A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21 - Page 4

give me a while.  i broke my arm. so it's a bit difficult. just a few mins.

Originally posted by: **lil_playa**

give me a while.  i broke my arm. so it's a bit difficult. just a few mins.

awwww how you doing now? Don't exert yourself. Take your time.

thankx happe i'll my best to write soon

part 4

REACP:

P: kripa ye kya

K: prithvi. she turns around  and starts walking but prithvi hold her hand.

K:prithvi choro muhje.

he turns her around and goes close to her, so close that they can hear each others heart beats. he brings his lips closer to hers. and softely kisses her. and all we can see is the back of her head now. he lets go of her. kripa runs in to the house. and prithvi gets in his car and goes home.

 

AND NOW:

kripa's parent's are in theri room. kripa enters the house and runs to her room, closes the door and has her back against the door. she is thinkng about what ust happened. she goes into the bathroom to change. wile she's in the bathroom her phone rings, she comes out of the bathroom to find 4 missed calls all from anged.  the phone rings again and she picks it up.(anged on other line.)

k: hi anged

a: finally tumne phone tho utaya

k: very funny, vo mein bathroom mein thee

a: oo

k: aacha bathoa phone kyun kiya

a: kripa😲

k: kya

a: tum bhool gaye, mein aaj london se vapise aaya hoon.(he had a concert their)

k: oh haan, she lighty hits her head.

a: jee madam, yaad agaya

k:anged please.

a: ok baba, kya kar rahi thi

k: kuch nahi just came home

a: wow, kripa sharma itne raat ko bhi ghar athi hai

k: haan, kyun koyie problem hai.

a: nahi

k: tum laye

a: kya

k: meine jo mangaye tha

a: ooh shit i knew main kuch bhool ra ha tha

k: ANGED!!!!😡 i gunna kill u

a: chill kripa, mein mazak kar raha tha

a: tho hum kal mil rahe hain

k: fine

a: ok then bye

k: bye.

they hang up and go to sleep.

NEXT MORNING:

We see door open, and coming in the room room is a women whose back is to us. now we see inside the room. it has pictures of a guys all over the room. just then a guys exits the bathroom. the women turns around and it mishty.  

m: oh tho janab ut gaye hain.

the guy: sarcasitcly(spelling). nahi mein tho soo rahe hoon.

m: jo be ho. jaldi se thyar hoo kar neeche aaj a o.

g: ok 

she leaves. the guy goes to his closet and picks out a pair of jeans, and a t-shirt. he changes. after he changes he goes in front of the mirror and we c he face its anged. he give him self a complement.

a:looking good, as usaul.

he goes donstairs to have breakfast, and everyone is waiting for him.

naina: c'mon anged have some breakfast.

a: ok mom.

 they all have breakfast.

Ok guys my arms starting to hurt so i'll stop now. i now it a bit boring, i'm still working on it. c u guys later  later

bye, lil

 

Edited by **lil_playa** - 18 years ago

awesome part. please continue soon. 

thanx. glad u liked it. i cont. soon.

hope u guyz like it😆

plz be free to post ur comments

the whole stry is really good!! plz cont wen ur arms get betta!!!

 u just have to wait while longer. its 3:45 here i'll write around six. bye guys.

It was good as usual...plz continue