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freakandnut57

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Posted: 14 May 2007 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Hi,

This is another fanfic from LRL THREADS.....by my friend, Shravya.

Hope you all like it!

Cheers,
JIV


the story revolves around second year cadets.
Every1 in kma now knows bout navin singh alluwalia and bout naina's second chance at kma.

Scene 1- Mess
YUDI-so guys, dekhna,aaj second year ka pehla din hai aur aaj main dr. shalini ko date par zaroor puchunga.
AALEKH-saala nautanki,hafta bhar se ekich bath keraha hai. puchenga kab??
YUDI-dekhna chief, aaj mein apne dil ki baat zaroor kahunga.
HUDA-lage shart?? tu kuch bhi kahe, main janta hoon ki tu aaj bhi dr.shalini ko kuch nahin keh payenga. aur waise bhi yudiye jaalaniyo ko pata ne ke liye ek mard ki zaroorat hoti hai.

[naina coffee lane jati hain]

HUDA- aaj 1530hrs. ko dr. shalini ki class hain. himmat hain to tabhi usse punch lena.

YUDI-ok then, 1530 hrs it is

POOJA- oye huda, tu to har jaalani ko paata sakta hain na??phir ab tak naina ke network se tera connection kyu nahi juda??

HUDA- oye punjaban, ye bath to tune bilkul sahi kahi. par dekte hain is huda ke jaado se phoolan kab tak bach pati hain.

[an orderly enters]

ORDERLY-sabhi first aur second year cadets ko brigaidier chandok ne assembly hall main bulaya hain.

ALI- brigaidier chandok ko is waqt humse kya kaam ho sakta hain??

AALEKH- hoga kuch, waise bhi apun jabse idhar aaya hain tabse kaam hi to kar re la hain. chal ab.

[sab assembly hall ki tarafh nikal padte hain]

BC- cadets, aap sab soch rahe honge ki itni raat gaye maine aapko yaha kyo bulaya. darasal aaj 3 naye log KMA ki faculty join karne wale hain. main aap cadets aur faculty members ko unhise milana chahta hu. to swagat kijiye CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT, NANDINI SINHA aur ABHIMANYU JOSHI KA.

BC- to swagat kijiye CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT, NANDINI SINHA aur ABHIMANYU JOSHI ka.

[saying this he points out to three people walking towards the mike. all the cadets stare with eyes wide open.and with jaws hanging open. 3 of the most attractive people KMA has ever seen walk in]

YUDI-wow!!itni sundar teacher hamare academy me kya kar rahi hai??

SOME 1st YR GIRL CADET- cool!! yeh dono to 'si' kum aur koi bollywood hero zyada lagte hain.

but seeing the new teachers had surprised one person the most-CADET NAINA SINGH

NAINA(khud se)- CAPT. RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT?-inke bare me to bhaiya hamesha baat karte the. yeh to bhaiya ke roomie aur best friend the. yeh zaroor bhaiya ke maut ke bare me kuch jante honge. inse to milna hi padenga.

[the teachers go up 2 the mike and introduce themselves]

Male teacher wearing a white t-shirt and army cargos goes up nd introduces himself as CAPT. RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT.

Second male teacher wearing blue jeans nd an olive green colour shirt introduces himself as ABHIMANYU JOSHI-new music teacher.

Female teacher wearing a light blue sari matching her eye colour is NANDINI SINHA-new yoga teacher.

Teeno main kaun zyada aacha dikh raha tha yeh kehna to bilkul namumkin tha.

BC-ok cadets, aap sabse bas itna hi kehna tha. now DISMISS.
[all cadets turn to leave.]

HUDA- oye yudiye, galti se maina kaha tha ki 'aaj' 1530 hrs ko dr. shalini ka class hain.
mera matlab tha ki kal 1530hrs. ko dr. shalini ka class hain --tab unhe date par punchna.

YUDI(in a cool style)- main to aaj raat ko hi punchne waala tha..par aab to shart lage hai.kal hi class mein puchunga. chale aab.mujhe bahut neenda aa rahe hain.

[sab cadets jate hain. sirf naina aur pooja peche reh jate hain.]

NAINA- pooja, tu chal main aati hoon.
POOJA- oye tu pagal to nahi gayi. lights out hone mein kuch hi minute baki hain. jaldi girls hostel nahin gayi to KMA se tera signal hamesha ke liye cut ho jayenga.
NAINA-tu phikar mat kar, main aajaongi. mujhe CAPT. RAJVEER se milna hai

POOJA- oye!!captain sir Shah Rukh jaise dikte hain yeh to main bhi manti hoon. lekin itni bhi kya besabri hain unse milne ke liye. kal class me mil lena.

NAINA- pooja tu samaj nahi rahi hai. mera captain se milna bahut zaroori hai.
[PEECHE SE AWAJ AATI HAI]

LOLITA MA'AM- cadet singh nd cadet ghai. lights out hone mein kuch hi minute baki hai. aap abhi girls hostel jayiye.

NAINA-no ma'am
LOLITA- come again cadet
NAINA- woh ma'am mere khehne ka matlab hai ki darasal main captain rajveer se kuch baat karna chahti hoon.

LOLITA- captain rajveer aab bahut thake honge. unhe sona chahiye. aur aapko bhi cadet.
jo baat karni hai kal karna. DISMISS

POOJA & NAINA- yes ma'am
POOJA- chal aab

dono girls hostel jati hain.

scene 2- next morning, mess

Pooja ne sab ko bata diya hain ki kal rat naina Capt. Rajveer se milne ke liye kitni betab ho rahi thi.
tabhi naina aati hain.

POOJA- Oye Naina, ek bat bata, huda ke liye to tera incoming aur outgoing hamesha band rehta hain. Aur Capt. Sir to kal hi aaye hain. Phir unhe call karne ki itni besabri kyon??
NAINA- Dekh Pooja, aisi koi bat nahin hain.
HUDA- Aisi bat nahin hain to phir kaise bat hain?Us Capt.mein aisi bhi kya bat hain?? Are is pure academy mein is Huda jitna handsome dude kahi nahi hain. Phir Capt. Sir kya cheez hain?

[NAINA MAKES AN IRRITATED FACE AND LEAVES THE TABLE. SOON AFTER, ALL OF THEN LEAVE TO REPORT TO CLASS]

SCENE 4- Classroom

All the cadets are seated.Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat enters nd starts teaching about spies.
All the girl cadets are paying more attention to Cpt. Rajveer than 2 the topic of spies.

Dressed in a white sleevless shirt and jeans, he look simply DASHING.
And all the male cadets are irritated at all the attention this new dude is getting.
Naina is in her own world, thinking about the fun times she spent with her brother. Suddenly a firm yet sweet, caring nd smiling voice gently gets her back to real life.

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hey marvellous..cont soon..:) Smile

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hey it is really good


pl continue soon

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RAJVEER- Cadet, shayad aapka dhyan class mein nahin hain.

NAINA(making an innocent face)- Huh..nahi sir. Woh mein yeh soch rahi thi ki kitna acha hota agar mujhe desh ke liye shahid hone ka mauka milta.

YUDI(TO HUDA)- Dude, yeh naina kya bol rahin hain?

HEARING HER REPLY, RAJVEER BURSTS OUT LAUGHING.EVERYONE IS TAKEN ABACK.

RAJVEER(amused)- Oh!! To aap hain woh Cadet Naina Singh jiske bare main Brigaidier Chandok ne mujhe bataya.
NAINA(to herself)- Brigaidier Chandok ne Sir se mere bare mein bat ki thi? Oh no!! Unhone zaroor Sir ko bhaiya ke bare mein baat karne se mana kiya honga.

THE BELL RINGS AND ALL THE CADETS LEAVE CLASS. NAINA STAYS BACK.

NAINA- Sir, apko kaise pata chala ki main hi Cadet Naina Singh hoon?

RAJVEER- Cadet Singh, pehle aap ye bataye, ki abhi-abhi jo apne desh ke liye shahid hone ki bat ki, woh apne kis se sikhi?

NAINA- Woh Sir, actually........bhaiya ne bataya tha ki jab bhi we class mein dhyan nahin dete the aur koi teacher unhe pakad leta tha,
we yahi jawab deker teacher ko khush karte the. Isiliye maine bhi.....

RAJVEER(still smiling)- Tumhare isi jawab se to mujhe pata chala ki tum Navin ki behen ho. Darasal Cadet Singh, yeh dialouge maine aur Navin ne milkar hi banaya tha. Iski madad se hum kahi bar bach chuke hain. Kohi ise hum par hi asmayega, iski ummed nahin thi mujhe.
Isiliye hassi ayi.

[BOTH START LAUGHING]
SUDDENLY NAINA STOPS AND ASKS HIM,

NAINA- Sir, kya aapko bhi lagta hain ki bhaiya ek traitor the?
RAJVEER(with a firm voice)- Nahi. Navin gadar nahin tha. Wo KMA ka aaj tak ka sabse aacha passout tha. Ek aisa sipahi jispar desh ko naz ho.

NAINA SMILES ND BOTH LEAVE THE CLASSROOM.
THOUGH THESE TWO HAVE MET EACH OTHER FOR THE FIRST TIME TODAY, WHAT THEY DONT'T KNOW IS THAT THIS IS THE BEGINNING OF A NEW RELATIONSHIP BASED ON TRUST AND LOVE- THE STRONGEST OF ALL FOUNDATIONS.

NAINA WALKS TOWARDS THE MESS HAPPIER THAN EVER BEFORE. 'COS TODAY SHE HAS MET A PERSON WHO TRUSTS NAVIN AS MUCH AS SHE DOES

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hey great

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SCENE 4- MESS

NAINA-Oh no!! Main Sir se bhaiya ke maut ke bare mein punchna hi bhul gayi.

POOJA- Le, itni sari bate ki aur main bat punchna hi bhul gai.

[HUDA COMES 2 THEIR TABLE]

HUDA- Waise Naina, maine sunna hain ki ye naye Capt. Sir, Nandini ma'am ko date kar rahe hain.

NAINA(smiling)- Achha!! Yeh to ache bat hain na?

HUDA(looks surprised bt relieved)- Ache bat hain?

NAINA(amused)- Haa. Kyu, tujhe kuch problem hain??

HUDA- Nahi. Main to bas yu hi bata raha tha....achha chalta hoon.

[HE GOES AWAY]

NAINA- Acha Pooja, main abhi jakar Capt. Rajveer se bhaiya ke bare mein bat karti hoon.

POOJA- Oye thike. Par jaldi karna. Kuch hi der mein muchhad ki class shuru hone wali hain.

[NAINA NODS ND MOVES TOWARDS RAJVEER'S ROOM]        delete    


Shravya May 9 [NAINA GOES 2 RAJVEER'S ROOM ND KNOCKS ON THE DOOR.
RAJVEER SEEMS SURPRISED BT HAPPY ON SEEING HER]

RAJVEER- Cadet Singh. Aayiye. Brigaidier Chandok ne mujhe apse apke bhai ke bare mein bat karne se mana kiya hain. Par mujhe apko navin ke bare mein kuch batana hain. Par aap ane ka itna achha waqt chunengi, yeh mein nahi janta tha.

[NAINA WALKS INTO THE ROOM]

NAINA- Sir, main kuch samjhi nahi. Achha waqt..?

RAJVEER- It's ok Cadet Singh, aap jaldi hi samaj jayengi. Tum batho. Hume aik khas maiman ka intazar karna honga.

[NAINA IS CONFUSED BT DECIDES 2 DO WHAT RAJVEER TELLS HER]

[SUDDENLY THERE IS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR. NAINA TURNS ND IS SHOCKED 2 FIND DR. RITU MISHRA, AT THE DOOR]

RITU- Apne mujhe bulaya Captain??
[SHE LOOKS AT NAINA ND A LOOK OF TERROR BETRAYES HER FACE]

RAJVEER- Ji haan Dr. Mishra. Ayiye.

RAJVEER(to naina)- Cadet Singh, aap Dr. Mishra ko to janti hi hongi.
NAINA(confused)- Haan, par.....
RAJVEER- Dr. Mishra, Navin ki grfriend thi.
NAINA(shocked)- Kya!!
(she turns 2 ritu who looks like a trapped animal)

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