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Okay guys this is my first fan fic i hope you enjoy..... it'll be in englisg/hindi lol sooo enjoy...give me feed back please
It starts off where Praney and Methli are going closer... Praney tell's Methli all thats happened between him and His mom ( Shruti) and is in tears.. Methli can't take it and hugs him and tries to comfort him." Praney sub kuch theek hojaya ga fikar na karo" Praney says" Kuch bhi nahi theek hoga Methli main bilkol akala hoon, Main ek harraa huwa insaane hoon" and the both hug... The music plays in the background " Ishq ne tera ishq ne kar diya bekhabar bechain shaam o sehar bas tujhe yaad karta hoon main raat bhar.... they do ahem ahem... next morning Methli realises what they have done and is in tears.. she stands by the window and cries thinking how can "she" do this... how did she let it happen.. Praney wakes up shocked at how he slept with no shirt on and puts on a kurtha that was beside him.. he wakes towards tearful Methali and tells her how sorry he is" Methli ! Methli! ( Methli turns) Mujhe kaal raat kaliya maaf kardo main kuch ziyada peeya tha. Mujhe kuch hosh nahi thi.. Mujha maaf kardo ka maina tum kho itna dukh diya.. ab main chalta hoon" Oh hain Methli Thanks ek achcha dost hona kaliya... and Praney leaves... Methli is shattered and is full of tears.... she leaves her house to go see Janki Devi but bumps into Adi " Methli kya huwa?!" Adi looks very concerned! Methli " Kuch bhi nahi Adi" Adi" Mujhse kuch chuparahi hoo? dekho mujheya batao main tumhari kho maadat kar saktha hoon?!" Methli" Nahi aisi Kho baat nahi hain Adi meri tabeet kuch theek nahi hain" Adi" Main Tumha Doctor ka pass laka jaooon?" Methli "Nahi Adi Main sirf Janki Ji sa milna jao rahi hoon" Adi" Theek hain main tumhai waha thak chordooga ( I'll drop you off).... They leave and the song plays in the background.."Ishq ne teri Ishq ne kar diya bekhbar... ahista ahista saathiya tumne koi jaadu hai kiya ahista ahista saathiya ho tumne koi jaadu hai kiya ho meri jawani ki kahani dubi hai tere pyaar mein ho ja tu ho ja meri ja... Adi looks at Methli and is hurt because he see's the tears in her eyes... Adi (thinking) Jub tumhari aankhon main asoo hothay hain mujhe kyun dard hothi hai.. Mujhe maloom hain ka tum Praney sai pyaar karthi ho phir mera dil kyon tumsai pyaar mangtha hai?? Main kabhi tumhari dard nahi banna chatha par main banna aur ab main tumhara saath hona chatha hoon Methli kyun??!"......
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Awwwwww ur fanfic is so cute PLZ continue soon
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Author: shammy b Replies: 3 Views: 516
|shammy b||3||516||29 August 2007 at 5:21pm by sabrinaa.|
yes guys now methli and adi can marry
Author: v4uuuu Replies: 2 Views: 699
|v4uuuu||2||699||02 July 2007 at 1:27pm by Fallen_Beauty|
FEEL SRY FOR METHLI
Author: ganesha10 Replies: 2 Views: 346
|ganesha10||2||346||23 June 2007 at 12:35am by k-ekta fan|
pranay n methli??
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|nikhilpanjwani||2||316||30 January 2007 at 4:12am by preity_zinta|
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