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Posted: 06 May 2007 at 12:27pm | IP Logged

ello everyone...this is my second Fan-Fic.Its based on the Korean show Goong ( Princess Hours ),  Kasamh Se, and MaaykaTongue

Cast Of Charectors:

Main Characters:

Pria-A sweet artistic girl who attends NA (National Arts) Academy.Her life revolves around her 3 friends mom, dad, and 12 year old brother.

Shabd-A very arrogant boy. Circumstamces made him Prince. He also attends NA academy. He is hard to understand.

Sara-Shabd's only true friend. She dreams of being a very famous Dancer. She is very kind. But is also very determined. If she wants something she'll reach for it. She also attends NA academy.

Rahul-A very sweet and artistic boy. Life has been very cruel to him, but he's very strong and positive.

Other Charecters:

Pa-Pria's father. He's a house-husband. Pria gets her nature from him.

Mom-Pria's mom. She is a very strict person. She goes out to work while she leaves her husband at home to take care of the house and kids.

King Samarth- Became king with no other option. He was second born in the family. But his older brother, Rahul's father, had died of an accident 10 years ago. So he had no other option other than becoming King. He is suffering of Cancer and may die soon.

Queen Pavitra-The kings wife. She has easliy accustomed to the palace but doesen't like being queen. She is sad and is scared about the King.

Dadi-Rahul and Shabd's grandma.

Queen Shayla-The should-be-Queen.Wife of the first king and Rahul's mom. She could not bear with her husbands death and her banishment and attempted suicide. This left a deep scar in Rahul's pshyche.

Tina-Tina is one of Pria's best friends. She is a bookworm and loves singing.She is always guiding Pria and her other 2 silly friends. She leads her life with sense and logic.

Prachi- A girl who has her head in the clouds. She is a very silly girl. She dreams of marrying Prince Shabd and is constantely fighting with Sneha.

Sneha-Another girl with her head in the clouds! She also dreams of marrying Shabd. The only difference between Prachi and Sneha are that Prachi wants to be a model and Sneha an actor.

(Tina, Prachi, and Sneha all atend NA Academy)

 

 



Edited by angel_10 - 08 May 2007 at 5:20pm

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                       Chapter One

Doctor-Ma'am, the king may die any month now.

Queen-I understand. Thank you. Escorts, please.

Escorts take the doctor out.

Queen- What can we do now mama?

Dadi-Shabd.

Queen-Ji?

Dadi-uska shaadi karawo.

Queen-But woh sirf unees saal hai. He's only nineteen.

Dadi-We cannot do anything else.

Scene 2

maid-Sir. Please wake-up. It is time.

Shabd-mhmm...i'll wake-up. Give me a few minutes.

maid-but, sir....

Shabd interrups-I said a FEW MORE minutes.

maid-Yes,s..

Queen-Shabd.

Shabd-what did I say...

(slowly opens eyes.)

Queen-It's almost time for school and I'd like to speak to you.

Shabd-Bholiyein. (Talking while changing his clothes.)

Queen-You do know your dad might die anyda..

Shabd interrupts.

Shabd-Not only him but us as well. We all are living in doubt.

Queen-Yes I know. Now may I continue.

Shabd nods.

Queen-Ok. Well let me say this straight. You have to get married. '

Shabd-What?? I'm only 19.

Queen-I know. But unless you want to keep up this dynasty..

Chauffeur-Ma'am it's time we should be heading.

Queen-Sure. Shabd. We'll talk about this later.

Shabd-Ok. But are YOU choosing my bride?

Queen-It depends. If you find a bride then..

Shabd-Ok then. I'll try to find one.

Queen-Par...

Shabd walks out.

Scene 3

Pa-PRIA!!!!!! Come down!! It's time for school.

Pria-CHill out Pops!!Pa I'll take the breakfast to go. By the way, what is breakfast?

Pa-Pancakes..

Pria-Chocolate chip?

Pa nods head. Pria folds it and bites.

Pria-Bye Pa.Love you.(kisses him on cheek.)

Pa-mhmm...(munching on pancakes and reading newspaper.)

Pria starts riding her bike.

Scene 4

Tina-Pria!! It's almost time for homeroom. Yeh koyi waqt hai?

Pria-Haila meri ma! Chowwy!(makes puppy-dog face)

Tina-ARGH!!! Ab chalo!!

 

Will edit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by angel_10 - 06 May 2007 at 2:31pm

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Sneha-Haila! Woh dekho!

Prachi-Kya?

Sneha-The prince is looking at me!!

Prachi-Nahiin.He's looking at muah ofcourse!

Sneha-NO!!!

Prachi-Yes!!

Sneha-NO!!

Prachi-YESS!!!!

Tina-Oy, will you two stop???

Sneha-Prachi both-HmHH

Tina-Pria

No Reply From Pria.

Tina-PRIA!!!!!!!

Pria-Hmm..kya hai??

Tina-He's looking at you.

Pria-Kaun?

Tina-Prince Shabd.

Pria-What?

Tina-Yea.

Pria looks out window.

Shabd smiles.

Pria looks confused.

Shabd's friends: Who are you looking at mate?

They look at Pria, make a disgusted face,look at the next window and see Sara dancing.

Shabd's friends: Oh....he's probably looking at her. What a babe, nah?

Shabd-(looks disgusted)Shut up.

Walks away.

Scene 5

Pria is cleaning the floor.Shabd walks by and is looking at himself in the mirror.Pria makes a disgusted face.She walks by and drops some water on his sneakers. She makes this kind of face:Shocked. Cleans his sneakers. Rubs it.

Shabd-STOP!

Pria continues.

Shabd-I said for you to STOP!!

Pria stops.

Shabd takes off the shoes.

Shabd-I'll buy new ones.!!

Pria gets angry.

Shabd walks.

Pria-You are sooo full of yourself nah??? You idiotic JERK!!

Shabd walks close to her.

Pria think he'll kiss her and pouts her lips.

Shabd smiles. I like your guts. No girl has ever stood upto me. I like you.

Pria mutters-But I hate you.

Shabd-What was that?

Pria shakes her head.

Shabd-Yeah.... that's what I thought.

Shabd walks away.

Everyone is staring at Pria.

Pria-What are you loooking at???

Scene 6

Coming Soon.Please tell me if you likeSmile

 

 

 



Edited by angel_10 - 07 May 2007 at 1:47pm

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pria is walking from the snack shop to her Music class.

Shabd-So...will you?

Pria eavesdrops.

Sara-Im sory but Shabd I can't.

Shabd-That's Ok. It's because I rather marry someone I know instead of someone totally unknown.

Pria thinks to herself. 'Oh...so the skunk wants to marry the squirrel...hahaha...(laughts to herself.)....she's pretty good to let down the PRINCE's offer. Aww...but look..now he's sad.

At Pria's House.

Mom-Agh!! Where is this girl? Her room is a mess!

Pa-Oh..her room? It's so clean!

Mom-YOU stay out of this! Let me call her!

 



Edited by angel_10 - 07 May 2007 at 2:30pm

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Posted: 07 May 2007 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
No one likes? Ouch

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Posted: 07 May 2007 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its great yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome!
i liked it!!!! Clap

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Thanku Embarrassed

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