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If I was A Princess...Edited Check Pg 2 (Page 2)

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Posted: 07 May 2007 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
wow.. this is intereseting considereing i dont read any fanfics except ak,sk,(famous tv serial couples)

this was interesting!!
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Posted: 08 May 2007 at 4:30pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by brainychild92

wow.. this is intereseting considereing i dont read any fanfics except ak,sk,(famous tv serial couples)

this was interesting!!

thnksEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 May 2007 at 4:31pm | IP Logged

Recap-

At Pria's House.

Mom-Agh!! Where is this girl? Her room is a mess!

Pa-Oh..her room? It's so clean!

Mom-YOU stay out of this! Let me call her!

Next Scene

pria's phone rings(ringtone-Hey Shona)

Pria makes a shocked face.

Pria-Oh no!!!

Trys to Turn the Cell Off. Looks back to see if Shabd or Sara are looking and see that Shabd and Sara both are looking

Pria-oh no!! both of 'em are looking!!! What do I do now??

Phone Rings again.

Shabd walks up front.Pria faces the other side.

SHabd- Oi..who are you?

Pria-I'm a little teapot short and spout....(singing)

SHabd-Your a TEAPOT?? Who the hell are you?

Pria-Continues singing.Looks back a little. 'Run for your life Pria!!!'

Shabd-Oi...dont run..!!!!I know who you are now....your the girl with the pink sneakers and red stripes...I'll catch you!!!

At the House

Ma-Argh!! She hung up

Pa-Clears thorat.

Ma-Look at all these bills!!! We are in so much debt!! I am going to divorce you if you cannot pay all this deb...

Pa-Are you threatning me?

 

 




Edited by angel_10 - 08 May 2007 at 5:00pm
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Posted: 08 May 2007 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
Will edit more if you guys like! Tongue
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Posted: 08 May 2007 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
is there any suspense so far?
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Clap

Very well written angel..!!! Big smile

Will be waiitng for the next part.... Embarrassed
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Saara COMB

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Very well written angel..!!! Big smile

Will be waiitng for the next part.... Embarrassed
thnksSmile + feel free to call me anika, or AniWink
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Wow, i enjoyed it Angel!! Waiting for more...keep up the awesome work!! Clap

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