DESTINY + ATTRACTION (NEW RN FIC)

DESTINY + ATTRACTION (NEW RN FIC)
Hey guys...
well following most of u ... i hv decided to write a RN fic too...
provided u guys wud accept it...my story will b very different...(i hope so!!). its got lots of drama ,tragedy , fun & ROMANCE!!!
i've decided to name it..DESTINY+ATTRACTION...COZ IT PRIMARILY DEALS WID DESE 2 THINGS...!!! I'LL START IN A DAY OR TWO WID DUE PERMISSION FRM U GUYS....
btw i hope u'r not bored of RN fics..coz i jst luv dem!

CHARACTER SKETCH...
GUYS D STORY IS DIFFERENT....SO DERE R LOTS OF CHANGES..
1. RAJ, NAVEEN (ALIVE!!!),YUDI ,AALEKH ,HUDA,SHALINI ,RITU R ALL 3RD YEAR CADETS AT KMA...
2.NAINA ,NAVIN'S SIS IS DOIN MBA..& IS 2 YEARS YOUNGER TO NAVIN..
3.DERE PARENTS R DEAD...
4.SHALINI & NAVIN R IN LOVE
5.D BEST CHARACTERS IN D STORY ARE "ROMANCE" , "TRAGEDY" & "FUN"!!!!!!!

D STORY IS ABT 2 BEGIN VERY SOON...HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT!!!!!!!!

PART 1:

WELL , d story unfolds at a time wen all d cadets hv jst graduated
nd r on vacation 4 three weeks....after wich dey hv 2 report at kma
for furthur instructions....

all 7 of dem r in Navin's jeep travelling to nainital to spend
their holidays together at navin's farmhouse...

(To b imagined as a beautiful house wid a backdrop of hills nd valleys(:D))

KHALBALLI HAI KHALBALLI...(RDB) IS PLAYIN ON D RADIO....(8)
........................................................

"Raj baith jaa...kyon marne waale kaam kar raha hai yaar...we've almost
reached nainital...aur roads curve aur narrow ho rahi hai...
sit dammit!!", shouted Navin...(:X)


"Yaar navin tujhe pata hai , yaha ki hawa mein ek nasha hai, thank God,
i'm here wid u guys aur delhi mein nahi..."said raj...

"abey saale tu to ekdum naina ke maafik baat kar raha hai...."
sayin dis aalekh & navin started laughin..(:))

"so navin howz naina...tell us somethin bout her??" ritu asked

"aur kaidi tu naina ko itni acche se kaise jaanta hai?? koi chakkar
hai kya??....

"saale huda..sabki khopdi teri tarah ek hi patri par nahi chalti hai,
samjha.."alekh ne gusse se kaha...

"Arre guys plz don't start fightin again" yudi ne samjhaane ki koshish
ki

"NAINA ke baare mein main batati hun tumhe...she's an absolute delight
to b wid...innocent...stunningly beautiful..delicate...& very warm nd
loving."(:))

"arre shaalu baaki main complete karta hun na..smart...spoilt..
stubborn..naughty...aur gussa to maharani ke naak par baith ta hai.
..arre shaitan ki naani hai...she's impulsive par mujhse itna pyaar
karti hai ki mere liye jaan de bhi sakti hai aur le bhi sakti hai.
.nd even i love her a lot.." completed navin(:))
Raj started laughing " itni dynamic personality se to ab milne ki ab
mujhe bhi curiosity ho rahi hai"

"by d way navin i bet tumne naina ko bataya nahi ki we're comin in 2 hrs?.."
mocked shalini

"ahhhh...woh maine socha ki usse surprise doon..."

"apun bol raha hai ,abhi usse phone kar nahi to pitega saale.!!!"
alekh warned him

he calls her up..
"hi naina...kaisi hai?? yaar mujhe na tere haath ka khaana khaane
ka kuch zyada hi mann kar raha hai aaj"

" bhai seeda line par aao na...ab kaun sa dhakka milne waala hai
mujhe ya yun kahoon ab kaun sa bomb giraana hai??'

"woh naina...actually main 2 ghante mein farmhouse aa raha hun..aur.."

but before he could finish..
" hey dat's gr8 bhai...ab hum dono pooja ki shaadi par jaayenge.."

"woh naina ...main akela nahi aa raha..."

"hmmm lagta hai BHABHI saath aa rahi hai ya phir'AALEKH'!!!!"

"woh dono to hai hi par ...par( a little nervously) well we're seven
friends comin together..."

"WAT ???..AUR TUM MUJHE YEH BAAT AB BATA RAHE HO!!! R U INSANE BHAI...?[;X]
DO U REALISE MUJHE PREPARATION KE LIYE TIME CHAHIYE?? NAHI NAA...
TUMHAARE DIMAAG MEIN TO AISI BAATEIN AATI HI NAHI HAI
. WAT D'YA THINK I'M SNOW WHITE AUR AAP SEVEN DWARFS...WAISE I'M SURE
AAPKO SHAALU YA AALEKH NE PHONE KARNE KO KAHA HOGA..."
Naina yelled at him furiously...

"arre yaar bas bhi kar ...kaan dard ho rahe hai mere.."navin
teased her furthur

"u.. u... tum aalekh ko phone do..."


"hi aalekh ...yaar tu to samajhta hai na..tune bhi nahi bataaya...
anyway tu mere.."

but before she could complete,

"haan haan mujhe yaad tha..laa raha hun tere favourite besan ke
laddoo...aur sun.."

"don't worry mujhe bhi yaad hai tera favourite room tere liye
exclusively ready hoga...chahe bhai ko bahar road par sona pade!!"

and both of dem started laughin like maniacs..."chal bye..."

"kya baat hai aalekh bada khil khilake has raha hai?? raj asked him
"kuch nahi lagta hai aaj navin ko apna bed naseeb nahi hone waala..."he chuckled


after sumtime.....

"badi ajeeb baat hai ...d roads r wet....aur baarish ka to mausam bhi nahi hai..."said navin

"raj ,car skid ho sakti hai aur tu phir khada ho raha hai..."he continued wid his eyes on raj rather dan on d road...

.it was at dat very instant...dat yudi yells...
"NAVIN AAGE DEKH!!!"...

BUT HE'S A LITTLE TOO LATE ...A COLLISION OF D CAR SETS IT ROLLING ON D WET ROAD THROWING EVERYONE ON D ROAD EXCEPT NAVIN AND RAJ...

ROLL HOTE HOTE CAR EK CLIFF KE EDGE PE HANG HO JAATI HAI...
"RAJ ....RAJ JALDI JUMP KAR...CAR HUM DONO KA WEIGHT NAHI LE SAKTI...NEECHE KHAAI HAI..SAALE JUMP KAR NAHI TO MAIN MAROONGA"

"NAVIN TU PAAGAL HAI ...LIFE & DEATH SITUATION HAI AUR TUJHE MAZAAK SOOJH RAHA HAI...
EK TO BAAKI SAB ITNA PEECHE CHOOT GAYE KI DEY WON'T B ABLE TO SAVE US..."

Navin sum how realised ki car uske weight se tilt ho rahi hai...& he made a plan...

"sun raj ...serious haan...i'll push u out & den u'll pull me up on d road ...chal jaldi kar"

"theek hai par dhyaan se...hang on haan"

raj lands safely on d road..aur woh jaise hi navin ko haath deta hai..
car aur neeche slid hoti hai ..a little far frm raj's reach

"koi faayda nahin raj...kya yaar shaalu se shaadi karne ke pehle hi marna padega...shit man"

"paagalon jaisi baat mat kar navin haath de..."

"haath nahi pahunch raha yaar...jst do me a favour dost...tell naina i loved her &
i'll miss her..." his eyes showed his sadness behind his false smile

"navin koshish kar yaar...OH MY GOD!!...saale tu jaanta tha na ki
car tilt ho rahi hai isi liye tune mujhe bahar nikaala...u idiot!!!"

"alvida yaar...milte hai agle janam mein....BYE RAAAAAAAAAJJJJJJJJJJ!!!!!" and his joke turned to his scream

AND HIS HAND SLIPPED

NAVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!      

hey guys do tell me if u like it...else i'll discontinue.

btw i'm DIPIKA...ND am new to d forum...plzz reply guys...

Gr8 concept n gr8 start... OMG u cnt kill navin i was sooo happy tha\t this is like the only ff, where navin is alive n i wanted him alive... pls do somethin n dnt kil him\!!!!!!   

wonderful story. will wait for the next part.

wonderful story. will wait for the next part.