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A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21 (Page 4)

**lil_playa** Senior Member

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hey guys im  back. i'll try to post the next part in an hour or to.

bye, lil

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part 3


kripa arrives at the mall. she goes in. she tries to find him. she knows he will be a bit mad at her for coming late.

kripa to herself: prithvi ke liye a gift le lethi hoon us se uska jo be goosa wo be shaant ho jaye ga. yes thats what i should do.

so she goes into a shop to buy him a present when someone grabs her hand from behind.she turns around to look, and when she is suprised to see.....


some of u had it. it is Prithvi.

P:kripa tum yahaan kya kari ho

K:mein to sirf.... prithvi interupts in between

P:anyways chalain

K: ok lets go.

Kripa and prithi send the rest of the day togther. kripa says goodbye to prithvi and leaves toward her car. when prithvi calls her for behind.

P:kripa tum kuch bool rahi ho.  kripa turns around.

K: kya??

P: meri kiss.

K: prithvi no, i have to go bye.  prithvi makes a puppy face.

K: i said no.

P: plz

K:no. kripa turns and goes toward her car. prithvi also heads back to his car. kripa tries to start her car but doesn't work. she tries again no use. she gets out of the car and sees prithvi leaving she yells his name.

K: PRITHVI!!!.......PRITHVI rooko!!!

he turns around. kripa runs to him.

P: kya hai kripa?

K: vo meri gari kharab ho gaye hai.


K: can u plz drop me home.

P: with an evil smile on his face. ek shaart hai

K: kaisi shaart

P: tumhe muhje a kiss denhi paregi. manzoor

K: prithvi kya tum jaante ho ke yahaan par har koi ladke muhje lift dene ko tiyar hai

P: ok to inse hi lift mang lo

K: r u sure, sooch lo

P: sooch liya. tum inse se hi lift mang lo

K: fine.

kripa goes up to guy. (the guy will be played by rohit roy.) while prithvi is standing their watching her. she ask's the guy for a lift. and he agrees. when they are about to go towards his car she tells  the guy something in a whishper voice. and they start heading towards the car.

as their walking the guy put his hand on kripas waist. and moves her a bit closer to him. prithvi is turning as red as a tomato. he is walking towards them.kripa realizes that and startd to talk with the guy.

K: vo ider araha hai. ab to ra sa rasoo

and they start laughing.

prithvi grabs kripas hands and leads her towards his car. he is really mad now. kripa tries to free her hand.

K: prithvi choro mujhe.

P: kripa shut up Angry

Kripa sees him really mad and decsides to do as he says. they both get into the car.

K: prithvi i really sorry. mein to sirf maazak ka rahi thi

P: tum jaanti ho mein tumhe kisi  aur ladke ke saath nahi dek saktha

K: prithvi i gave u a chance, par tumne hi kaha ke kisi se lift mag lo, mein wohi to kiya.

P: do u really think i meant it.

K: ok baba, soorry kahdia na. ab to hus so

P: par inda se asa mazak kabhie mat kar na. prithvi has a little smile on his face.

they arrive at kripa's house. kripa gets out of the car.

P: kripa tum kuch bhool rahiie ho. kripa thinks he still wants the kiss and turns around a bit angerily(spelling)

K: kya!!!Angry 

P: apna purse baba. kripa calms down a bit.

K: ohh thanx.

she is about to go when prithvi calls her again.

P: kripa

K: abb kya

P: meri kiss. he makes a puppy dog face again.

kripa walks over to him and lightly gives him a kiss on his cheeck. prithvi is a bit dissapointed. 

P: kripa ye kya

K: prithvi. she turns around  and starts walking but prithvi hold her hand.

K:prithvi choro muhje.

he turns her around and goes close to her, so close that they can hear each others heart beats. he brings his lips closer to hers. and softely kisses her. and all we can see is the back of her head now. he lets go of her. kripa runs in to the house. and prithvi gets in his car and goes home.

thats it for now.   i hope u liked it. next one will be even better.

preview. news characters introduced.(angad, kartick, naina and many more.)

i 'll try to post later on today. c u later

bye, lil


Edited by **lil_playa** - 04 September 2005 at 11:21pm
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ClapGreat story!!
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this part was awesome too



**lil_playa** Senior Member

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wow good one but plz bring kripa and angad together coz they are made for eachother u know what i mean rite pal
**lil_playa** Senior Member

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yeah i know wut u mean. just wait for the story to get further on. then i bet u will like it.Wink

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