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freakandnut57

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freakandnut57

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Posted: 13 May 2007 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Hey friends,

My friend Naina wrote this fic on our Orkut Community.....I loved it s putting it up here for all of you!

Cheers,
JIV

PART--1
It was party time in KMA.Last year had came to end.everyone has done a gr8 job.And no doubt that cadet, Naina singh Aluwalia was d best cadet of the year!
That day was not only gr8 day for naina but also her freinds!
Alekh was full of emotions and surprisingly tears too when naina came to him running with trophy and hugged him!
naina's parents were so happy and more than dere happiness it was dere proudness.This was d KMA who have made dare brave son'd death a traitors death.They had all d reasons to hate KMA.But as if now they have forgotten all that and was only seeing dare doughter getting award with full pride!
And yes along with her freinds and parents dare was someone who was most happiest of them all!who was standing very back and clapping wid his heart full of happiness,pride and......love!

As she was crying he was too! like they are taking same breath, same emotions in dare heart! They were so close but still away!
after ceremony end naina run to him and hugged him verry hard
Naina:- i did it sir! i did it!
Meine apko aur bhaiya ko diya vada nibhaya!
And she hugged him even tight.
no one knows but he that this hug will last for him forever!

It was 2 days from it now but capt. just cant get enough of that hug! everytime he close his eyes he saw naina coming to him and giving him hug! that sparkle in her eyes, that joy......he cant stop thinking of her!
he knows what it was but he was too afraid to confess couse of him naina had to undergo difficult time and now he dnt wanted to do anything that will hurt her and eventully him too!
To add more joy to KMA's air it was Lodi! and Suruji has taken permission from B.C to celebrate and B.C too happy with cadats performance gave permisson!
like suriji huda was top of his happiness! His mummiji was happy with his report,his phoolan had won best cadet trophy, and it was lodi!
sherwani pehenkar! waise toh sab ladkiya aapko Shahrukh bulati hai aur sherwani main to aap.." then he realise that he is praising him" waise sir meri bhi sherwani kuch kam nahi hai! woh meri mummiji layi thi! ab aapse kya kahu main aur meri mummiji.."
huda started again. raj to went from dare!
" oh sir kaha gaye aap! dekha mummiji" huda again sat in sad mood!

At Evening:-

Pooja was getting ready.Her dark green punjabi was looking gr8! her hair tied in a small clip. Big green earings and green chudiya. she was looking very cute and pakki panjaban as all calles her.

POOJA:- Naina! Tu tayar hue ya nahi.kitne missed call bhej rahi hu tujhe ti itna silent mode par kyu hai?
then she turned arround and after seeing Naina she Shout
"Oye teri..."

In Raj's Room:-
here in his room raj was also getting ready.he was wearing black and dark brawn sherwani that suriji had bringed spacially for him.he was surely looking gr8!( no doubt!) He was really happy and smiling. he was standing in front of mirror and he thought..
"Today i m very happy! today im this happy first time... no when i bring back naian then i was happy.......no " he was getting even confssed. he took his odhani and was playing with that "when i teach naina how to dance and danced with her then i was happy....no not again...when we was toghether in mentorship programme when dare was no other.....oh! so what abt 2 days ago when naina hugged him?"
he was asking him self, " m i getting mad?" he said by seeing what he had done to his odhani by thinking!
"why my all happiness r related to naina. why?"
Then only Ritu enters into his room.
ritu:-So capt, thinking of me?"
Capt. looked at her. She was surely looking very preity and very feminine. with pink saari and a dazzling pink earing and bracelet.
"wow.. capt. 2day ur looking very handsome. Wo to aap roj hi lagate ho magar aaj to aap....aaa...."
"shahrukh khan lag rahe hai" Shalini completed her sentance." waise yaha ki saari ladkiya inhe shahrukh hi bulati hai. Aur aaj jara sambhalke rakhana apne RRRRRRajveer ko" Shalini said it with typical SRK tone.
" u two ladies making me feel embarresed. aur dr. shalini aap abhibhi tayyer nahi hui? hame bhi to mauka milna chahiye aapki tarif karane ka?"
Shalini:-"dnt worry capt. usi ke liye to yaaha aayi thi."
Raj in very mischevious tone" kya aap meri sharwani lene aayi thi! no ways dr mein apko apni jaan de sakta hu magar yeh sherwani nahi..."
shalini:- no capt. apko jaan dene ki kkoi jaroorat nahi. jaara dr. ritu ke baareme to sochiye. waise mein yahaan dr.ritu ko hi lene ayi thi. mujhe pata tha ke woh yahi hongi! to kuch minute ke liye mein apki ritu ko le ja rahi hu thik hai! see u on ground! aur Girl cadets se bachake rehna wo jaisi dikhati hai waisi hai nahi" and shalini winked at ritu. Ritu who was silently listening to Capt-shalini conversassion started laughing.and they went!

Capt. smile and loked his room and was abt to go to d ground but he thought he should first see naina! Haan naa karate karate he went to her room and knoked twice but dare was no reply so he opened d door and went inside and by seeing naina he also said " oye teri!!"
Naina looking at capt. and pooja unbelevably " whts wrong with u? why u both shouting the same thing? m i looking that bad?"
Naina was wearing a white chicken kurta and her hairs tied in a pony.
"oye naina,tu lodi pe jaa rahi hai ya phir sone? Jara toh suj dhaj kar chal! yeh jya black and white phone ki tarah aur monotonic phone ki tarah dikh rahi hai, jara polyphonic dhun toh baja!"
Naina:-"Pooja aaj sirf lodi hai meri shaadi nahi! aur sir aap bhi!"
Raj understood that her mood was not right.
"Huda sach kehta hai! tujhame jananiyowali koi baat hi nahi hai!"
and pooja left the room!
"waise sir aap bhi.."naina turn at capt. and stop "sir, aaj aap bohot hi acche lag rahe hai.waise toh roj hi acche dikhatein hai lekin aaj aap.." befor naina could complete her sentance
" ha pata hai, pata hai,abhiabhi dr. shalini ne kaha aur cadet huda bhi keh chuke hai ke mein shahrukh khan ki tarah lag raha hu" capt. said it with shying." nahi sir aaj aap kuch aur nahi lag rahe hai aap wahi ho jo aap pehle the capt. rajveer singh shekhawat.par...aaj mein jis insaan ko dekh rahi hu woh koi military officer nahi hai. aaj mein sirf Rajveer ko dekh rahi hu ya phir jaise mere bhaiyya kehte the Raj ko". that word raj frm her mouth add extra shine to his shiny eyes."thx cadet.par mein bhi wahi chahta hu. mein bhi cadet naina ah.. singh ko nahi dekhana chahta use toh mein roj hi dekhata hu.mein to naina ko dekhana chahta hu ya phir Nain ko"Raj said it by coming near her!

just mentioned of her bhayya bring tears to her eyes. she look up in raj eye " apko kaise pata.." " ke naveen tumhe Nain bulata tha? usne kaha tha. tab mujhe bohot hasi ayi thi ke koi kisiko Nain kaise bulata hoga! par eventually i agree!".Naina left the room and come out. Raj followed her."Naina, meri baat to suno" but she was going further away from him. finally he got her. he catch her hand to stop her" naina, tum aisa kyu kar rahi ho." naina suddenly turned,her eyes filled with tears.she rescued her hand from his grip."sir, mera bilkul mood nahi hai.Mein is baar lodi pe akeli, na bhaiyya na maa papa. bilkool akeli.mein.." she cnt say a word couse she was crying so hard.Raj came near him he placed his hand over her sholder little hesistantly " naina kya naveen ya phir tumhare parents yahi chahate ke tum apni khushiyonko apne paas ane se roko! tumhare parents ne tumhe yaha bheja is umeed me ke tum yaha par khush hongi lekin jab unhe is baat ka pata chalega toh kya woh khush honge? aur kisne kaha tum akele ho tumhare paagal dost yaha pe hai,suriji, shalini,lolitaji sab hai aur hudaji ko koun bhul sakata hai?"Naina was now smiling." aur mein bhi toh hu yahan." " sir aap ho is liye main bhi yahan hu,apne mujhe himmat di he hamesh. aur mujhe pata hai dete rahenge. hai na?"
for a few seconds Raj was just looking at her. then he realised wht he was doing." so cadet aap mujha par bharosa karati hai na. toh mere saath chaliye.Arey, chalo toh sahi." Raj drag her in front of shalini's room. he knocked.ritu opened the door." arey, captain aap?" then shalini came out wearing a beautiful red panjabi!" Kya baat hai captain? jara der apne Rituse door nahi reh paaye? ya phir girl cadets picche pad gayi hai?" shalini said it with a cute innocence on her face. "firstly.... ji nahi mere picche koi pada nahi hai.. unfortunatly..aur ur looking very nice dr. aur aap bhi yahi chahati hongi ke aap ki tarah sab khoobsurat lage! toh.." Raj hesisted for a moment" ...toh.. mujhe apki madat chahiye".shalini try not to smile.

" Kya aapko bhi make-up karana hai captain?" ritu was looking poitlessly here and there try not to smile."ji nahi dr.i m absolutely fine with my looks! par.. inhe jaroorat hai," raj point towards naina." oho.. naina yeh kya hai! mujhe laga aaj toh tumme aur ritu mein competetion hogi ke kaun kitne ladkonko behosh karega! par...not a problem capt. aap sahi insaan ke paas aye hai! i will take care of her and u take care of ritu1 i mean just take her out1 mein naina ko lekar aati hu!"Raj and ritu was about to go but Raj keep looking back at naina. " capt.main apke cadet ko khane nahi wali hu! just go1"Raj and ritu went from dare.
they were first to reach there amongst faculty.And yes..girl cadet were looking again and again at him.suriji and lolita was decorating and giving last touch to arrangements.ritu was looking at them very patiently and on the other side Raj was going to cross his limit of keeping patience.'where r they? shalini bhi na1 sirf naina ko acche kapade dene the naki use shadi ke liye sajana tha. kitni der laga rahi hai! what if naina ane se inkaar kar de!'"no" he shout little loudly." kya hua capt. kisse na keh rahe hai aap?"" woh suriji jara galat tarike se woh saja rahe the toh... main jara dekh kar aata hu." and he went from there." strange" ritu said.
ali was going to see where naina and pooja are and remaining boys went sreight to ground.ali was going towards hall then he saw pooja." wow" word came out of his mouth unnoticingly.when pooja came near him he was just looking at her , speechless." oye, ali. tujhe kya hua? aise hang hue mobile ki tarah kyu khada hai? accha chal chhd. mujhe bata main kaisi lag rahi hu?"Pooja said it with lots of hope." aap toh acchi hi lag rahi hai. hindustani kapadome har koi accha hi lagata hai" ali said something that he dont want to say and dont say something that he want to say. pooja was dissapointed.but thats the way he is pooja thought and they went to ground.
everyone was there.it was a very cheerfull evening.suriji and lolita,like usuall, was fighting aur may i say that lolita was doing the talking part and suriji was doing the listening part.huda and pooja togethr were explaining ali what is lodi all about and ali was getting more and more confussed! UD and alekh was loughing at them.ritu and capt. was standind together.ritu clunching raj's hand was greeting all the people but raj was searching only one face and most baeutiful face of world." where is she? now thats enough" raj was thinking.then he saw shalini coming without saying a word to ritu he removed her hand from his and went towords shalini. ritu just watch him go with a little annoying look.
"Dr. where is naina? woh aa toh rahi hai na? kya usne ane se mana kar diya? kya main usse baat kara lu?"raj was firing queistions at shalini." capt. capt. capt.? relax. take a deep breath. woh aa rahi hai1 maine use apna ek dress de diya hai! woh abhi bas chudiya pehen rahi hogi aur.....hey waha kya ho raha hai" shalini went towards huda and pooja and ali who was now super confussed and huda was telling him about lodi like he was interrogeting him.
but Raj was in a different world." chudiyaan" he thought."that elegent, beautifull hands full with choodiyan" Raj could hardly imagined. now it was time, he cant just stand here and wait for her he must go and watch her now."but what should i tell her? Cadet naina i was wondering ke tum choodiyaan pehne hue kitni khoobsurat lagogi si i came here to see u? How stupid of me"raj was talking to himself. but finally he decided to go.
he was middle of the corridor when he heard something!whatever it was but it was coming towards him!

he just turned to see who it was and thank god it was a pillar behind him which saved him from falling down couse it was her coming towards him.in yellow salwar and sky blue kameej with full embroyadery and jewells on it. she had made a choti of her hairs which was laying on her waist. a baeutiful golden blue earings and a bindi.Her eyes.....shiny and big.so suitable for her name.that sound which was coming was from her payal.which now was feeling like a Mantra for capt's ears.and finally her choodiyan, her hand was full with blue and golden choodiyan.
Sound of that was making his heart miss one heartbeat. Naina was looking very beautifull more than his imagination. he was so busy admiring her that when she came near him he cant understand!
" sir, aap yahan,aap yahan kya kar rahe hai? apko toh ground par hona chahiye na!"
" main woh....ha actually..main.." Capt. was fumbling and holding the words which was eager to come out.
" sir, apko kya hua? aap thik to hona?"
capt. smile and said,"Cadet. naina ah. singh agar aap jaisa koi samne khada ho toh mere jaise ki kya himmat jo kuch kahe!"
naina's cheeks went red and she looked dawn.but capt. was still looking at her.'how could any one look so beautiful?hought. when she was flapping her eyelashes everytime his heart was saying 'ahh'.but then major nair came and said loudly" Capt. shekhawat aur cadet naina. kya koi special lodi hai jo aap kahi aur ja rahe hai? agar nahi to chaliye bahar"
"oh, yes major.we are coming.naina chaliye apko bahar bohot logonko behosh karana hai." they both smiles and went.
As they were passing people were looking at them.Ali, ud, pooja, alekh was looking at naina and him as they havnt seen them like this befor.
"arey, bhaiyo.yeh kya hogaya tum sabako? bhoot dekh liya kya ya phir mokambo aagaya? aise kyo khade ho jaise cma mein chale gaye ho?" said huda who was not facing naina.
"Oye huda, agar tu palat ke dekhega na to tu inverted coma mein chala jaega! bighade hue handset ki tarah hang ho jaega! aur tera connection out of reach ho jaega!"
" arey aisa kya hai mere picche?"and huda turned. and stand stunned.
naina came near him " hell.. kya hua sabko? huda..oye jatt. tu hai ya phir..." she point her finger upword.
"oye nahi re phoolan! tujhe chodkar itni jaldi nahi jaane wala mein! meri mummiji hoti toh teri nazar utarke kala tikka laga deti."
"arey teri mummiji nahi toh kya hua mein hu na!" pooja came and place a kala tikka on naina's neck" ab nazar na lagegi kisiki"
"pooja tu bhi na kuch bhi"
naina said to ppoja!

"oye khote de puttaro! main tum logon ko kabse bula raha hu! chalo lodi nahi manani kya?" Every one went to do pooja!
When they all were walking arroud lodi capt. was only looking at naina1 she was too happy! and thats why he was to! Raj ka mann abhibhi bhara nahi tha, he was constantly looking at her1
"Apun ne to suna tha ke lodi matlab hangama hota hai!lekin idhar to sub log summ me baithe hai!kya suriji itni thandi lodi?"
and then looking at huda alekh said" or tu be shaane..tu kya keh raha tha ke dhamakedaar lodi hongi to kidhar ko hai dhamaka?"
"oye kaidi thand rakh thand rakh.abhi dikhata hu tujhe dhamaal. oye bulao dholwalo ko" shouted huda. and suddenly from all directions dholwale and panjabi dancers come. everyone started dancing!
All faculty members step outside couse all the students were dancing. they was only clapping and enjoying!Naina was talking with pooja. alekh and uD was doing something that THEY consider to be dance! huda was dancing like he hvnt danced for ages! ali was dancing too! but was little embarsing!
suriji was controlling his feet from tapping.whenever he goes further lolita gave him look like 'what r u doing?' huda understand and take alekh and ud with him and drag suriji nad lolita onto the dance floor.they were now at the center and all cadets surrounding them.that exactly what suriji wants so he started dancing to the beat of the dhol.After sometime lolita too start dancing.B.C and shalini also joined them so how could ritu stand back she took capt. with her inside the circle. everyone was now cheering couse their fav. pair was now going to dance! but raj was not interested.shalini was giving him push whenever he go forward and ritu when he move backword so they were having fun teasing capt.finally raj rescue him frm them.
he was leaving when suriji came."oh, captainji kithe ja rahe ho aap? abhi to rang jama hai aur aap aise fike hi ja rahe hai! thoda to rang jamaie!"" thnx suriji but mujhe jara jaana hai"
"oh suriji kya hua aap yaha aur capt.ji aap kidhar chale?aap to is shaam ki jaan ho!"huda asked raj.
"sorry cadet huda i need to go! but u do enjoy urself!"
Huda:-"kya sir! aap chahate he ke jaise fresher's ball par apko maine challenge kiya tha tohi aap naache the aur usi din ki tarah bhaav khake jaenge toh yeh main hone nahi dunga! ya phir dr. ritu aap ke baareme sach keh rahi thi ke 'capt. ki ab umr ho chuki hai'" huda said with little mischievious smile on his face. raj raise his eyebrows" oh! jaleous? waise hudaji kya aap ko lagata hai ke mujhe kisiko impress karane ki jaroorat hai? hvnt i impressed all? and dare r enough girls running behind me?" Raj said as he knew how will huda react. he stopped loughing and see here and dare. Raj smilling put his hand over huda's shoulder and said,"aap kissise panga lene ki adat nahi chodenge na? par mujhase to aap door hi rahena! chaliye is lodi ki aag main aapki yeh adat swaha kar dete hai!" huda removes raj's hand over his shoulders and look at him!
and said,"sir,woh kehte hai na boori adatein itni jaldi nahin na jaati! aur jab sangat itni khaas ho to phir bilkool hi nahi". Raj perfectly understood what huda said.but then huda realised that they have came far away from the main topic. then he turned to suriji.
huda:-kya suriji aap aise hi khade hai? aapne capt. sir ko nahi force kiya? meri baat to woh maan nahi rahe!"
Raj:- no cadet. its absolutatly fine aur mujhe bhangada kiye hue kai saal ho gaye and now i cant dance!
Huda:-(said with a typical teasing tone of huda)
sir! aap mein hidden talent bohot hai! aur woh aap aise moke par hi dikhate hai. aur aap kaise bhi naache magar un do langoorose toh accha nach sakenge na!" huda point towards alekh and ud who had now crossed all the limits of being a normal aur may i say being a human. now they were out of control,dancing the way which an alien may dance ( if alien dances).
Raj was in confussed condition, should he get surprised by knowing alekh and ud's nature or get shocked or lought or may be he should get angree! he was just shaking his head as if he is finding some emotions to exclaime. but suriji was at top of his anger!
suriji:- Oye! khotte de puttero! yeh kya...yeh..yeh kya kar rahe ho!
And suriji went towards them.huda too went with him to see the result of his bomb which he had just planted against them!
Raj:- Suriji sambhalke kahi woh dono aapko aapka dance na bhoolade!
Raj still confussed went towards the corner where there was a nice bar.he sat there and order a juice. he was looking at crowd. his eyes were rolling over all the people loughing, dancing, enjoying! but why cant he? then his eyes fixed on naina and he get the answer. still thinking of her he took his juice and turn.
" kya hua capt? aap aaj bina kisi dhamakeke aa gaye?" b.c asked raj by sitting beside him
Raj:- oh ! hello sir! woh kya hai na main bhi wahi soch raha hu ke kisine mere liye koi dhamaka plant kaise nahi kiya?"
and they both lough.
B.c:- capt. kya hua itne me hi thak gaye? arey hamari toh umar ho chooki hai1 aur aap?
capt.:-Nahi sir aisi koi baat nahi hai. bas poorane din yaad kar raha tha. yaad hai sir KmA ki woh akhiri lodi?
B.C:- Yes, capt.it was a blast. sare cadet masti mein the like now. sabse akhir tak koun nachega yeh muquabala tha. aur aap to akhir tak the. come on capt. us baat ko abhi itne bhi saal nahi hue ke aap woh phir se na kar paaye!
Capt.:-Ha sir1 lekin us waqt mein akela nahi jeeta tha koi aur bhi tha mere saath 'naveen'
B.C stare at capt. rather shokinglt couse he was not aware that he will mention naveen
B.C:- wo lodi kaise bhuli ja sakti hai?wo akhiri lodi thi jo KMA mein manai gayi thi.us hadase ke baad KMA mein kabhi lodi nahi ki gayi.
And b.c get sad.
Capt.:- ( thinking of naveen) kuch yaadein sirf dukh deti hai sir!
( then he return back to present) par phir bhi aap ne is saal lodi ke liya ha kar di?
B.C:-( getting happy again)
Yeh sach hai capt ke kuch yaadein dirf dukh deti hai magar poorani yaado ka boj hum hamare aaj ya kal par to nahi daal sakte na! is saal sabhi cadets ne accha kaam kiya hai! tnx to u of course!
Capt:- ( giving his best shy smile which surely kills every girl)
aise baat nahi hai sir they deserve it!
Apko aaj ki lodi kaisi lagi sir?
B.C:- Such mein cadet huda aur cadet ghaine milkar bohot achha samaa bandha hai! maine socha nahi tha ke yeh do cadets itni jimmedari se kuch kaam kar paayenge! but u see capt. this whole year was full of surprises!and this is the best lodi i ever attended! aur saare log kitne khoobasurat lag rahe hai and yes if we are talking about khoobsurati then how could we forget to mention such a lovely lady Cadet naina singh ahluwalia!
Now capt. who was half listening to what b.c. was saying and was lost in his own thought gave full attention to what B.c was saying!
B.C:-meine naina ko pahle hi din kaha tha ke tum sajane sawarane main acchi dikhogi!she prooved that i was right! isnt she is looking nice?
Capt.:- ( now was fully recharged. said it with a very happt tone)
Absolutely! i 100% agree with u sir!
Raj was now again looking at her. suddenly B.c ask "Toh capt. rituji se shaadi kab kar rahe ho aap? engegement toh hog choki hai aur ab shaadi main itni der kyu?
that question sucked all the happy and lovely feelings that raj was feeling.he suddenly get alarmed.
Capt.:- Sir... app... matlab apne aise ekdum se...meri shaadi ki baat...
( he was thinking may be b.c know everything)
B.C:- Woh, i m sorry capt. yeh aapka personal decission hai lekin aap toh yeh jaante hai ke kis halat main aapki aur rituji ki rishtey ki baat samne ayi thi. so u can understand me na?
B.C said it with little hesistance!
Raj now relifed couse b.c dnt know anything
Capt.:-I completely understand u sir!
but woh mujhe jo report banani hai main usme bohot hi busy hu aur aap jante hai ki aur bhi kuch jaroori kaam karane hai mujhe! aur dr. ritu ko bhi apne conferance ke liye jaana hai. so we both are thinking og getting married after all this sort out.
B.C was about to say something when he heard some loud voices.

B.C:-arey yeh awwaze kyu aa rahi hai?

B.C and capt. Went towards the crawd. All the guys were on one side and all the gals was on one side.
B.C was abt to ask suriji what happened
B.C:- Suriji yeh kya….
But he was too busy with arguing with lolita.

Suriji:-sorryji, waise main apki har ek baat manata hu lekin ji is baar gal aisi hain ke I differ in opinion at this pt with u ( suriji try to sound serious)

Lolita:- Come again?

B.C:- (raising his voice)
Yeh kya ho raha hai?

Hearing his voice all stopped shouting

B.C:- yeh kya ho raha hai suriji aur aap bhi?

Naina and ali who was not the part of this mess came forward

Ali:- hum batate hai! Who kya hua ke yeh sab lig is baat par jhagad rahe hai ke ladkiyan behtar hai ya phir ladke.

Raj:- what?

Ali:- sir magar hum manate hai ke dono hi barabar hai! ( ppoja feel proud now. But ali think something for a second and saod)
Waise KMA mein toh ladke ladkiyonse jyada hai!

Pooja:- ( now get angry)
Oye, tu kehna kya chahta hai ke hum ladkiyon main dum nahi hai!

Ali try to play it safe.
Ali:- ji nahi aap hamein galat samajh rahi hai! Magar hum jo keh rahe hai who sach to hai!

Pooja:-arey yeh kya baat hue? Hamara subscription kum hai iska matlab yeh to nahi ke humari range kum hai! Hum out of reach nahi hote!
Now ali was also in fighting mode.

He was abt to say something but capt. Cut him
Raj:- Cadet ghai and cadet begh! Just stop it! Aap log yeh kya kar rahe ho? ( he was smiling at their childishness) stop being kids! Grow up!

Aur pooja I know ki apka subscription…….i mean apka network… oh god……what I mean to say that apka tower…uuuffff ( raj was getting confussed with his and pooja's language and pooja was looking at him as if he ask she is ready to give him free classes of mobile language)
Raj:- Mujhe pata hai ke KMA mein ladkiyan kum hai magar iska matlab yeh toh nahi ke unme dum kum hai! In fact josh ki kumi to kisi mein bhi nahi hai! We are equal right?

Huda:- ( who loves to create fight)
Sir aap yeh sab KMA ke teacher ke hisaab se bol rahr hai! Par as a guy I think u should support us! See aaj tak jo best cadets KMA se pass out hue hai who kaun the?

Raj:- Boyz!

Huda:- Kaun he jinhone boreder par sabse jyaada bahaduri dikhai hai?

Raj:- Boyz!
( Huda was winning in his game. Raj was answering without thinking)

huda:- kisne sabse jyaada medals jeetein he?

Raj:- boyz!

Huda:- Toh sir who is best?

Raj:- ( without thinking ) Boyz! ( then he realized what he had said) (all girls who was looking at him in hope now look at him in disbelief) I mean……. what I mean to say is….

Huda:- ( now much happy) Sir ab aagayi na dil ki baat jubanpe?

Rja:- shut up cadet huda!

Pooja:- Rehne dijiye sir! Aap bhi auroki tarah nikle na! Tax jyaada usage kum!

Raj was not keen to know what all was thinking abt him but he was worried what naina must be thinking abt him?)

Ud:- Hey common pooja! Jo sach hai who sach hai! Accept it na!!

Pooja:- Accha toh ek muquabala ho jaye! Phir ho jaega postpaid ka postpaid aur prepaid ka prepaid!

Ud:- Huh…

Pooja:- matlab pani ka pani aur dudh ka dudh!

Ali:- Muquabala?

Pooja:- Kyu dar gaye kya?

Ali:- hum aur daar who bhi aapse! Hah…Hamein manjoor he. Kyu guru…( ali asked all the guys they said yeh)
Now suriji and nair went towards boyz side. Lolita shalini, ritu join gals.
B.C, raj and naina who was standing in center still figure outing how to stop them, but ppoja drag naina with her.B.C and raj try to stop them but no use! Then they decided not to jump into this matter and sit beside!

B.C:- waise lagata hia maaza ayega! Phir se gaana bajana!
Aap ko kya k\lagata hai girls jeetengi ya phir boyz? Aap kis team ko cheer karane wale ho?

Raj Lookes at him in disbelief
Raj:- aap bhi sir?

After some minutes suriji came forward and ask
Suriji:- waise humein koi problem toh nahi hai! Magar ek question hai! May I ask u ji?

Lolita:- ok ! ask!

Suriji:- Yeh muquabala kis cheez ka hai?

Pooja:- wahi jo karana aap ko aur mujhe pasand hai aur lolita mam aur ali ko nahi!
Dance!

Ali:- kya …dance?

Huda:- matlab teri hamein koi help nahi hogi!

Pooja;:- Ha dance! And we are gonna start couse ladies first!

UD:- that's not fair! Hamesha tumse hi shuruwat kyon? Now ownwords we are gonna start!

Shalini:- cadet sahani, yeh toh parampara hai ke ladies first aap ise badal nahi sakte!

Ud:- kyu mam? Aap aar gayi ?

Shalini:- Oh plz…toh aisi baat hai! Thik hai hum tum boyz par taras khakein pehla mouka dehi detein
Hai. So cadet sahani we start with u!

UD:- Me…Ok…

( he took one end of his odhani and throw it back)





Edited by jivora - 13 May 2007 at 11:10pm

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mind blowing i am the first one but plz update soon

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hey
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it was damn gud.plz continue soon

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