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~**Jaan-E-Maan**~ Lktff P: 10 pg:6

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Here i m going to have index for all my story parts

 

 

Part 1: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=1 &#10401649

Part 2: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=2 &#10422700

Part:3 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&T PN=3&#10452295

Part:4 http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=4 &#10609266

Part:5 http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=5 &#10826829

Part:6 http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=5 &#10826829

Part:7 http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=5 &#10826829

Part:8 http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=5 &#10826829

Part: 9 http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=6 &#11213083

Part: 10  http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=613866&TPN=6

Hey Guys I always wanted to write a fanfic of Laksh & Krishna Tulsi, but never did it so today I gathered courage & thoughts to write it…..

 

In my fanfic Nandini & Ganga never left SN. Also Manthan & Bhoomi have a really positive character. They both have been changed, they also have no problems with Nakul…..

Laksh knows that he loves kt but had never dare to confess it, Kt also loves Laksh but they both have never confessed it to eachother…..

Ganga, Nandini and Damini knows that something fishy is going on between Laksh & Kt, so they always tries to bring them together….

love

unnati



Edited by unnati72003 - 02 July 2007 at 1:37pm

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Part 1:

A fine new and peaceful morning at SN. Birds are  chirping in the sky, a nice breeze blowing all around SN. Everyone is busy doing the arrangements for a puja except our cute, handsome and smart Laksh….

 

Scene sift to laksh's room, he just took shower and come out ruffling his wet hair…(he is in towel) he sees his clothes are on the bed taken out by ganga…

 

L: yeh mom bhi na…..[takes the clothes and changes in them and goes towards mirror, to comb his hairs while doing that] Hummmm……not bad Laksh  humm….Handsome?…nahi…chal cute…nahi nahi ….aur bhi kuch…..

 

A voice from behind…."PAGAL"..Laksh all in shock turns anround to see who was that…and it was…Ganga….

 

G: tu cute aur handsome to hai lekin thoda sa Pagal bhi hai..

L: mom…aap bhi na..

Ganga and laksh both laughs…

G: chal ab puja ke liye dair ho rahi hai..arre haaan laksh ek kaam karega…?

L: kya mom..?

G: woh punditji ka phone nahi lag raha hai to tum ja kar unhe inform kar de na…

L: mom plzz…mai nahi…aap kisi aur ko bhej dijiye na plz…

G: theek hai to [raises her eyebrow] mai KT ko Nakul ke saath bhej deti hu…

L: [thinks to himself] ye accha moka hai aaj mandir mai hi kt se baat karlunga …laksh was lost in his day dreaming about how often he confess to kt how they will got out together, how he is going to flirt with kt and all that….

 

After few min ganga snaps her finger in front  of laksh's face…..

 

G: kaha  kho gaya?

L; nahi who kuch nahi bas aise hi..

Ganga give a cute smile and turns to leave but laksh stops her….

L; mom….

G: haa…

L: mom…who mai soch raha tha ki vaise bhi mai yaha bore ho raha hu..to mai….mai hi mandir chala jata hu….

G: [raises her eyebrows] acha…to thik hai..jate samay kt ko lete jana….

L: [with all the happiness on his face] ji mom….

Then ganga leave….laksh lay down on his bed and take out his wallet. It has kt's pic in it…

L: [talking to kt's pic] pata nahi mai tumse kaise kahunga ki mai tumse kitna, kitna, kitna sara pyaar karta hu…

Then takes the keys and went downstairs to find the girl who stole his heart "KT" and his searching, deep, filled with love eyes.falls on kt….

hope u all like and plz guys do comments so i can improve myself.....

love

unnati



Edited by unnati72003 - 07 May 2007 at 3:21pm
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it's realllyyy great do count. soonn.....
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Clap Clap Clap Do continue soon. It's going to be interesting to read your FF, because none of the other FF have laksh and kt as young people. They both are married in every FF. Clap
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omg omg awesome story!! LOL
he he..i kno u frm pulkitmouni.piczo.com
plz continue soon Wink
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hey thx a lot guys for ur lovely lovely comments and i will try to put up my next part soon...thx a lot guys...

love
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Posted: 07 May 2007 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
ya start......ur next part.......eager to see it... Clap Clap Clap
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omg its soooooo cute


continue soon

i loved it

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