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wow...thats was good...
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Nayee Kahani with a twist...MMMMM...Looking forward to more...Hurry up...
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sorry for guyz for making u wait
i'll write in a short while
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K: mama muhje prithvi se milna tha yarra baje. or already barra baj gaye hain. agar main ab nahie gaye to wo mere bara bajade ga
G: juice to peello
K: baad mein. saying this she leaves.
Gayatri to herself: ye ladki be na
mishty came to meet gayatri and on her way in she bumps into kripa.
K: hi di, bad me baatein karte hain. she says this and runs toward her car.
K: bye di.
Mishty to herself as she see's kripa leave in a hurry: lagta hai phir se prithvi se jugra ro ga. O GOD HELP HER!!! mishty goes inside.
misthy runs and hugs gayatri.M: MAMA, kaisi ho, aur papa kider hain.
G:itne sare suval.
G: ma to mazak karahe thi. main teek hoon aur tumhare papa undar kam kara he hain.
M:main milke aathi hoon. she goes in to meet her father. meanwhile...
IN KRIPA'S CAR.
as kripa's is driving she hears her cell ring.cell: ring! rinG! riNG! she looks around but can't find it.she parks the car of the road and tries to find her cell. cell: RING! RING! finally she finds her cell. and discovers 2 missed calls from prithvi.
k: aaj prithvi ne muhje zaroor mardalna hai. oooooo o god. she gets back on the road.
she call prithvi back.
K: hi prithvi
p:kripa kahaan ho tum kabse intezaar kara ha hoon
K: Jaan, tumne vo kahavat nahi suni. saber ka pal meeta hota hai
P:kripa i'm in no mood for jokes.
P: acha bataoo tum kahaan ho.
K: i'm on the way, thodi der main athi hoon. ok c u the. bye
P:bye jaan. i love u
k: me too. and she hangs up.
kripa arrives at the mall. she goes in. she tries to find him. she knows he will be a bit mad at her for coming late.
kripa to herself: prithvi ke liye a gift le lethi hoon us se uska jo be goosa wo be shaant ho jaye ga. yes thats what i should do.
so she goes into a shop to buy him a present when someone grabs her hand from behind.she turns around to look, and when she is suprised to see.....
i know it's a bit short i'll write more next time. i will be busy tom. i will try to post the next part tom, but if i can't i surely do it on wed.
till then u will just have to wait for the suprise to be revealed...
plz be free to post ur comments. c u guys later.
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