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A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21 (Page 2)

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wow...thats was good...

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wow good job
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good job!! write more!!
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it wasn't boring. I am waiting to read more. continue soon
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Nayee Kahani with a twist...MMMMM...Looking forward to more...Hurry up...

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sorry for guyz for making u wait

i'll write in a short while

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part 2

 RECAP:

K: mama muhje prithvi se milna tha yarra baje. or already barra baj gaye hain. agar main ab nahie gaye to wo mere bara bajade gaLOL 

G: juice to peello

K: baad mein. saying this she leaves.

Gayatri to herself: ye ladki be na

mishty came to meet gayatri and on her way in she bumps into kripa.

K: hi di, bad me baatein karte hain. she says this and runs toward her car.

M: KKKRRRRIIIIPPPPPAAAAAAA!!!!!

K: bye di.

AND NOW...

Mishty to herself as she see's kripa leave in a hurry: lagta hai phir se prithvi se jugra ro ga. O GOD HELP HER!!!Big smile mishty goes inside.

misthy runs and hugs gayatri.M: MAMA, kaisi ho, aur papa kider hain.

G:itne sare suval.

M:mamaUnhappyAngry

G: ma to mazak karahe thi. main teek hoon aur tumhare papa undar kam kara he hain.

M:main milke aathi hoon. she goes in to meet her father. meanwhile...

IN KRIPA'S CAR.

as kripa's is driving she hears her cell ring.cell: ring! rinG! riNG!  she looks around but can't find it.she parks the car of the road and tries to find her cell. cell: RING! RING! finally she finds her cell. and discovers 2 missed calls from prithvi.

k: aaj prithvi ne muhje zaroor mardalna hai. oooooo o god. she gets back on the road.

she call prithvi back.

K: hi prithvi

p:kripa kahaan ho tum kabse intezaar kara ha hoon

K: Jaan, tumne vo kahavat nahi suni. saber ka pal meeta hota haiLOL 

P:kripa i'm in no mood for jokes.

K:ok sorry

P: acha bataoo tum kahaan ho.

K: i'm on the way, thodi der main athi hoon. ok c u the. bye

P:bye jaan. i love u

k: me too. and she hangs up.

kripa arrives at the mall. she goes in. she tries to find him. she knows he will be a bit mad at her for coming late.

kripa to herself: prithvi ke liye a gift le lethi hoon us se uska jo be goosa wo be shaant ho jaye ga. yes thats what i should do.

so she goes into a shop to buy him a present when someone grabs her hand from behind.she turns around to look, and when she is suprised to see.....

i know it's a bit short i'll write more next time. i will be busy tom. i will try to post the next part tom, but if i can't i surely do it on wed.

till then u will just have to wait for the suprise to be revealed...

 

plz be free to post ur comments. c u  guys later.

bye,  lil



Edited by **lil_playa** - 04 September 2005 at 11:20pm

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