Posted: 14 May 2007 at 11:47pm
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Another Fic from LRL THREADS.....by my little friend Sonal......especially for you!!!!
Hope u like it!
mission accomplished..my 1st fanfic
hey frds this is my first fic...its a kind of my n j.i.v's combi...hope i write gud....please tell if its boring..
After all the tragedies now
KMA cadets were waiting outside the O.T. for the doctor to come n tell
them how is their favorite teacher –CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT .
Every one was worried n was thinking about their captain except huda.
He had something else in his mind. He asked aalekh "oye kaidi ,tune
kahin phoolan ko dekha hai".
"pata nahi huda,yahin kahin hogi"
"acha,vo mile to us mujhe batana" n huda goes off finding her phoolan.
There she stood near the wall, all alone, thinking something.
"arey phoolan,tu apne capain ke is pal mein un ka saath nahi degi,yu yahan akeli kyun khade hain"
"kuch nahi huda,tu ja"
"phokat mein kuch nahi," came a voice from behind. It was aalekh.
"umm aal.."naina was about to say sumthing when huda yelled at her,
"chod aalekh,...ye pathar dil kya samjhegi captain ka dard".
He looked at her with a tumse se ye ummed nahi thi look n went away.
"naina mein janta hoon tum yun phokat mein ye sab nahi kar rahi hai,tujhe hua kya hai"
"tu jaanta hai aalekh mer bhi ko kisne mara tha…captain rajveer ne"
she told her everything.Aalekh understood better ."par naina……" as he
was about to say sumthing ,the doctor came n said that rajveer is out
of danger and wants to speak to naina.
Naina refuses to go but when aalekh insists….she goes..
In the the ot raj was in deep thought of naveen.
[ghe wished he didn't had become weak n shot him dead. Just then naina
entered before raj could say a single word she yelled at him "captain
rajveer,kyun aap mujhe baar baar bula rahen hain.agar aap apni jaan ki
bheek maang rahen hain to mein aapko batadoon,ki I will not leave
u".suddenly a suprised voice came from behind………..
"phoolannnnnn…."it was huda .naina saw her but said nothing and went away.
Later in kma…everyone was in a happy mood except naina n huda.
Naina was sitting alone …just then hhhuda came and shouted at her..
naina ye tujhe ho kya gaya hai…tu mujhpe gussa hoti hai mein manta hoon
par captain par……….aur vo bhi is tarah..arey unhone tumhara har pal
saath diya..tumhare liye solitary confinement be saha,captain sir ne
tumhe humesha mushad aur mocambo se bachaya…aur tune…….arey unki aankhe
khulte hi tune unhe niraash kardiya..tu to vahan se chal di par captain
sir ki halat aur bigad gayi…mujhe tujh se ye umeed nahi thi….tu khuddar
hai naina tujhe sirf tu aur tera bhai nazar aata hai aur kuch
nahi….tu.."he was about to say when naina starts crying..aalekh saw
them and intrupted
"naina ki koi galti nahi hai huda…vo to sirf vahi kar rai hai jo agar tu ya main uski jagah hote to karte"
tu kehna kya cahta hai"and aalekh told everything to huda..huda was
surprised….but he still knew that it was not the fault of raj.
I am sorry yaar…mein kuch jada hi keh gaya..par dekh phoolan meri mummi
ji kehti hain ki har galti gunah nahi hoti….akhir captain sir us waqt
kya karte …..aur tu hi soch agar tu unki jagah hote to tu kya karti…"
"haan naina huda thik hi to bol raha hai….aur tu captain sir ..jisne tera har pal saath diya…unka is pal mein saath nahi degi.."
naina was slowly realizing her mistake but she was not letting her heart to agree on it.
guys mein tumse agree nahi karte hoon….aur captain rajveer ko to mein
kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti hoon"she said and turned away….
"ruk phoolan tujhe humpar bharosa nahi to ek baar …sirf ek baar captain se thande dimag se mil aur phir dekh"
naina turned back n replied "huda kuch cheezen kabhi nahi badli ja sakti hain"
and she turned to her room.
What huda and aalekh had to say they said but now
naina,inside her room for feeling a bit guilty. She couldn't understand
that feeling neither she wanted to. For her ,captain rajveer was no
hero ,he had betrayed her.
Next morning bc decided that everyone
will go to the hospital to meet raj.naina didn't wanted to but as it
was bc's orders she had to.
In the hospital everyone went one by one
n met raj, they made him quite happy, but raj was waiting for someone
special. But were was she? Where was his favourite cadet naina 'ah'
As he was thinking ,there was a faint knock at the door .
"Come in "raj called.
The person for whom was waiting entered.
"arey cadet singh aap. Please be seated"
but naina was beaming wid frustration. She didn't wanted to see raj but now she had to .
she answered back
kush mat ho captain rajveer.mein aapse milne ya aapki tabyat poochne
nahin aayi hoon ,mein sirf ye dekhne aayi hoon ki kahin aap mar to nahi
gaye,kyunki mein aapko itni aasani se marne nahi doongi, mein aapko
tadpa tadpa ke maroongi…"
she didn't wanted to say all this but she herself didn't knew y she did it…
raj broke out into a faint laughter
cadet singh,aap ko jo kehna tha aap keh gayi,par ab mein vo karoonga
jiska meine vaada kiya tha …..naveen se..marne se pehle vo mujhse keh
gaya tha ki mein uski behen ki raksha karoon…mera ye vaada abhi poora
nahi hua hai…...aur ek vaada meine apne aap se bhi kiya tha ki jis
kisine bhi mere dost ko aapne maut ki bhik maangne par majboor kardiya
tha….aur haan kahan tak meri baat hai..shayad mein us waqt kamjor pad
gaya tha par mein naveen ko zindigi ki bheek mangte hue nahi dekh sakta
tha …vo log use har hall mein vaise bhi mar dete ..believe me naina…tum
mera bharosa kyun nahi karti ho…..mujhe maaf kardena…par mein majboor
tha…."n raj broke out in tears..
naina was quite
touched by his words….she was thinking to forgive him or not….he had
shot her brother dead…but it was not all his fault…so she forgave him
in her heart but pretended to be angry…….and was about to go when raj
suddenly yelled in pain… "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa………………."
screamed .but all the kma pweople were not outside ,they were near the
hospital gate,so no one heard her.
She got terrified….after about 10
min the nurse arrived …till then naina handled raj and tried to make
him sleep…raj knew that naina still cared for him…
Naina kept a I DON'T CARE look on her face……but worry clearly was clearly
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Raj was now discharded from the hospital. He was now better n had returned to kma.
was very happy. There was a very good atmosphere……every one came to
visit raj, they took care of him, entertained him when he was feeling a
bit low , every cadet came except naina……raj noticed that apparently
naina is competely ignoring him …raj had tried his best but now only a
magic could bring them together as a true team again
Raj noticed something strange happening wid him…he felt that every now n then,there is some one at his door…peeping in.
It was happening many a times….while he was talking to huda…or was having his lunch….or when he switched off lights to sleep.
did he know that the strange person was none other than his favourite
cadet singh….though naina was ignoring him but still she used to peep
into his room now and then....in the middle of the night to check if he
is alright.she used to secretly check him…she used to see him n go
back….. without even saying a word to him.
After a few days a notice was put up
all the cadets are informed that shortly we will be celebrating holi so
they have to begin their preparations. You would be shortly informed
that which cadet will be assigned to which teacher
- Brigadier chandok"
Everyone was very excited …akhir it was holi!!!!!!!!!!the festival of colours..
But unlike everyone naina was not excited…she was keeping away from everyone..
Aalekh realizes the change in her behavior n said"kuch jhol to hai"
He knew that naina had forgiven captain,,, but she won't say….
The next day another notice was put up on the bulletin which informed that which cadet was assigned to which teacher.
They all came to see their fate
was put in as raj's assis tance in water arrangement,naina was very
frustrated…she went to bc and tried to console him….but failed
naina ek acha cadet,jo use kaam diya jata hai use poori bakhobi se
karta hai….agar tum ya kaam nahi karogi to mein samajhloonga ki tum
poori tarah se ek achi cadet nahi ho"these were the words n the only
reason for naina o work with raj-the person who killed her brother.
everone was at work .huda n shalini were doing the work of
colours,lolita n alekh were doing the cleaning, suriji n ali were doing
the arrangements of food n sweets,
And bc and pooja were keeoing a check on everthing n were bringing all the equipments needed.
raj was checking the plumbing arrangement,suddenly a pipe burst open n
he got wet….totally drenched in water he was standing infront of naina
who was helping him.when naina saw her she was amused n was going to
laugh nut she tried to suppress it n asked raj that she will go n come
back in a minute
Naina walked in the academy n found a lonely
corner…there she sat n laughed a lot…she giggled so loud n that too
after so many days….she didn't realized raj peeping in….he came to take
a towel n change his shirt…he saw naina…laughing like a small
child….oh!he loved her a lot more….but then as he was going to sneeze
he moved away from there n went away.
When naina returned…..she didn't found raj….she thought maybe he had gone to change…but………………..
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