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Hey friends,

We friends have written a combination fanfic....its not over yet.....but we plan to get it over soon....but I am sending you all some beginning parts of it.....and then will constantly update!

I will get a permit from all the writers here, so no need to block this thread!

But you all, my dear readers, promise me loooooads of comments!
Cheers,
JIV

Here we go..................

Its the day of Marriage btwn Ritu n Rajveer...Ritu niche aati hai n she is looking fabulous.(she always do) Yudi whistles...n Huda goes forward n takes her hand and says....kash meri mammi ji ne mujhe kuch saal pehle paida kiya hota....To mera 100% chance hota......
Ritu blushes and says...Tab bhi shayad baat nahin banti...Hearing this Alekh n Yudi giggled....
Pooja n Shalini come n take ritu to the mandap....
Naina is in her room crying...and rajveer is already sitting in the mandap near the pandit ji....He looks at Ritu..but didnt respond...
B.C. n Major Nair are sharing a Drink....Simran is wearing a salwar kammez for the first time after taking help from pooja... Yudi comes n stands besides her...and says....Pata nahin Dad meri shaadi karwane ki kab sochenge...Waise aap aaj bahut achhi dikh rahin hain Mam...
Simran smiles...and says..Just 2 things...Thank u and...I know that...
Pandit ji says...Mahurat nikla ja raha hai....
then BC says... aap shuru kijiye panditji...
then panditji starts reciting slokas....and the marriage begins...
Ritu is sitting next to Rajveer... She is very happy n glances at Rajveer...But Rajveer doesnt react n ....looks around at the crowd as if he is searching someone...
On the other hand Naina is crying with a photo of Naveen in her hand..."Bhaiya I am very very sorry....Main apna makshad poora nahin kar saki....I am sorry...Aaj apki GirlFriend bhi kisi aur ki ho gayi... Aapko barbaad karne waali aaj aapke Best friend ko bhi barbad karne ja rahi hai......"....
Panditji asks Ritu n Rajveer to stand up for taking pheres...Ritu stands up immediately but rajveer apne hi khayalon mein khoya hua tha n didnt hear the pandiji..Then Dr Shaloni asks Raj again to stand up..rajveer listens and stands up....They started taking pheres.....

Then...naina enters the hall n looks at the couple..Tears rolled down from her eyes but usne rumal se pocha aur apne dil ke haal ko chupane ki koshish ki...
Then Huda saw her n comes forward n says...Lo..Phoolan Ji Kahan thi aap?? Sajne Mein itna time to dulhan ko bhi nahin lagta...
Nania...Nahin Bas thodi tabiyat kharab thi...
Huda...Pehle bataya hota..To main khud tumhare liye Doctor le aata...
Naina...Nahin Ab iski koi zaroorat nahin..Main thik hoon... [kirti...till here]

fter tht hudda says-phoolan sorry yaar maine tujh par aur capt par yuhi shak kiya lekin ab na apni mummy ki kasm main na tera saath hamesh nibhaunga.
naina-its ok hudda meri jindagi mein saccha pyar shayad likha hi nahi tha aur phir mere best fren ko bhi to mere upar vishwas nahi tha...aur phir pandit ji bolte hain "vivah sampann hua"after this naina started crying cpt.rajveer aata hain aur kehta hain"naina tumhe bhi koi saccha pyar karne wala milega don worry"naina hudda ki taraf dekhti hain aur bolti hain ki maine kuch kuch hota hain mein suna hain ki pyar dosti hain
hudda said-phoolan apni bhanso ki kasam tune ekdum sahi suna hain aur next day hudda n naina barista cofee peene jaate hain....[gr8peeyush]

Then...Huda offers coffee to naina..Naina is not in a good mood....
To change her mood Huda asks her to go out for a movie...But naina says.....nahin yaar Tum jao...Mood nahin hai...
Huda gets angry as he was trying so hard to make her happy but she didnt cooperates...
So he says....Abhi Woh Captain Rajveer aur Ritu mam kya kar rahe honge???
Shayad Honeymoon jaane ki planning...Kyun phoolan?? tujhe kya lagta hai??Woh captain ab wapas KMA ayega??
Mujhe to lagta hai ki woh ab kisi shaant se jagah mein ja kar apni biwi ke haat ka khana khayega???
Naina looks at him in disgust and says.....[kirti]

"SHUT UP HUDA! TU MUJHE DISGUST KARTA HAI. I HATE YOU!"
Huda- arre naina..... relax yaar. tujhe kya problem ho gayee? Ritu maam aur capt. sir ab shaadi shuda hai. Pati patni hai. Woh ek dusre ke saath honeymoon jaaye, romance kare, tujhe kya?
Naina- (tears well up in her eyes) Kya problem hai mujhe? KYA PROBLEM HAI? (now she is screaming so loudly that the whole cafe is listening) SUN PHIR. MEIN CAPT SE PYAAR KARTI HOON. I LOVE HIM DAMN IT! [ayeshacassim]

everyone becomes silence
huda is stunned after hearing this..
naina goes back 2 her room n cries by seein raj's photo"sir kash ajj app mere sath hote"
this side it shows ritu's sittin on her bed c is lukin awesom raj is sittin outside the room and suddenly he feels as if sumone is thinkin of him(naina)
he enters d room n sees ritu
ritu smiles
raj sits near her n says "dr mishra app janti hai maine ye shaadi kyun ki main aapse pyar nahi karta lenkin majburi main mujhe karna pada mein appki bahut ijat karta hoon "
"mujhe lagta hai pehle hame achaa dost banna chahiye"
so "hi ritu i am rajveer u can call me raj"
ritu n raj talk a while then raj takes his blanket and walk out of the room
ritu is a bit dissapointed.................[divya]

to come more closer to capt. rajveer ritu plan for a honey moon at darjeling. Capt. ravjeer agrees to it n then both of 'em take their flight to darjeling. On the other hand major Bhargav returns to KMA n lt seemed none of the cadets were happy wit tat. major bhargav with out wastin time goes to the girls hostel 2 meet naina.
naina(in shock) says :"good morning sir ap KMA main."
major bhargav says:"good morning cadet singh.kyon ki abhi KMA main ko bhi senior teacher nahin hain is lia military board ne muchi yahain bheja hain lekin lagtahai mujhe dek kar apko khushi nahi hui. kahin ap mujhe bhul to nahin gai cadet singh."
naina says:" ap ko bhul jaun aisa to kabhi nahin hoga. Capt. rajveer se harne ke bad to apka chehera dekhne layak tha . wos chehere ko main kyasa bhul sakti hun.
major bhargav says:"koi batnahi cadet singh is bar eysha kuch nahin hoga. Isbar apki the the the favorite mentor capt. rajveer ap ko bachane nahin ain ge. Ab apko KMA se left right left karbake bahar nekhal ne main muche koi promlem nahin hogi. Isbar sirf ap aur main lets see cadet singh ap akele dusman ka samna kaise karte hain."
naina says:"dusman ka mukabla to tab kiya jata hain jab bo imandari se lade per ap toooo.."
majar bhargav says:" ok. now i want you to inform all your friends that major bhargav is back and i want all the cadets to report at main ground at 1200 hrs"
At KMA ground
huda say 2 Y.D:"oye yudia ye mugambo chapal khane KMA bapas kyon a gaya
Y.D says: dude agar muche reson pata hota to main us reason ko khatam kar deta.
aleke says:" kehte haina ki jab gedar ki moth ati hai to bo sehar ki taraf bhag ta hai.[saurav]

Udhar...rajveer ka darjeeling main mann nahin lag raha tha n therefore Ritu tries to cheer him up a bit...But all in vain...One day Ritu wore a beautifull saree n dressed herself in a new style..tied her hair in a bun...n was looking very gorgeous...but raj didnt look at him either...So ritu got angry and said...
Raj tumhari problem kya hai??? Kyun tum mujhse itne door bhagte ho??? I am ur wife....
Rajveer... Dekho Ritu mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe wapis KMA jaana chahiye...Un logon ko meri zaroorat hai..
Ritu...KMA KMA KMA...Har waqt KMA..Tum yahan bhi to naukri kar sakte ho...Phir KMA main kya rakha hai?? Naina RIGHT??
Raj....Dekho Ritu...Aisa kuch bhi nahin hai...tum bilkul galat samajh rahi ho..
Ritu...Main theek samajh rahi hun Mr.rajveer Sikhawat... Main janti thi ki aapka aur naina ke beech nazayaz sambandh the...Lekin phir bhi..maine aap se shaadi kar li.
Ye sun ke rajveer bahut gussa ho jata hai....and he SLAPS Ritu...and leaves the room[kirti]

SLAP! Naina slaps Huda..... He just said something that had made her mad with rage. He said that she and Raj were having a najayaz rishta in front of the whole cafe. With tears streaming down her cheeks she runs away and keeps running as though trying to run away from her fate...... her life.

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Ritu Runs into the balcony. she had thought that Rajveer would forget naina after getting her, would start loving her.... but no... she had been wrong.... Rajveer would always be Nainas and nothing she would do would ever change it. He would never forget her....

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she would never forget him and she knew that she would never be able to fall in love with anyone else, least of all Huda whom she loathed more than anyone else. Perhaps if she had been quicker in realising her love for Raj, in admitting her love, perhaps it would be naina and raj's honeymoon and not Ritu-raj's. perhaps.....

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Perhaps he was destined to lose all who were close to him, thought Rajveer. first naveen and now naina.... his life was worse than hell..... and now it had been just 12 days to his wedding and he and Ritu had decided to get a divorce.....

I WISH YOU WERE HERE WITH ME...... Naina and Raj said at the same time, sitting miles away from each other, sobbing into their hands
[ayeshacassim]

Wow...How nice lines....Ok let me continue...
Raj realizes that it was not good on his part to slap Ritu...So he goes to the balconi n says......
Ritu....I am sorry...Main janta hoon ki maine abhi abhi bahut galat kaam kiya hai...I am sorry ...Please mujhe maaf kar dena.....Main itna gusssa ho gaya tha ki mujhe kuch samajh main nahin aaya... Ritu--- Its Ok Raj..Shayad main bhi kuch jyada bol gayi..Tum theek kahte the...Humein KMA wapis jaana chahiye...And she hugs him... But Raj use gale nahin lagata...
So the next morning the y go back to KMA....Brigadear Chandok had been already notified of their arrival..So hea gives them a grand welcome....and says....Welcome back Mr n Mrs Shikhawat.....Aap dono apne pehle post pe kaam kar sakte hain...Mujhe khusi hui ki aap dono KMA me waapis aana chahte hain.....Raj--Yes Sir.. Humein pata chala ki KMA ke bina hum kitne adhure the...
So the went to their respective rooms....Shalini goes to Ritu's room and asks...Kya haal hain aapke??? waise Honeymoon Kaisa tha?? Zara humein bhi to bataiye?? Humein bhi to pata chale ki aakhir Rajveer jitne romantic dikhte hain waise hain bhi ya nhain????...
Ritu kuch nahin bolti...But she sobbs a bit..n shalini comes and asks....Kya hua??? Mujha batao kya hua??...Ritu...Kuch nahin...aur kya hoga...Rajveer abhi tak naina ko nahin bhoole....
Shalini...Oh..I see...Unhe thoda waqt lagega...Unhe thoda waqt do...sab theek ho jayega...Dont worry...
Aur is taraf... Naina ko kisi ne bataya ki rajveer sir wapis aa gaye hain...To woh khushi se jhoom padi...Aur woh daud daud ke..bhaag bhaag ke....rajveer sir ke kamre main aa gayi...Rajveer apna samaan rakh raha tha....She knocks...Come in..says rajveer...
She comes n rajveer looks at her...They both look at each other for 2 minutes..But these minutes seemed to go on forever..Bothe continued gazing into each others eyes...Back Groun Music---Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna..from Dil To pagal hai...And then...The come forward and the both run to be in arms of each other and cry.......[kirti]
they feel in like heaven...like eternity...they forget everything..and want to be in each others arms forever...
Naina at last starts the coversation...main aapse kuch kehna chahti hoon sir..
raj ...Kuch mat kaho naina..
Naina...Aaj main ye kah klar hi rahungi sir..Mujhe ye pehle hi kah dena chahiye tha...Par maine bahut der kar di..Mujhe mat rokiye...
Aapke jaane ka baad pata chala..Ki maine kya kho diya hai..tab mujhe pata chala ki..Aap hi the jo mera har waqt khayal rakhte the..aap mere sukh aur dukh dono main saath the...Aur tab mujhe pata chala...Ki main aapse kitna pyaar karti hoon...
Yes sir..I LOVE YOU..I love u very very much....
Rajveer holds her arms and sayss...ye sun ne ke liye main taras gaya tha naina...I love u too..Main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon...Then he kisses her on her forehead n when the depart.....
HUDA and RITU were together in the door..Looking at them......[kirti]
but ritu woke frm a hoorible dream
she thought 4 sm while and thn went 2 wash her face!
but it was true
naina and raj were both 2gethr!
sudnly raj realid dat naina shud leave..
as her exms were approachng!
but as naina wnt 2 hr room
pooja gave hr a gud news dat
maj bharagav had postd again becoz raj was thr!
and finally exms approachd as naina got raj
atleast in othr way round so hr prepartns
was superb and nobdy can evr compete her
she was sure 4 dat and dats y she helpd pooja too.....


exms got ovr now 4 da results...[exams...ovr.ovr.over]

The results came the same day as Ritu and Rajs divorce. Ritu had been caught as a spy and had been arrested. So ritu and rajs divorce had been very easy. A after the divorce, when raj was giving naina extra lessons (ya rite! saath rehena ka bahana, more like it!) he confessed his love for her and she said that she loved him too. but they decided to keep it a secret till the results came out and naina passes out of the academy and becomes a officer from a cadet. then no one can object to their love. now the results were comming out and naina's fingers were crossed........[ayeshacassim]

She got distinction in all her grades and got the best cadet's award.Huda,pooja,aalekh,ali and yudi also passed with gud grades.All were very happy they were discussing about their grades when raj enters."Raj so cadet naina ah singh congratulation u got the best cadet award".As naina was coming towards him she started blushing and pooja understood everything.So she interupts them by saying sir we all passed with gud grades congratulate us also (and starts laughing)[happiness]

Nanina looked down...and now, Aalekh was adding one plue one....

"So cadets, all set for a 6week vacations....before resuming your duties...at your respective postings?", asked Raj.

"YESSIRE!", said all of them together...and then all of them burst out laughing.....

"Sir, humain posting kahan mil sakti hai?", asked Ali.

"Woh to kehna mushkil hai, abhi to naya batch saari academies se niklega...par baaki saari academies main results intne achhe nahin rahe.....KMA stundents ko important posting di jaati hai....aur...."

"aur kya sair.....", Pooja questioned!

"....aur takreeban saare alag alag hote hain...key positions KMA passouts ko milti hain...."

They knew what he meant.....

.....that they will be posted at different locations in the country....

"....arre...to aaj ke baad milna mushkil...", Pooja already had tears in her eyes....

"Oye Panjaban....yun gana-jamuna mat baha....yeh to fauji ki zindagi hai.....hum contact main rahenge naa yaar..."

"..apun ko to yahan paheli baar dost mile....apun to dil main hi lehke jayaga sabko!", Aalekh got emotional.

"Oye Phoolan, yeh saada quaidi to emotional ho raha hai.....oye beer bar, yeh soch ki nayi jagaa....naye nazare....nayi kudiyaa....", Huda made a dreamy face...

"Nautanki....", Aalekh gave a fake smile...but Naina was sure she saw a tear in her eyes....

Nain had a better idea....

"Chalo ek deal kartain hain.....in chhuttiyon ke baad, duty resume karne se pahele.....hum fir milenge....ek baar....yahin....ambala main.....aur do din tak ek saal ki yaadain bator lenge....jinko le kar hum apne farz par laut sakein!"

"Fantastic Idea....!"

"Yeh badi pate ki baat ki aapne Naina!"

So all of them decieded to meet up once before they resumed their duties....

Next day, Ali and Pooja took a train to Kapurthala...Yudi's parents picked him up early in the morning! but, Huda had a double seat, occupied by an unwanted visitor. Mummiji hadnt forgttn her sonny Aalekh, and had invited him over for the hols....

Naina made her way to the bus station....

She went to the ticket counter....

"Nainital Single please...."

"75 Rupees Madam!"

She paid the money clunched the ticket in her hand and waited for the bus....

The bus came and Naina found herself a window seat....The bus was jamm packed...and no seat vacant!

The bus jerked into motion....and she was leaving ambala.....

She closed her eyes...and pictured them moments that had changer Naina Singh forever....

....She had walked into KMA with a mission to prove her brother innocent.....

....huda entered her room in the middle of the night...

....when she was expelled from the academy....

....rajveer teaching her dance.....

.....freasher's ball....

....she left the academy for her father...and aalekh and the gang came in to take her back.....

....major bhargav....telling her to shoot at her brother's picture....

....Aalekh consoling her as bhargav harrassed her...

...rajveer hugging her after her psychoanalytic test....

..she and rajveer running towards each other as they were named mentor and protegee....

......rajveer closing his eyes under the 20kh weight...

....that night in the camp....when they fell into the mud....

..huda in the santa clause dress....

........huda rajveer fight.....

.....ritu's announcement on the intercom.....

...rajveer and naina in the restaurant looking at navin-ritu picture....

.....yudi trying to kill himself....

...........raj telling her about navin's death.....

.....those moments...when naina saw rajveer and ritu getting married....when she yelled at huda in the cafe.....

....those extra classes....bliss.....

....ritu's arrest....navin's case reopened....proven innocent...

.......raj on his knees.....confessing.....their hug.....

....last day...results....award....

....and the goodby.....

she felt a burden off her heart....soo many things had happened....in last 2yrs...

When she felt that the passenger next to him was sitting a bit too close to her....she felt awkward....she moved....

...in some minutes...the passenger too moved closer.....she mover in again...and pulled her legs towards herself...but the passenger still touched her....

...suddenly in some minutes she felt a had going around her waist....She was angery....she yelled...

"HEYeeeeeee..................", her voice trailed.....as she saw the passenger...who was sitting next to her......

"Aaaaaap.........."......

"Shhhhhhhh....'aap' wahan....KMA main.....yahan to...."

She blushed.......[jiv]

......so....we go on and on........................wait and read more.....we will soon update!........and dont forget to scrap back....to leave us soooo many comments!



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Great part.......

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