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K3G- Pg 6. Ak's arguments,Angad's rules (Page 4)

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Posted: 18 May 2007 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Thanks Neha, but where is everyone else? I neeedd wayyyy moree comments than that ppl. Tongue
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Haha Sneha is one smart child coming up with plans and she's only four. Great job. continue soon.
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aww that was so cute!!!!!!!!!!!! loved the update! cont. soon!
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great job. but that part was soo short. plz cont soon.
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woooooooooooow!so snehas plan works out!!!!
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3rd Part
It's around 5:pm and Angad comes home. He is a bit surprised to see Kripa still there.
Angad: ahem, Miss. Sharma, u still here?
Kripa looks at Sneha for help.
Sneha: yes papa, aunty is gonna stay with us from now on.
Angad: What? No Way, why... why u wanna keep her here?
Sneha with a puppy face: Well I am usually alone at home and I have no one to play with or anything, Ur busy dating, flirting or making new girlfriends everyday....
Kripa tries harddd to control her laughter.
Kripa thought: Itni choti si bachi knows abt dating, flirting and what not?? omg... LOL LOL
Angad a bit startled: I.. Do..n..ot... flir..tt..
Sneha: Whatever papa, I don't care, I want aunty to stay with us.
Angad: I said No.
Sneha: Well I said yes.
Sneha-Angad start arguing and it seems like eternity. Angad is just way too stubborn to lissen to anything and same case with Sneha, since she is his daughter.
Sneha thinks to herself: He won't agree like this. Now Part 2 of the plan.
Sneha so close to tears(fake tears): Papa, I fe..el, (she sniffs).. So lo.nel..y, an..dd u..r..al..way..sss busy with.. wo...rk and stu..ff.. I don'tt have.. any..one....
Kripa gets a bit sad(she is unaware that they are fake tears).
Angad gets upset too and he tries to talk as politely he can: Sneha, But try to understand..
Sneha in a rude way: NO! why am i the one evrytime who should understand thingss? Ur odler than me and u should be the one understanding things, not ME...
Angad is stunned by her behaviour. She always talks to him with respect even if she is angry.
Angad tries to make her understand, but Nothing seems to work.
At last sneha says(what she doesn't wanna say and it wasn't the part of her plan): U HAVE ALWAYS KEPT ME AWAY FROM MY MOM, I DONT KNOW A THING ABT HER, AND ALL U DO IS MAKE NEW GIRLFRIENDS, AND ENTERTAIN THEM.
Angad's eyes burn with anger and he raises his handShocked but stops it in midair.
Sneha gets scared a bit shaken too, and kripa is too stunned to react.
Sneha just runs out of the room with kripa following her quietly.

Hours pass by, and Angad goes to sneha to apologize.(aww)
Angad: uhh, I, I.. am .. sorry..
Sneha just turns away from him.
Angad: Hey sneha, i didn't mean too, but u were being rude!
Sneha just gives him an evil look.(LOL)
Angad: Alright, so wat can I do for my sweety so she will forgive me?
Sneha with attitude: Just let Aunty stay, and then I will forgive u.
Angad and Kripa surprised. Angad is like, "I just raised my hand on her, and she is back to her normal self... Thats pretty abnormal"
Kripa is like "omg, wat kind of kid is she"...
Angad gives Kripa an evil look and then says: Fine aunty can stay.
Kripa to herself: Aunty? DID HE JUST CALL ME AUNTY!!!!
Angry
Sneha: yaay...
Sneha hugs and thanks him and Angad leaves
Kripa: Hey sneha, r u ok?
Sneha: umm yeah, wats wrong with me?
KripA: u were crying awhile ago?
Sneha: No aunty, they were just fake tears?
Kripa shocked: Wat?? They were?? Omg, ur sucha good... actoress.... man i thought they were real..
Sneha shakes her head: No aunty, I am not the crying type, but papa did scare me a little when he raised his hand, but that's okay..
Kripa smileS: Ur a very cute kid.
Sneha: thank you, ok aunty i need ur help...
Kripa: for wat?
Sneha: u no papa always makes new girlfriends, and stuff, but these days he is getting in a serious relationship with this witch Angry , I want her to stay away from papa.. so can u plzz help me?
Kripa: Sure, who is this witch anyway?
Sneha: You will know soon, she is coming here tomorrow to stay, Angry
Kripa: ok ok, i will help you in getting rid of the witch ok?
And they spend rest of the evening planning some tricks to play on "THE WITCH"...

Preview: New Entry.
Sneha-Kripa start their tricks so they can get rid of "The Witch."


Plz doo comment guyzzz! Tongue

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 19 May 2007 at 7:59pm
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how cute...that kid is smart LOL
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Haha Sneha knows how to get what she wants. Continue soon.

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