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K3G- Pg 6. Ak's arguments,Angad's rules (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 May 2007 at 11:14am | IP Logged
great intro
plz cont soon
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Posted: 08 May 2007 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
interestin idea.
cant wait to read the actual story
cont soon.
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 11:24am | IP Logged
First Part
Kripa: Ow my head hurts like h*ll. She puts her hand on her forehead and realizes there is a band aid covering her head. She tries to get up when she feels someone's hand on her shoulder.
"Relax, Lie Down.."
Kripa does as she is told.
She opens her eyes and sees a young, handsome guy with chocolate brown eyed and rich brown hair standing beside her.
"My, he sure is good looking." She thought to herself.
"Umm how did I get here?" She asked looking arnd the room.
"Hi, I am Angad. Angad Khanna." and he puts his hand forward.
Kripa shakes it.
Kripa: I am kripa. Kripa Sharma.
Angad: Nice to meet you.
Kripa: Thanks. Now back to my original question. How did I landed up here?
Angad grinned.
Kripa confused: What's so funny? Confused
Angad: Welll I was driving by and it was heavily raining. You were unconsious and...
All of a sudden krpa remembers how in Hindi movies and ddramas when girls get unconsious, the guyz take advantage of it.
She yells at him and starts crying: Omg, U F****n Raped me..
Angad confused: Huh? what?
Kripa starts crying even more.
Angad still confused: Why would I rape u? Now Plz stop crying and lissen to me.
Kripa gets mad: wats there to lissen? hai mein barbaad ho gaye and she hits her head.
She gets up from the bed with lots of force, ignoring her pain and starts tugging at Angad's shirt.
Angad: WOMAN, LEAVE ME.
Kripa: Why did u do this to me?
Angad: AHHH, SHARMA.. WILL U ATLEAST LISSEN TO ME.
He pushes her away from him and continues.
Angad: Like I was saying, I was driving and I saw u running as fast as a speeding bullet and u hit my car. You fell unconsious and I didnt no where else to take u so I brought u here.
Kripa claps her hands: Wow, what a grt excuse to sa....
Angad: Angry Angry god ur sucha.... nvm... first of all when ppl rape some one, they never sympathise with them and second of all, I am nothing of that kind, I am a flirt and that too a harmless one. He finishes off coolly.
Sneha has been in the door way watching the entire and she gets confused.
Wat is a rapist? She thought to herself.
Sneha: Aunty, Papa is right. I was with him.
Papa? Papa? Those words rang in Kripa's ears. How could a 20 year old, atleast he looked 20 yrs old to her be possibly be a dad?
Angad snaps his fingers bringing kripa back to Earth.
Angad coolly: Don't u think u owe me an apology?
Kripa: For wat?
Angad: For calling me a r... He looks at sneha who is still standing at the doorway.
Angad: Sneha go to ur room, Sneha obeys.
Angad cont: For calling me a rapist ofcourse.
kripa feels embarrassed: Um, I a.am.. sorr..y.. actually i was just scared and err my brain sorta stopped working at that time.
Angad: I thoght so.
kripa ignores wat he said and looks outside the window. It is raining heavily and she has no where to go. Atleast she doesnt wanna go bak to her house where jerks lived and force her to do stuff...
Angad: Umm, Well i think u can stay here for tonight..
Saying that he walks away to Sneha's room.
Angad: Sneha, I am gonna be late tonight. Take care of ur self, and dont mess up the house, okie?
Sneha: papa, r u going on a date again? dont u think ur getting too old to date?
Angad raises his brow.
Angad: how old are u again?
Sneha shakes her head annoyed: Oofoo, old ppl seem to have a bad memory. Papa I am 4 years old. and she shows her 4 fingers.
Angad: Will u stop calling me old? and it doesnt seem like ur 4 cuz of the way u talk Ouch
Sneha coolly: What ever.


I am really sorry if I bored you guyz with this part... But I will still expect some comments/suggestions... Embarrassed

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 09 May 2007 at 3:41pm
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 11:49am | IP Logged
awww that was shooooooooooooo shweeetttt!
sneha is sooooooooo sweet...

lolz kripa darling slow down!!!

loved it..
cont soon........ Clap
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Awesome ff....great start.
loved it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
lmao lmao lmao
omgggg
great fan ficcc
i love sneha!!! hahahaha
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Awwwwwwwwwww.. dat was a really cute part... luved kripas expression esp da hai main barbaad ho gayi loll LOL N sneha was really cute that she showed him 4 fingers...Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Embarrassed
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
aww sneha is chooo chweet
anyways gr8 part
continue soon



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