Cute Romance....Rajveer-Naina
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freakandnut57
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Posted: 14 May 2007 at 11:20pm
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This is a fic by my friend, G@r!|\/|@..
Hope you will enjoy it!As u all no that the first year cadets had returned frm their practical
exam (raj's trigger shifting mission) and about how naina and raj had
finally become one and Huda had compromised with it……so here is the
continuation….
It was rajveer's class going on
Tringgggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!—the bell rang
Raj—so cadets that was ur homework and I don't want any chance of punishing u all 4 nt completing ur homework….DISMISS\
The cadets started piling out of the class…and rajveer was collecting his teaching equipment frm the table….
Naina and pooja were going out together…..
As they were at the door of the class,naina said to pooja –"tu chal main 5 minute main aati hoon!!"
Pooja understood why naina wanted to stay back---to talk to raj……
She
gave naina a mysterious smile. and said-"acha theek hai main bahar hold
par hoon…tu jaldi se captain ko call karke aa…aur sun jaldi aana warna
muchad ke drill ke liye late ho jayegi aur fir woh tera incoming
outgoing dono band kara dega!!!"
Naina—"haan main bas abhi aati honn.."
Naina walks up 2 rajveer's table where he was collecting his things
Naina—"sir…."
Raj looks at naina and says.. "yes cadet singh boliye........."
Naina was completely baffled that raj had called her 'cadet singh'
instead of 'naina'…this was the first time since that day that he had
called her 'cadet singh'..she suddenly became worried thinking 'is he
angry wid me' nahin par aisa kaise ho sakta hai…
Naina(in a completely surprised tone)—"sir!!!!!!!!!"
Raj--- "yes………….jab tak aap mujhe sir bulati rahengi tab ttak main aapko 'naina' nahin 'cadet singh' hi bulaaonga…."
Naina—oh!!!!(in relief)….par sir……
Raj(interrupted her)—"dekha phir se sir….."
Raj moves closer to naina….VERY CLOSE…that he cud feel her breath
He held her left hand in his very gently….
They
looked in each other's faces…then naina blushed and smiled and started
looking at the desk beside which they were standing…..
Raj lifted his left hand and turned nainas face towards him who kept her gaze lowered all the time
Raj—"hey….meri taraf dekho.."
Naina
looked up and straight into Raj's eyes whose warmth made her feel the
most comfortable…..she loved to be so close to rajveer and felt she was
the luckiest person on the whole earth…
Raj—"kya ab bhi tum mujhe sirf ek 'sir' samajhti ho………….usse zyada kuch nahin????"
Naina—"woh main..."
Raj held her hand even more tightly…
He said—"haan …bolo"
Naina—"nahin
aap to meri zindagi main sabse zyada ehmiyat rekhte hain…..aap ke bina
ek pal bhi nahin ji sakti main…..jaagti hoon to har jagah sirf aapka
chehra dikhta hai…soti hoon to mere sapno main bhi keval aap rehte
ho….aapke karib rehkar khud ko pura mehsoos karti hoon…..aapke bina
hamesha ek ajnabi sa adhurapan hota hai…….main aapse bahut pyaar karti
hoon……….sabse zyada"
Raj smiled at her…..
She smiled at him…
…….they both kept gazing at each other…..raj still holding her hand and so close to each other as they had never been…..
Just then there was a knock at the door
Pooja's voice came—"oye naina…..tera call kuch zyada hi lamba ho raha hai….jaldi kar..agli class ke liye late hona hai kya.."
Rajveer
and Naina were relieved to hear that it was only
pooja....they...suddenly realized how close they were……he let go off
her hand…..and looked the other way…
Naina(replied)---"haan pooja main aa rahi hoon…tu ja drill ke liye"
Pooja—"theek hai.."
Naina (to raj)---"sir main jaaon"
Raj—"of course….by the way kaunsi class hai tumhari..?"
Naina—"woh major nair ki drill hai.."
Raj—"dekhna tum zaroor is drill mein 1st aaogi.....best of luck"
Naina---"jab mera lucky charm hi yahan hai toh ……."
Raj---"oh…"
He leaned towards naina and kissed her on the cheek…..
Raj---"ab is lucky charm ki imprint aapke paas hai …..ab to koi problem nahin.."
Naina smiled at him…..and then went out of the class
Raj also came out of the class after her………
Rajveer went into his room to do some work..
Naina went to the
field where their drill was to take place………..all the other cadets were
already there………….there were still 10 minutes for the drill too
start………ali, pooja, huda, yudi and aalekh were standing together………
Pooja—"lo aa gayi hamari naina..."
Naina had a smile across her face……remembering the time when Raj had come so close to her….
All of them noticed the smile….
Yudi (to huda) ---"Dude….pyaar insaan ko kitna badal deta hai……hamari naina ka naak par baitha gussa to ekdam gayab…"
Huda---"Oye kuch nahin badalta…"
Yudi--"no dude…look at ali and pooja.."
Huda--" main abhi prove karta hoon ki naina nahin badli hai... who abhi bhi wahi phoolon devi hai"
Yudi—"Bah.."
Huda—"Lagi shart.."
Huda
moves a little forward towards naina and says—"oye phoolon aaj kuch
zyada hi muskara rahi hai……….us captain ke saath aisa kya kiya jo aaj
itni khush hai………"(he thought that naina wud definitely get angry at
this)
Naina—"haan(as if woken frm a dream)……kuch nahin…."
Yudi started laughing at huda……
Huda gave yudi a fierce glance…he shut up…..then turned towards naina….
Huda—"Kuch nahin…..bas itna sa jawab…..aur kuch to bol….oye phoolon wala gussa kahan gaya.."
Yudi came forward and said—"u lost dude….hamari naina poori tarah se badl gayi hai…"
"ATTENTION CADETS…"
it was major nair's voice…all cadets took their places…..
MC—"
so cadets aaj aap sab ke second year ki pehli drill hai…..no one wants
to perform bad in the very frst drill of the year except kuch kamzor
aur darpok cadets…(looking at pooja)"
MC—"ok so aaj aapko karma ye
hai ki wahan pade ruck sacks lekar aapko us pahad ke do chakkar lagane
hain……be careful.kyunki who pahad ek pool se surrounded hai….to apne
har kadam men savdhani bartiyega……..IS IT CLEAR TO ALL??"
"YES SIR"
MC—"So ur time starts now.."
All the cadets picked up their ruck sacks and started their drill……All our dearest six cadets were ahead of all the others……..
Naina was behind huda..when they were returning….
Naina—"aye huda tuh wahan mujhse neeche kya keh raha tha …maine suna nahin tha…main kahin aur khoi hui thi.."
Huda—"us captain ke bare mein soch rahi thi naa…..itna mat socha kar uske bare mein warna paagal ho jaayegi"
Naina(under her breath)—"paagal to ho hi chuki hoon….unke pyaar mein.."
Huda—"Kya kaha…"
Naina—"kuch nahin……tu bata tu neeche kya keh raha tha"
Huda—"jaane de faaltu mein gussa ho jayegi.."
Saying this he went ahead…………….
Naina stood there ..Wondering…..when she resumed running…she did nt notice that her shoe lace was open ….and
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH…….
she
fell down from the hill right into the pool………fortunately she was nt
very high on the hill so she did nt get hurt very badly….
All the other 5 of them hurried down the hill and stood by the pool…..
MC
came there……and said…"I don't want any of u to help cadet singh…she has
to come here on her own…there are 5 min. till left 4 the drill 2 b
complete. I will wait till then…"
Naina tried her level best but
couldn't make it to the shore because of the wound in her leg she had
got during Raj's mission……….
When 5 minutes were over, MC
said—"cadet singh... u have failed the first drill of this year too
same as last year"… then he turns towards the cadets and said "don't
think that u can help her now...these two commandoes will see to it...."
he pointed towards two strong men..
Raj's work had finished…he decided to go and see naina and how she was performing in the drill…..
He went out in to the K.M.A. grounds….just then his phone rang…..
Raj
was talking on the phone…. "yes sir…..ok sir main kuch din aur ruk
sakta hoon iof it is necessary after all it is a very serious matter we
cannot take risks with it…………….."
Just then he met Major nair who was coming back from the drill…he gave Rajveer a wicked sort of smile and then went ahead….
Raj (on the phone)—"Sir I will call u back later…"
Saying this he put down the phone….
He
looked at major nair and then thought to himself….. "Why did he smile
at me? ...kahiin inhe mere aur naina ke bare mein pata to nahin chal
gaya or is it something about naina's drill…I will have to go and
see….."
Naina woke up…she was feeling very heavy…..she looked around herself to
find herself lying in the infirmary…..there was no electricity….only
things illuminating the room were two pairs of candles….kept on the
table nearby….
"Main yahaan………"
Raj was sitting on the sofa….he suddenly got up when he heard naina's voice …
"So tum jag gayin…."
"Par main yahaan kaise…."
"Shayad major nair ki drill ke dauran koi pahaadi se neeche pool mein gir gaya tha……"
"Oh…haan…."
Raj and naina looked at each other……then naina got up and sat
Raj said—"just a sec…I'll get a cushion…."
He went to take the cushion….
Naina--"aap tabse yahiin ho……mere paas…"
Raj, while giving the cushion to naina, "yes…main yahiin hoon..."
As
naina was taking the cushion, her fingers gently brushed against
rajveer's fingers…..and they kept their hands in the same position…both
holding the cushion….while looking at each other…..
Just then someone switched on the light…..
"Good Morning…"
Both of them looked at the door…..Dr. Shalini was standing there with a grin across her face…
Raj and naina both in a hurry, left the cushion at the same time…..
It fell on to the floor….Raj quickly picked it up….
Then he moved back a little to make way 4 shalini who wanted to see her patient……
While
shalini was checking naina's temperature, she said—"By the way
captain…..electricity aaye hue to kafi time ho gaya hai, par yahaan kii
lights to off hi thin….main jaan sakti hoon kyun…."
She winked at naina to tell her that it was a joke…. They both looked at Raj…
He saw both of them looking his way and quickly began giving an explanation—"nahiin…who…actually main …main...itna pareshan
Tha kii Maine notice hi……"
Then he noticed the smirk across their faces and understood that it was just a joke…
"Oh to ye joke tha…..and naina tum bhi inke saath…"
Naina—"Sorry…."
Shalini—"I too captain…"
Then shalini turned towards naina
"Waise
cadet tumhare bare mein bhi ek baat kehni padegi….pichle saal bhi apni
first drill ke baad behosh ho gayin thi and captain ko apko apni
'baahon' mein yahaan lana pada tha…..bas unconscious honi ki wajah alag
thi……"
Naina looked at raj asking for his help
"Not this time……u played a joke on me…now u deal with this yourself….."
Shalini—"Don't worry cadet…after all such small jokes are what give us a break from our hectic schedule…..right?"
"Right"
After some time naina went to her room and Raj went towards his own room…….
When Raj reached his room, he saw an orderly standing in front of his door with a letter in his hand…..
The orderly saluted him and said—"Sir, ye apke liye Brigadier Chandok ka letter hai…"
Raj took the letter…..and gestured the orderly to go…..
Raj opened the letter
"Captain Rajveer,
Mujhe
military board se ek letter aaya hai……….regarding that I would like to
meet u ………..see me in my office as soon as possible.
Brigadier Chandok"
Raj thought to himself—"military board se BC ko kya letter aaya hoga….i will have to go and see…."
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hey. it sounds interestin. cont soon.
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hey too good
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hey too good
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hey too good
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