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Posted: 14 May 2007 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Hi,

This is also from LRL THREADS.....by my friend, Sayeda.

Hope you will all like it, and shower her with loads of comments!

Cheers,
JIV


PYAR KI JEET
HEY GUYS IM GONNA WRITE A NEW FANFIC ON RN JODI HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE ITSmileSmile

NAINA WAS POINTING HER GUN TOWARDS RAJVEER BUT SUDDENLY SHE FELT VERY WEAK SHE CANT KILL HIM JUST BECAUSE HE KILLED HER BROTHER HE HALPED HIS BROTHER BY KILLING HIM AND IF SHE WILL SHOOT RAJVEER THEN RITU WILL ESCAPE AGAIN AFTER ALL SHE WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR HER BROTHERS CONDITION THEN SHE REMEMBERS HOW RAJVEER SIR TRUSTED HER WITH CLOSED EYES HOW HE ALWAYS PROTECTED HER FROM MAJOR BHARGAV FROM EVERYONE THEN SHE REALISE SHE CANNOT KILL RAJVEER SIR SHE STARES AT RITU THEN FROM THE LIGHT OF THE VEHICLE COMING FROM BEHIND SHE SEES THAT RITU WAS PRESSING THE TRIGGER TO KILL HER RAJVEER SIR SHE DROPS HER GUN AND PUSHES RAJVEER OUT OF THE WAY AND GETS SHOT ON THE SHOULDER AS SHE PUSHES RAJVEER HE GETS STRUCK BY THE BOX AND FAINTS IN THE MEAN TIME RITU PICKS UP THE BOX AND JUMPS OUT OF THE TRUCK THE DRIVER TAKES THE TRUCK OUT OF THE TUNNEL AND COMES BACK THERE HE SEES............

DRIVER DEKHTA HAI HAI KI CADET NAINA KHUN MEIN DOOBI THI AUR CAPT.RAJVEER KE SAR SE KHOON BEH RAHA THA AUR WOH BEHOSH THE WOH JALDI SE BAHAR JATA HAI AUR APNA PANI KI BOTTLE LE KAR AATA HAI WOH CAPT. KE PASS JATA HAI AUR "CAPT SIR SIR AAP THIK TO HAI NA " WOH UN PAR PAN DALTA HAI CAPT HOSH MEIN AATE HAIN
CAPT:NAINA NAINA TUMHE MEIN KUCH NAHI HONE DOONGA DRIVER JALDI SE GADI YAHAN KE PASS KE ARMY HOSPITAL KI TARAF LE KAR CHALO JAO JALDI KARO.
CAPT APNI DASTI NIKALTE HAI AUR APNE CHOT PAR BANDHTE HAIN PHIR WOH APNI SHIRT UTAR KAR NAINA KI CHOT PAR BANDHTE HAIN TAKE AUR KHOON NA BEHJAYE
HOSPITAL PAHUNCHNE PAR WOH NAINA KO UTHA KAR ANDAR LE JATE HAIN AUR WAHA KE DOCTOR SE KEHTE HAIN
CAPT:DOCTOR MEIN CAPT RAJVEER SHEKHAVAT HUN YEH MERI CADET HAI HUM KMA MILTARY ACADEMY SE HAI ISE GOLI LAGI HAI AAP JALDI ISE DEKHIYE .

DOCTOR :DONT WORRY CAPT MEIN APNI PURI KAOSHISH KAROONGA NURSE INHE JALDI OPERATION THEATRE MEIN LE JAO AUR CAPT APP KO BHI CHOT AAYI HAI AAP BHI MALHAM PATI KARALIJIYE .
CAPT:NAHI DOCTOR MEIN THIK HUN AAP BAS NAINA KE PAS JAIYE.
CAPT PHIR RECEPTION SE SHALINI KO PHONE KARTE HAIN
CAPT:HELLO DR SHALINI APP JALDI SE CHENAB POINT KE PASS KE ARMY HOSPITAL MEIN AAJAIYE
DR:LEKIN CAPT BAT KYA HAI SAB THIK TO HAI NA

CAPT:NAHI DR KUCH THIK NAHI HAI AAP JALDI SE YAHAN AJAYE AUR SUNIYE AGAR ACADEMY HUDA YA ALEK HO TO UNHE CHENAB POINT PAR BHEJ DIJIYE AUR KAHIYE KI BAQI KE CADETS KO LEKAR JALDI SE YAHAN AJAYE AUR IS BARE MEIN MEIN KISI KO BHI NAHI PATA CHALNA CHAHIYE
DR:THIK HAI CAPT MEIN ATI HUN
YAHHA PAR ADHE GHANTE KE BAAD DR SHALINI AATI HAI AUR JAB WOH CAPT KO DEKHTI HAI
DR:CAPT YEH AAPKE SAR PAR CHOT KAISE LAGI AUR KYA HUA KAUN HAI YAHAN HOSPITAL MEIN AUR YEH KYA CAPT AAPKI ANHKON MEIN AANSU
CAPT:DR MERI SAMAJH MEIN KUCH NAHI ARAHA HAI MEIN KYA KARU NAINA WAHAN MAUT SE LAD RAHI HAI SIRF MERI WAJAH SE USNE MUJHE RITU KI GOLI SE BACHANE KE LIYE KHUD SAMNE AGAYI AGAR USE KUCH HO GAYA TOH MEIN APNE AAP SE KABHI NAZREIN NAHI MILA SAKUNGA DR PLEASE KUCH KIJIYE MERI NAINA KO BACHA LIJIYE PLEASE
SAYING THIS CAPT BEHOSH HO JATE HAI
DR:CAPT CAPT AAP THIK TO HAIN NURSE NURSE JALDI SE STRECHER LAO HURRY UP
CAPT RAJVEER KI MALHAM PATTI DR SHALINI KARTI HAIN AUR NAINA KE OPERATION KE BARE MEIN MALLOOM KARNE JATI HAIN WAHA UNHE SAARE CADETS MILTE HAIN
HUDA:MAM KYA BAAT HAI HUME YAHAN KYUN BULAYA SAB THIK TO HAIN NA
DR:NAHI CADETS KUCH THIK NAHI HAI NAINA KO GOLI LAGI HAI ABHI USKA OPERATION COMPLETE HUA HAI AND SHE IS IN CRITICAL CONDITION AGAR AGLE 24 HOURS MEIN USE HOSH NAHI AAYA TO KUCH BHI HO SAKTA HAI ............

HUDA:YEH KYA BOL RAHI HAI AAP MAM NAINA KO GOLI KAISE LAGI
DR:MUJHE BHI THEEK THEEK NAHI PATA HAI GUYS YEH TO CAPT HI BATA SAKTE HAI YAH NAINA
ALI:LEKIN MAM CAPT SIR KO KYA HUA
DR:UNKE SIR PAR GEHRI CHOT AAYI HAI IS WAQT WOH THEEK HAI MAGAR UNHE NEEND KA INJECTION DIYA GAYA HAI

POOJA:MAM CAPT THEEK TO HOJAYEGE NA
DR:HA POOJA MAGAR NAINA THEEK NAHI HAI TUM SAB BHAGVAN SE PRARTHNA KARO MEIN TABTAK CAPT KE PASS HI RAHOONGI AGAR NAINA KO HOSH AJAYE TO MUJHE AKAR ZAROOR BATANA MEIN ROOM NO 30 MEIN HUN
DR SHALINI GOES AWAY
POOJA:OYE YEH NAINA KA CONNECTION HUMESHA KYUN GADBAD REHTA HAI YAAR
ALI:AAP MAT GHABRAIYE POOJA NAINA KO KUCH NAHI HOGA WOH BAHUT BHADUR HAI ITNI JALDI HAAR NAHI MANENGI
YUDI:I THINK HE IS RIGHT GUYS NAINA IS A FIGHTER USE KUCH NAHI HOGA
HUDA:HA YAAR YEH TO THEEK HAI MAGAR NAINA KO GOLI KAISE LAGI
ALI:MERE KHAYAL SE HUMEIN CHAL KAR DUA KARNA CHAHIYE YAHAN THEHRE THERE KUCH NAHI HOGA ALEK BHAI AAP NAHI CHALENGE NAHI TUM LOG JAO MEIN YAHI PAR RAHOONGA
WOH SAB CHALE JATE HAI OTHER SIDE CAPT RAJVEER KO HOSH AATA HAI WOH HOSH MEIN AATE HI NAINA KA NAAM LETA HAI
DR: CAPT AAP KO KUCH CHAHIYE PANI DUN KYA
CAPT: DR NAINA THEEK HAI NAINA KAISI HAI USKA OPERATION HO GAYA HAI KYA USE HOSH AGAYA HAI
DR:CAPT AAP LATJAIYE AAP KI TABIYAT THEEK NAHI HAI APKO ARAAM KI ZARORAT HAI AAP LATE JAIYE
CAPT:DR MUJHE BATAYIE NAINA KAISI HAI FOR GOD DAMN SAKE KUCH TO BOLIYE NAINA KAISI HAI
DR:CAPT AAP LATE JAIYE MEIN APPKO BATATI HUN CAPT NAINA IS WAQT CRITICAL CONDITION MEIN HAI AGAR USE AGLE 24 HOURS MEIN HOSH NAHI AAYA TO HUM KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTE BAQI CADETS USKE PASS HAI AAP LATE JAIYE
CAPT:DOC MUJHE NAINA SE MILNA HAI ISI WAQT PLEASE MUJHE ROKIYE MAT MUJHE USSE ABHI MILNA HAI
DR:LEKIN CAPT AAP THEEK NAHI HAI U CANT DO THIS
RAJVEER REMOVES THE NEEDLES FROM HIS HAND AND GOES OUT SHALINI TRIES TO STOP HIM
DR:CAPT PLEASE NAINA ICU MEIN HAI AAP WAHAN NAHI JAA SAKTE
CAPT:NAHI DOC PLEASE AAJ MUJHE MAT ROKIYE
HE GOES TO THE ICU THEIR THE NURSE TRIES TO STOP HIM BUT SHALINI TELLS EVERYONE TO GO OUT AND GIVE THEM 10 MINUTES ALONE
CAPT JUST STANDS THERE JUST STARING TO NAINA THEN HE GOES AND FALL NEAR HER BED HE TAKES HER HAND IN HIS AND SAYS
CAPT@NAINA UTHO NAINA PLS TUM AISE CHUP NAHI RAH SAKTI PLS NAINA HOSH MEIN AAO APNI ANKHEN KHOLO NAINA.

NAINA AGAR TUMHE KUCH HOGAYA TOH MEIN APNE AAP KO KABHI MAAF NAHI KAR PAOONGA PLEASE NAINA MEIN NAVEEN KO KYA MUNH DIKHAOUNGA KI MEIN USKE EKLOUTI BEHEN KO NAHI BACHA SAKA
HE FALLS DOWN NEAR HER AND CRIES
CAPT:NAINA PLEASE NAINA TUMHE UTHANA HOGA NAINA AGAR TUMHE KUCH HOGAYA TO MAIN JEE NAHI PAONGA NAINA MAIN MAR JAONGA NAINA MUJHE TUM IS TARAH AKELA CHOD KAR NAHI JAA SAKTI NAINA MEIN TUM SE PYAR KARTA HUN NAINA I LOVE YOU PLEASE MUJHE IS TARAH DHOKA NAHI DE SAKTI NAINA TUM MUJHE CHOD KAR NAHI JAA SAKTI
AND THEN HE FAINTS
DR:NURSE JALDI STRECHER LAO JALDI KARO INHE FORAN ROOM MEI LKAR JAO AUR INJECTION DEDO QUICK HURRY UP
THEN ALL THE CADETS SEES RAJVEER
HUDA:MAM YEH CAPT KO KYA HUA
DR:GUYS JAISE HI CAPT HOSH MEIN AYE WOH NAINA SE MILNE CHALE AYE MAGAR WOH PHIR BEHOSH HOGAYE JANTE HO GUYS CAPT NE AAJTAK APNI ANKHON SE KABHI AANSU NAHI NIKALE MAGAR AAJ NAINA KE SAMNE WOH BAHUT ROYE WOH NAINA TO BAHUT PYAR KARTE HAI AGAR NAINA KO KUCH BHI HOGAYA TO YEH AEK ZINDA LAASH BAN KAR REH JAYENGE
HUDA:YEH AAP KYA KEH RAHI HAIN CAPT SIR NAINA SE PYAR KARTE HAIN MAGAR YEH KAISE MUMKIN HAI MERA MATLAB WOH TO NAINA KE TEACHER HAI NA
DR: HUDA PYAR ANDHA HOTA HAI WOH UMAR NAHI DEKHTA PYAR TO BAS HO JATA HAI PYAR IJAZAT NAHI MAANGTA HAI.............


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