K3G- Pg 6. Ak's arguments,Angad's rules

Hi guyz

This is Marium and I am writing an another AK ff today... This is the second new AK ff i am posting today😳

In this ff, Angad already has a 4 year old daughter named Sneha.
She doesnt know who her mother is and never asks her dad abt it(its not 
not kripa) 

Main Characters

Angad Khanna: At the age of 26 he is a successfull bussiness man.
He has everything in the world except...( u will know later)

 

Kripa Sharma: She is 24 years old, a middle class and a sweet natured girl.
She is extremely hyper and loud and she strongly believes in love.

 

Sneha Khanna: Angad's 4 year old daughter.

She is very cute and also very fun loving

http://www.indiantelevision.com/images9/kasauti_sp.jpg 
(This is Sneha's pic and for some weird reasons the pic won't show up)

 

Gauri Kapoor(played by Karam Apna Apna's Gauri): Angad's horrible past.

past

 

As u can see I didn't give too much info abt the characters and
abt the ff.. I dont wanna give away too much and I want u guyz
to figure things out as u read😳

 

 

Plz leave ur comments guyz.. And I want actual comments, not just "cont soon",
or "awesome stuff".. I really need feedback😃

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 16 years ago

aweosme fan fic! i love the intro! it sound interesting and the part about angad having a daughter its kind of weird but anyways 😳 i wonder who is gauri sneha's mom? 😕 post the first part soon! 😛 Edited by prem-mukti#1 - 16 years ago

nice intro continue soon 👏 👏 👏

great intro.. very interesting.. when i opened this topic i thought i'd be like the movie k3g but its so not... thats good.. that way we'd know whats up before anything hapens.. this way we dont and it keeps interesting.. 😛

cant wait to read more!!!

Promo: Angad: Hun, take care of ur self, I will be late tonight.
Sneha shakes her head annoyed: Papa, r u going on a date again? Don't u think ur getting too old to date?

I just need few more comments and next part will be up by tomorrow Inshallah... 😳 😳

and thanks to all those ppl who commented. I really appreciate them. 😉

gr8 concept!!! im guessin gauri is snehas mom!!

great intro
plz cont soon

interestin idea.
cant wait to read the actual story
cont soon.

First Part
Kripa: Ow my head hurts like h*ll. She puts her hand on her forehead and realizes there is a band aid covering her head. She tries to get up when she feels someone's hand on her shoulder.
"Relax, Lie Down.."
Kripa does as she is told.
She opens her eyes and sees a young, handsome guy with chocolate brown eyed and rich brown hair standing beside her.
"My, he sure is good looking." She thought to herself.
"Umm how did I get here?" She asked looking arnd the room.
"Hi, I am Angad. Angad Khanna." and he puts his hand forward.
Kripa shakes it.
Kripa: I am kripa. Kripa Sharma.
Angad: Nice to meet you.
Kripa: Thanks. Now back to my original question. How did I landed up here?
Angad grinned.
Kripa confused: What's so funny? 😕
Angad: Welll I was driving by and it was heavily raining. You were unconsious and...
All of a sudden krpa remembers how in Hindi movies and ddramas when girls get unconsious, the guyz take advantage of it.
She yells at him and starts crying: Omg, U F****n Raped me..
Angad confused: Huh? what?
Kripa starts crying even more.
Angad still confused: Why would I rape u? Now Plz stop crying and lissen to me.
Kripa gets mad: wats there to lissen? hai mein barbaad ho gaye and she hits her head.
She gets up from the bed with lots of force, ignoring her pain and starts tugging at Angad's shirt.
Angad: WOMAN, LEAVE ME.
Kripa: Why did u do this to me?
Angad: AHHH, SHARMA.. WILL U ATLEAST LISSEN TO ME.
He pushes her away from him and continues.
Angad: Like I was saying, I was driving and I saw u running as fast as a speeding bullet and u hit my car. You fell unconsious and I didnt no where else to take u so I brought u here.
Kripa claps her hands: Wow, what a grt excuse to sa....
Angad: 😡 😡 god ur sucha.... nvm... first of all when ppl rape some one, they never sympathise with them and second of all, I am nothing of that kind, I am a flirt and that too a harmless one. He finishes off coolly.
Sneha has been in the door way watching the entire and she gets confused.
Wat is a rapist? She thought to herself.
Sneha: Aunty, Papa is right. I was with him.
Papa? Papa? Those words rang in Kripa's ears. How could a 20 year old, atleast he looked 20 yrs old to her be possibly be a dad?
Angad snaps his fingers bringing kripa back to Earth.
Angad coolly: Don't u think u owe me an apology?
Kripa: For wat?
Angad: For calling me a r... He looks at sneha who is still standing at the doorway.
Angad: Sneha go to ur room, Sneha obeys.
Angad cont: For calling me a rapist ofcourse.
kripa feels embarrassed: Um, I a.am.. sorr..y.. actually i was just scared and err my brain sorta stopped working at that time.
Angad: I thoght so.
kripa ignores wat he said and looks outside the window. It is raining heavily and she has no where to go. Atleast she doesnt wanna go bak to her house where jerks lived and force her to do stuff...
Angad: Umm, Well i think u can stay here for tonight..
Saying that he walks away to Sneha's room.
Angad: Sneha, I am gonna be late tonight. Take care of ur self, and dont mess up the house, okie?
Sneha: papa, r u going on a date again? dont u think ur getting too old to date?
Angad raises his brow.
Angad: how old are u again?
Sneha shakes her head annoyed: Oofoo, old ppl seem to have a bad memory. Papa I am 4 years old. and she shows her 4 fingers.
Angad: Will u stop calling me old? and it doesnt seem like ur 4 cuz of the way u talk
Sneha coolly: What ever.


I am really sorry if I bored you guyz with this part... But I will still expect some comments/suggestions... 😳 Edited by anu-pre4eva - 16 years ago