh to hoga he naa...

Jassi roles her eyes- Whatever

Gaurav laughs at seeing jassi mad - tum bhi naa... kaha jana hai...

J- Gulmohar

Gaurav Drops Her there...

J- tum mere liya ek aur kam kar sakte hoo...meri gadi...

G- Teek hai..teek hai..

Jassi gets out of the car and leaves....

G- Kasi Ladki hai..thanx bhi nahie bola...

he leaves off..

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In Gulmohar

Jassi comes inside..and everyone looks at her in amazment saying "kitni kubsurat hai" to each other...jassi walks over to the receptionest - Mr. Suri's Office

Rec- straight to the left...

J- thanks

Jassi gets to Mr. Suri's Office when the the secutiry stops her

Sec - Excuse me..aap andar nahie jaa sakti..

jassi angerly walks over to her

J- What? Mein Andar Nahie Jaa Sakti!

Sec- Sorry, he isnt here at the moment..Plz take a seat over here...

J- If he isnt here at the moment..yeh meri problem nahie hai....and no..i will not have a seat

Sec - As you wish...

Jassi is going crazy now...she looks over at her and yells at her - SICK!

Right then Mrs. Suri comes... Simren, whats going on...

jassi turns around... - Aunty!

Ila- Jassi Beta Tum...

J- Aap Yaha Kase...

Ila- Aao..hum andar ake baat karte hai....

Ila and Jassi Go inside Mr. Suri's Cabin

Ila- Jassi..Tum yaha?

J- Vo..mein iss company ke liya modeling kar rahi hoo...aur aap?

Ila laughs...- Ye Mere Bete ki company hai..

J - Oh..i'm sorry..Aapka Beta?

Ila- Haan mera beta... Ar...

Jassi's cell rings right then

J- Excuse me...

Jassi is talking on the phone when Mr. Suri comes in...

Mr Suri - Hey Mom!

Jassi turns around and is shocked... she turns off the phone - ARMAAN!

Armaan is wearing a pink shirt, with black pants and a coat. His hair dark brown...his cute romantic eyes brown....And his cute, super cute...smile

A- JASSI!

Ila- Jassi, Yeh Hai Mera Beta.. Armaan, Armaan Suri, Gulmohar Ka owner

Jassi looks over at Ila- Kyaa? Beta? Armaan? Mr. Suri? Gulmohar Ka Owner?

****Edited by the Moderator****

Just adjusted the font size. It was too small to read.



Edited by Princess - 01 August 2005 at 10:30pm
jjknlvr91 Goldie
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Posted: 01 August 2005 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
thsts really good continure!
shagun_luvs_? Goldie
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Posted: 01 August 2005 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
that was good. continue.Smile
Aabha IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 August 2005 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Wow!!!  Simply too Mallika!!!....plz continue yaarSmile
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Posted: 02 August 2005 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Wow mallika.... that was great... please continue......Smile
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Posted: 02 August 2005 at 12:14am | IP Logged
good job sis, its better than mine, infact MUCH better, and u have more people reading it, good luck sweetheart, I'M JEALOUS! OuchLOL

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