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Hi Guys,

This is an amazing fic by my friend Bharati......from LRL THREADS community!



"PYAAR KI KAHAANI"-new RN fan-fic
This is the new fan fic by 4 of us-Bharathi,Amritha,Priyanka and Niranjani.......we kindly request you to not to intrupt in the middle of the story we wood continue it n v hope u all will like it. please post ur comments watever may it be about our story......
Enjoy reading it.....

Introduction of characters
1)Naveen Singh Ahluvalia (Naveen):
batch:3rd year at KMA (best cadet)
Status:committed with Ritu

2)Rajveer Singh Shekhavat (Raj):
batch:3rd year at KMA (2nd best cadet)

3)Ritu Mishra (Ritu):
batch:3rd year at KMA
Status:committed with Naveen

4)Shalini Singal (Shalu):
batch:3rd year at KMA

5)Aalekh Sharma (khaidi):
batch:3rd year at KMA
status:committed with Neelu

6)Naina Singh Ahluvalia (Naina):
sister of Naveen
batch:1st year at KMA

7)Ali Baigh (usool bhai):
batch:1st year at KMA
status:committed with Pooja

8)Pooja Ghai (Punjaban):
batch:1st year at KMA
status:committed with Ali

9)Amardeep Huda (Huda):
batch:1st year at KMA

10)Yadhuvansh Sahani (Yudi):
batch:1st year at KMA

11)Neelu Sahani (Neelu):
sister of yudi sahani
status:committed with Aalekh

12)Simran Chopra:
batch:3rd year at KMA
status:single (madly in love wid Raj)(ps.this simran has nothin to do wid our yoga teacher simran....tis is a fictious character...)

Boy meets the Girl
Naveen,Raj,Ritu,Shalu,Aalekh r sitting in the cafeteria n r the best of frnds......
Naveen-"Yaar meri behan aaj se KMA join kar rahi hai"
Ritu-"are wah us ke saath to bahut maza aayega"
Raj-"Teri behan???"
Nav-"ha yaar"
Aal-"Nair ki drill kitne baje hai???"
Raj-teri behan ka naam kya hai
Shalu-the drill starts in another 10 mins jaldi karo warna der
ho jayegi.
Raj-Kab milara hai
Ritu-are tu kyon itna bechain hai.....
Raj-nahin aise koi baat nahin hai
Shalu-haan haan tum kyon itne saare sawaal puch rahe ho???
Raj-mere paas aur koi kaam nahin hai kya main neeche ja raha hoon
(N he leaves)
Naveen-tum kyou bechare ki taang kichete rahte ho???
Raj is angry wid his frnds behavior n is goin towards the grounds. on the way a cadet bumps onto him n is very annoyed with her... he starts shoutin at her without even lookin at her..
Raj-tum dekh ke nahin chal sakti??
Cadet-I'm really sorry i was in a hurry.
but raj didnt register 1 word of wat she told...he jus saw her n kept seein....she picked up her fallen books (raj helped but was of no use really) n leaves.....Raj is completely mesmerised.
Now his frnds have come down 4m the cafeteria n find him ter jus standin n starin in one direction......
Nav(shakin Raj)-yaar kya hua koi bhoot voot dekh liya kya???
no response 4m Raj
Shalu-ye hamari baat sun raha hai ki ya nahin....RAJ RAJ....
Raj-haan.... kya tum sab yahaan kya kar rahe ho???
Aal-abe yede tu oodhar ko kya ghoor raha tha??
Raj- kya...main...nahin to...abe yaar der hogayi chalo...
Tey go to attend the drill.......

Pyaar ka SMS
At luch that day....
Naveen along wid his frnds(Raj wassnt ther as he had punishment 4m nair cos he didnt concentrate on the ongoin drill) was sittin at the cafetaria wen his sister Naina along wid her frnds entered into the cafetaria...
Naina-Hai bhaiya
Nav-hey naina
Naina-hey Ritu kaisi ho????
Ritu-First class (huggin naina) how was ur first day at KMA??
Naina-teek tha i mean mujhe woh Major Nair bilcul pasand nahin aaya...
by the way bhaiya meet my frnds-this is pooja meri roommate...Ali....Yudi....Huda n guys this is my naveen bhaiya..
Nav;Ritu-hi guys...welcome to KMA
Nav-ye mere dosth hain-Aalekh....Shalini
Shalu-Hai me Shalu
Nav-are Rajveer kahan hai???
Alek-use to punishment mila hai na us muchad se.....
Shalu-pata nahin uska dhyaan kahan tha....muchad yane Major Nair (aft spotin the looks on their faces)
Tey all have lunch together n get to noe each other very well.....
At the room in girls hostel at nite
pooja-hai rabba mere to outgoin aur incomin donno he band ho gaye hai aaj ke drill ke baad....ter battery kya kabhi down nahin hoti??
naina-hoti to hai par jab bi bhaiya ko dekhti hoon na to ek ajeeb sa josh aata hai...hes so perfect....
Pooja-haan yaar mujhe bhi tere bhaiya bahut pasand aye agar mera signal ali ka signal nahin catch kar raha hota na to main to apna connection ter bhai ke saath jod leti....
Naina-Kya???? tere aur ali ke beech.....
Pooja..uhm..haan yaar main aur ali bachpan se ek dosre ko jante hai....bas abhi kuch dino pehle hi usne mujhe pyaar ka SMS bheja...aur mere cell pone ne use accept kar liya.....
Naina-are wah...tu to badi chupi rustum nikli.....
tey went to sleep aft that....
Naina aft all her hectic day coodnt 4get the 1 ting that happened rite in the morning meetin that senior cadet in the hall.........
Even aft all the punishment Raj also in his room cood not 4get the girl he met in the morning........

Next day......
Naina wakes up to c a note 4m pooja saying she has already left 4 the clas with Ali...
Naina dresses up picks her bag n books n leaves 4 her clas...(she is late by 10mins)
She is searchin 4 her clas n meets the same boy she met yesterday......
Naina-Excuse me...,...(totally dumbfound)..ya
Naina-Can u tell me were is class room 4??
Raj-go...ah...le..le..left..(pointing to the right)
Naina-u mean right??
raj-no sry right
naina-thanks...bye (she leaves to the right)
raj leaves forgettin the fact that he is 15 min late to his own clas
Naina has got Lolitha sen's clas n raj has told her the wrong way to clas...
Naina cursing Raj reaches the clas 20min late....Lothita mam is very angry...
Lolitha-Cadet Singh u noe wat time the clas is??
Naina(pantin)-I"M sry maam woh...
Lothita-wat sry cadet....
Naina-woh maam i didnt noe the way to the clas...
Lolitha-come again cadet....tum apni clas ke liye puri bees min late ho isliye tumhe trophy room mein rakhi sare trophies ko saaf karogi ek ghante u get that cadet???
naina-yes maam.....pur...
lolitha-pur kya cadet??
Naina-tropy room kahan hai???

Bhargav-cadet shekhavat maine suna hai ki tumhe kal major nair ne bhi punish kiya tha...kya main jaaan sakta hoon tumhara dhyaan aaj kal kahan hai???
Raj-i'm sry sir...
Bhargav-tumhe pata hai ki kal hi Sub Major Lolita sen ne mujhe kaha tha ki unhe trophy room ki safai karne ke liya ek cadet ki zaroorat liye ye tumhari punishment hogi ki tum trophy room ki safai karoge....woh bhi ek ghante mein.....DISMISS
Raj-yes sir....
Raj leaves 4 the trophy room behind him Naveen,Shalu,Ritu n Aalekh r discussing
Shalu-yeh ise ho kya gaya hai...kal bhi late aur aaj bhi???
naveen-mujhe pata nahin....kuch badal sa gaya hai raj
alek-saale ko achi punishment mili hai trophy room ki safai woh bhi ekich ghante mein....
Ritu-pur woh late kyon hua??
Bhargav-Cadets will u pay attention or kya aapko bhi apne dosth ke saath safai karne ka shock hai......

Naina is tere in the trophy room cleaning the trophies wen she is joined by raj
Naina-ji main...woh bhi aapki vaje se..
Naina-haan....aapko yahan ke clas room agar nahin pata ho to aap galat kyun batate hai??
Raj-ji main kuch samjha nahin....
Naina-aapne mujhe galat rasta bataya jiski vaje se main clas late pahunchi aur mujhe punishment mil gayi......pur aap yahan kya kar rahe hain??
Raj-i'm really sry....maine jaan booj ke nahin kiya tha....i...woh...i'm here to supervise...
(lolitha enters the room)
Lolitha-cadet...tumhe yahaan batein karne ke liya beja gaya hai ya phir kaam karne ke leye???
Naina looks at Raj
Raj is embarassed to the core......

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